Comments That Make Your Day

[EmilyMiller]

I really like stories where there's an unremittingly wicked character that you can root for. Cozbi isn't a sympathetic character, and I want to love her from a safe distance.

She’s a total sweetie under the layers, upon layers, upon layers of I don’t give a fuck. I’m so privileged that @Djmac1031 let’s me write her. She’s a dream to write dialog for.

 

[EmilyMiller]

its really short if that helps

Being short always helps

 

[Djmac1031]

Being short always helps

Really not helping clarify the "does size matter?" debate...

 

[EmilyMiller]

Really not helping clarify the "does size matter?" debate...

Good things cum in… no I’m not doing that gag (double entendre wholly intentional ).

 

[Djmac1031]

She’s a total sweetie under the layers, upon layers, upon layers of I don’t give a fuck. I’m so privileged that @Djmac1031 let’s me writer her. She’s a dream to write dialog for.

Ah, but see, the reason you find her easy to write is because you've been there along the way through every story and you've paid attention to the character and truly understand who she is, not just the surface level snark she presents.

its also why ResidentMadame so perfectly captured Cozbi in the audio; she didn't just read the story but actually understood the nuances of the character.

 

[EmilyMiller]

I really like stories where there's an unremittingly wicked character that you can root for. Cozbi isn't a sympathetic character, and I want to love her from a safe distance.

From my latest (Cozbi and PennyThompson appearing with permission from their creators):

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Perhaps sensing she was not alone, the woman looked around. Penny put a hand to her mouth. Of all the shocks in a day-and-a-bit laden with surprises, this was perhaps the most astonishing. "Cozbi?!" she blurted out.

Without missing a beat, the she-demon winked and said, "Hello honey-fuck, did you miss me?"

Turning her eyes to the human version of David, she went on, "And who's the alien shape-shifter? Oh don't look so surprised, parrot beak, it's hard to kid a kidder, right?"

"Cozbi, what... what are you doing here?" asked Penny.

"Well last time was such a blast, I didn't want to miss this year's party," she replied.

"A blast? Emma nearly died, a lot of people got hurt, some harmless furries were disintegrated...!" said Penny, astonished.

"As I say, great party," grinned Cozbi. With a slight softening of her expression, she added, "But the best part was you, juicy fruit."

"Oh gosh," blushed Penny. "Um... maybe we could..."

"The message!" interjected David.

"Shut it, crab-breath!" said Cozbi with a frown.

Penny stepped between David and Cozbi defensively, trying to look fierce while also wholly failing to control the growing twinges between her legs. Her last encounter with the she-demon involved a vigorous, screaming hotel room hate-fuck, and Penny could feel herself getting wet at the memory.

"Hey, don't call him 'crab-breath' or 'parrot beak.' Those are derogatory terms!...I mean, they feellike derogatory terms..."

"Relax, Ginger Spice-Dick, I'm just teasing," drawled the she-demon. "But the other delegates are arriving, I have to..."

"Of course," said Penny, "I'm... hoping to... er... learn something. Maybe we can... um... meet up later, or tomorrow?"

"Sure sweet-flaps," Cozbi purred. "But now I've gotta try and educate this stinking rabble."

She clapped her hands and said in a loud voice, "Take a seat, and quickly before I have to barbecue anyone." With a wink at Penny, Cozbi picked up a skein of rope and started her presentation.

"Now who wants to get hogtied first?"

 

[Djmac1031]

"As I say, great party," grinned Cozbi. With a slight softening of her expression, she added, "But the best part was you, juicy fruit."

See, that line right there is Cozbi in a nutshell. An agent of chaos but also affectionate and loving and loyal.

 

[anthrodisiac]

On Always Take the Sweater, fom @BeechLeaf, who is doing a great job at making this archaeopteryx evolve blushing:
“Mayhem I was expecting, not fashion criticism as well. In fact, I was so much expecting mayhem that I forgot the site, and wasn't expecting all the sex either. Lots of quotable lines where you threw words together and they do make sense, and boy do I have to brush up my Icelandic grammar, though I worked it all out with patience and Wiktionary.”

There is no higher praise than "...you threw words together and they do make sense."

And sometimes, short and simple is exactly what you need. On Her Forest Bloom, from @TarnishedPenny:
“Wonderfully imaginative - five awed stars!”

Thanks to you both!

 

[BeechLeaf]

My words don't make much sense unless you mention that they were referencing yours in the story, which is a bit I want to preserve for posterity and future quotation in something:

Sounds like you just threw three words together and hoped no one would notice they don't make sense.

 

[anthrodisiac]

My words don't make much sense unless you mention that they were referencing yours in the story, which is a bit I want to preserve for posterity and future quotation in something:

Sounds like you just threw three words together and hoped no one would notice they don't make sense.

I'll be honest, I totally forgot about that line. That makes more sense now

Edit: For context

"But, darling, it's navy. So uninspired." The cat sighed and hummed to herself. "Oh goodness. What unholy color is this?"

She held up his Ralph Lauren Lisle Crewneck t-shirt.

"Stop going through my things!"

"I asked what color."

"Coral orange mélange," he said sulkily.

Jólakötturinn laughed. "Sounds like you just threw three words together and hoped no one would notice they don't make sense."

 

[Erozetta]

This has made it to 35 responses so far, either comments, email feedback, or private messages. Largely comments of solidarity and understanding. Which I still plan to respond to each of them, I just need some time to recover.

I'm thinking it's something that resonated considering there are only 53 votes and 1.1k views.

A Letter to my Readers - essay on suicidal ideation and depression.

 

[Erozetta]

And on the opposite side, the follow-up sex romp with nonconsensual self care (because I like the idea of being forced to be good to yourself.)

Pretty When You Cry - best read while listening to the song of the same name by VAST

 

[THBGato]

This was lovely, from awesome fellow West Country writer Claire_West on Four Weddings and a Leaving Do:

“You are an incredibly accomplished writer and you have found the way to combine erotic sex with credible, vibrant characters. I always like stories that affect me sexually as well as emotionally. Yours do. I am in awe!”

Feeling very blessed (and the incredibly moving, but very private, email I got from one of my absolute heroines shortly after this comment is also making me feel both choked up and 7 foot tall at the same time).

 

[bi_cathy]

This has made it to 35 responses so far, either comments, email feedback, or private messages. Largely comments of solidarity and understanding. Which I still plan to respond to each of them, I just need some time to recover.

I'm thinking it's something that resonated considering there are only 53 votes and 1.1k views.

A Letter to my Readers - essay on suicidal ideation and depression.

Please, don’t put pressure on yourself to respond to each of the comments and feedback. Speaking as someone who left a word there, I think you’ve said it all, and we’ve all, in one way or another, reacted to it.

But if it does help you to go through and respond, then sure. You do what works for you

 

[Jalibar62]

This is one of the first comments against Ventura Highway:

Anonymous2 years ago
"Haven’t read word one yet, but you chose to title your novella (51K) after a seventies soft rock classic. Not only do you have expect your readers to plow through the lengthy story, but your tale must live up to its title. No mean feat."


Never mind the drive-by critique of a story they haven't even read - rude - but then they never bothered to follow up!

I guess I will never know.

 

[MillieDynamite]

The money from my sales at Amazon hit my bank account on Friday, which was the best comment I've recived in a month.

 

[AStrangeDesire]

This made my day, and I'm going to need to do a follow up story

LaidbackBWC has commented on your story
Summer at Still Lake Campground
“Oh my goodness so hot! Please do more chapters exploring her kinks l Iike anal and deep throating. Loved the build up”

 

[MillieDynamite]

It's good to know what he likes so you can cater to his every whim. LOL (and a few thousand other men's whims)

This made my day, and I'm going to need to do a follow up story

LaidbackBWC has commented on your story
Summer at Still Lake Campground
“Oh my goodness so hot! Please do more chapters exploring her kinks l Iike anal and deep throating. Loved the build up”

 

[AStrangeDesire]

It's good to know what he likes so you can cater to his every whim. LOL (and a few thousand other men's whims)

Well, I believe it's actually a reference to the story where the FMC mentions she'd do those things but I decided to have a more gentle encounter instead

 

[Erozetta]

Please, don’t put pressure on yourself to respond to each of the comments and feedback. Speaking as someone who left a word there, I think you’ve said it all, and we’ve all, in one way or another, reacted to it.

But if it does help you to go through and respond, then sure. You do what works for you

my goal at the start was to respond to anyone who commented. It's a conversation I want to have with people. It's an opening I want to make. But I have people looking out for me, too, to make sure I don't overdo it. So any responses I make will be done within my ability to do so, which is extremely important for something this personal.

I left myself so fucking vulnerable with this, and I know it, lol. (this is one of those, "Oh, no, I've shared too much and made people uncomfortable, a laugh will cut the mood so add one here!" lols...)

Your words were especially kind, and I appreciated them immensely. Including these ones.

I'm doing this with a support system in place, I don't think I could otherwise. But I am being very careful with it and know I have to be.

 

[MillieDynamite]

Believe me, there's a bevy of readers who'll tell you exactly what you "should've" written, instead of what you actually wrote.

Well, I believe it's actually a reference to the story where the FMC mentions she'd do those things but I decided to have a more gentle encounter instead

 

[AStrangeDesire]

Believe me, there's a bevy of readers who'll tell you exactly what you "should've" written, instead of what you actually wrote.

Don't worry, I'm aware.

Someone has commented on your story
Kristen's Dilemma
“I just don’t get it. Why write a MC story about someone who doesn’t want to do MC. Why have these women express desire for kink and submission and then have the guy be like great, instead let’s have vanilla sex, like every boyfriend you have ever had. Why???? The guys feeling all guilty and shit IS NOT HOT!”

 

[AlinaX]

Mind Control with restraint (as opposed to restraints) is like chastity without the belt.

 

[JennyCapricorn]

Don't worry, I'm aware.

Someone has commented on your story
Kristen's Dilemma
“I just don’t get it. Why write a MC story about someone who doesn’t want to do MC. Why have these women express desire for kink and submission and then have the guy be like great, instead let’s have vanilla sex, like every boyfriend you have ever had. Why???? The guys feeling all guilty and shit IS NOT HOT!”

We need a facepalm icon

 

[AStrangeDesire]

We need a facepalm icon

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We have one, well two.