Comments That Make Your Day

[anthrodisiac]

Wow, just got my first double-dip comment!

From @Ommichron on The Goat Who Came for Christmas

“The days are getting longer, the leaves are thick on the trees and I read a winter story! (Again!) This time I REALLY read it, phrase by phrase, and once again it made me feel warm inside, happy...and sad. Jul said (more or less) that you need sorrow to have joy, and it's true. This second reading was better than the first and I shall leave myself a reminder in Google Calendar to read it again at the end of November for the warmth it brings me.Thank you!❤❤❤”

Thanks

 

[Kumquatqueen]

For the first time I've got not just one, but two comments asking for more:

Excellent writing, with some quite black humour included ! ... A Story to think about its background ! More to come, I hope !!!

Great story! 5*! Can we have another part, please?

And another 5, who has my view about any sequel: I am not sure that it wouldn't be this story with different clothes, if you see what I mean.

These are on my first and probably only attempt at NC/R, The Dark Kitchen, which also has my lowest score for a story over 750 words, at 4.1. No comments from the people who didn't like it, presumably because they'd be "But I wanted happy silly rape fantasy!", as opposed to "Dark, definitely. Oof."

 

[AStrangeDesire]

For the first time I've got not just one, but two comments asking for more:

Excellent writing, with some quite black humour included ! ... A Story to think about its background ! More to come, I hope !!!

Great story! 5*! Can we have another part, please?

And another 5, who has my view about any sequel: I am not sure that it wouldn't be this story with different clothes, if you see what I mean.

These are on my first and probably only attempt at NC/R, The Dark Kitchen, which also has my lowest score for a story over 750 words, at 4.1. No comments from the people who didn't like it, presumably because they'd be "But I wanted happy silly rape fantasy!", as opposed to "Dark, definitely. Oof."

Comments asking for "More!" rock. Nicely done!

 

[gordo12]

Just in case nobody knows what we're talking about

https://th.bing.com/th/id/OIP.rFjxipjHmTZmJ_LOkBGMygHaKA?w=200&h=200&c=10&o=6&dpr=1.1&pid=genserp&rm=2
Feathered dinosaur
Archaeopteryx is a significant prehistoric creature that lived around 150 million years ago during the Late Jurassic period in what is now southern Germany. It is often referred to as a "feathered dinosaur" and is considered a critical evolutionary link between theropod dinosaurs and modern birds, showcasing a mix of avian and reptilian traits, including feathers, sharp claws, and a scaly face.

That would be a cool costume, and the feathers would cost you an arm and a leg. But hey, fantasy over reality, eh?

 

[gordo12]

Yeah, I could never do it. But at least I figured out my fursona is an archaeopteryx if I ever get the inclination.

I mean, uh, I'm an archaeopteryx, and my fursona is human.

 

[anthrodisiac]

Just in case nobody knows what we're talking about

https://th.bing.com/th/id/OIP.rFjxipjHmTZmJ_LOkBGMygHaKA?w=200&h=200&c=10&o=6&dpr=1.1&pid=genserp&rm=2
Feathered dinosaur
Archaeopteryx is a significant prehistoric creature that lived around 150 million years ago during the Late Jurassic period in what is now southern Germany. It is often referred to as a "feathered dinosaur" and is considered a critical evolutionary link between theropod dinosaurs and modern birds, showcasing a mix of avian and reptilian traits, including feathers, sharp claws, and a scaly face.

That would be a cool costume, and the feathers would cost you an arm and a leg. But hey, fantasy over reality, eh?

Aka: freaky murder chicken.

 

[ShelbyDawn57]

Here's hoping @GrrrreatImagination finds your stories:

Such a good story.
I was so interested in finding out what happens(ed), that I kept skimming the sex scenes (!). I'm so tired, but I had to finish this.
“I had only been a girl for at most a few months, or if you wanted to get technical, only about an hour.”
I laughed at that. We all have the capacity for completely missing what’s in front of us.
Earlier in the same paragraph he said he’d been questioning his/her gender since age 5 or 6 years. So, “technically” s/he’d been a girl since at least age 5 or 6 years. Probably longer by 5-6 years, & only being able to conceptualize being ‘not what they think I am’ around 5-6.
“Nothing I said appeared to faze her.”
This caught my eye. The word “faze” has a homonym, “phase” which is used to refer to a period or time of something, i.e. going through a phase, and is also used in discussing physics & chemistry, and is also used in electricity (single phase, etc.). Given your favorite story writing category, and this story’s spin into physics, this line was particularly amusing. Grrrreat storytelling.

 

[gordo12]

A couple of nice comments overnight from ANONS??? Honestly, they're not such bad people.

Someone has commented on your story
Buckshot Ranch
“Great story, all the stars, it could be a great series. I really love to read more stories of Julie and Chaelie”
1 hour ago

Someone has commented on your story
Hidden Boss
“Wow, love it, 5 star's, really hidden gem”

 

[StrentWriter]

1959richard2 has commented on your story
Peta - The Complete Story
“Quite enjoyable story. Gave you 5 s. At first the length looked intimidating. As I started reading and continued pages and time flew by.... I recommend a story this detailed be broken into three or four chapters. It took me four days 🗓 to finish this story while reading for about an hour or more. About the mechanics of the writing, a few typos, misspelled words....Nothing big. The two years Sam was a prisoner was not clear. I was under the impression of months, not years. And at the end , was that about Jack disappearing️ Thank you for your work.

 

[Erozetta]

I can't really say much to this. I thought the essay was going to get kicked back so I didn't even know it published. I was just going to let it sit in pending forever.

I'm good. I wrote it about ten years ago and cleaned it up with some more current thoughts while removing some of the darker elements of it.

And this doesn't even include the emails I've gotten on this.


Edited to add:

To say I'm overwhelmed is an understatement. I'm planning to reach out on an individual basis and already have with some comments, but @Bainski was an immediate message to their account, and I hope they get that email soon.

I'm just in need of processing for a bit.

 

[anthrodisiac]

And so, my wave of corruption enlightment about anthros continues with @sirhugs as my latest victim person who enjoyed my story Once You Go Anthro: Ch. 01!

“You had me at "How did a guy talk to a zebra? In retrospect, I should've thought this through more. Or at all. Impulse had never been my strong suit." Then, "Take that, zebra slut." made me chortle. Fortunately between sips of coffee. Who knew that anthro sex is just as ridiculous and messy as human sex?”

 

[Rob_Royale]

Gotta love it when someone just digs your characters.

 

[anthrodisiac]

Gotta love it when someone just digs your characters.

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That is some sentence.

 

[EmilyMiller]

By @liliput1 on The Story of Nix - Part VI

I have been stubbornly avoiding sci fi themes here and picked up chapter one of this series as an experiment, the evening before last. And here I am now at the end, a day and a half later.

It’s so super gratifying when someone gets hooked. Makes all the effort worthwhile

 

[Stanfield2025]

From Not_TheBiggestMan on Reddit:
It was a fun read! Wish we got to see Claudia have a little fun with Savannah instead of Savannah just steamrolling her though haha

I rarely get feedback, so any feedback that engages in good faith is great. But feedback with the names of the characters? There is something about that that's vindicating. It makes the people within the story seem more real somehow.

 

[TheLobster]

That is some sentence.

Well, you know — it's a hard Scrabble life sometimes.

 

[gordo12]

Another Satisfied Commenter:
This feedback was sent by: Anonymous

My Comment:
"To : Gee (anon of course)

Perhaps if the author includes big pictures, would that help your reading?

Well written and good start. 4*"

{Hey asshole with shit for brains,

(Not) sorry, but Anonymous was correct that breaking up a story into such small parts that each crumb is less than one Literotica page is bad form and makes for a disjointed read. I'm sorry that you don't understand that, but someday, maybe, you too will pass the third grade! You might need pictures to understand that, but don't expect other people on adult sites to have a child's mentality and intelligence, just because you do.}

Sometimes, the asshole anons give you a great review before crawling back into their closets and cowering. My original comment was on somebody else's story BTW. Forgot to mention this ws received by email.

 

[Kumquatqueen]

My On the Job story has got a bunch of nice comments (and no not-nice ones), while simultaneously being voted worse than all my output bar one 750 story (the one with no sex!) and my one LW story. Quite the achievement, I feel.

I'd had to explain one bit, where the FMC spits out a word in a foreign language which the MMC has to look up later:
Roy says "So what if some migrant bint thinks I'm a rapist?" - so it must have been 'rapist' that he had to look up. Possibly too subtle?

So I was chuffed to get another comment today:

Not too subtle, KQQ. I figured it out.
Great story, dark as it is.

 

[liliput1]

but don't expect other people on adult sites to have a child's mentality and intelligence, just because you do.

Even when you encounter it, don't expect it.

 

[TheLobster]

My On the Job story has got a bunch of nice comments (and no not-nice ones), while simultaneously being voted worse than all my output bar one 750 story (the one with no sex!) and my one LW story. Quite the achievement, I feel.

I'd had to explain one bit, where the FMC spits out a word in a foreign language which the MMC has to look up later:
Roy says "So what if some migrant bint thinks I'm a rapist?" - so it must have been 'rapist' that he had to look up. Possibly too subtle?

So I was chuffed to get another comment today:

Not too subtle, KQQ. I figured it out.
Great story, dark as it is.

For most of us non-Brits, the foreign word would be “bint”, so maybe there’s subtlety underneath the subtlety here…

 

[liliput1]

For most of us non-Brits, the foreign word would be “bint”, so maybe there’s subtlety underneath the subtlety here…

"if I went around saying I was an emperor just because some moistened bint had lobbed a scimitar at me, they'd put me away!"

 

[StrentWriter]

Just noticed this one:

At first the length looked intimidating.

I always get this.

 

[PennyThompson]

@Actingup and my first LitCon story, Jeremy, Mon Amour! Is... Not getting great ratings or views, probably because it was tough to put in an appropriate category, and because LitCon is a bit of an inside joke... But a handful of lovely comments have certainly made my day!

@Querent's comment all on its own made the project feel worthwhile:

Wow. I didn't think I would be wiping away tears, but that presentation and ending was incredible. I'll try to be kinder with my comments in the future.

 

[Actingup]

@Actingup and my first LitCon story, Jeremy, Mon Amour! Is... Not getting great ratings or views, probably because it was tough to put in an appropriate category, and because LitCon is a bit of an inside joke... But a handful of lovely comments have certainly made my day!

@Querent's comment all on its own made the project feel worthwhile:

I loved that @Mr_Fyre put fourteen comments into a stream of consciousness and gave them all to us.

 

[BeechLeaf]

I've been thinking happily on and off about this all day, so I think it counts. A writer whose comic story I had previously admired, and who I'd followed, has started following me and commented on my comic effort:

'Properly bonkers and I properly enjoyed it.'

And they appreciated that one of my jokes 'is the kind of joke most writers wouldn’t risk.'