Comments That Make Your Day

[Publius68]

As for actual Lit comments, I just got one on Guilty Pleasures 5. I had wanted an epicurean detail for a fancy dinner between the protagonist and his current, beyond his control female companion. So I dug and dug, and Googled up the most obscure cheese I could find, and inserted it in the story.
And a reader...

Side note: Époisses is not exactly illegal in the USA. As long as it is not aged more than 49 days it is allowed. Age more than this is not allowed. I've had both variants, it is my favorite cheese. While I do like the older version, what is allowed in the USA is delicious as well.

 

[shakna]

I can't break the code, but I'm loving reading the story!

Well, just for you... Line all the characters up in the order they appear, without the quotes, and then put it through this.

 

[onehitwanda]

Well, just for you... Line all the characters up in the order they appear, without the quotes, and then put it through this.

oh for god's sake. I work with this stuff and didn't think of this.

 

[shakna]

oh for god's sake. I work with this stuff and didn't think of this.

Well, to be fair, I did remove the = padding, because that'd be too easy an hint.

 

[onehitwanda]

Well, to be fair, I did remove the = padding, because that'd be too easy an hint.

Curse you and your sudden but inevitable betrayal!

 

[oneagainst]

@Stacnash - as directed, please move discussion here. Story comments are not the place to disparage misc other authors. Let's discuss in the appropriate place, here in AH, if you have an issue with someone else's views

 

[djrip]

@Stacnash - as directed, please move discussion here. Story comments are not the place to disparage misc other authors. Let's discuss in the appropriate place, here in AH, if you have an issue with someone else's views

Another one? Hey it's like a club now! I got in before it even had a proper name.

 

[oneagainst]

Another one? Hey it's like a club now! I got in before it even had a proper name.

I'd normally leave negative comments to stand, but it just tipped the line into an author debate as opposed to anything anymore to do with the story. The latter is what AH is more appropriately suited to, right?

 

[djrip]

I'd normally leave negative comments to stand, but it just tipped the line into an author debate as opposed to anything anymore to do with the story. The latter is what AH is more appropriately suited to, right?

I was torn on mine; I wanted to leave it because it had some genuine story criticism, but wanted to delete it because it talked about the forum, which I don't think belongs in story comments. The criticism won out, it's still up.

 

[oneagainst]

On the latest chapter:

"Congratulations, I'm starting to skim the sex to get to the next plot point. Will he or won't he? I want to know!"

So, I'm catering to story fetishists now, depraved perverts here for [ewww] plot progression?

 

[gordo12]

A couple of nice comments this morning. I always like it when a reader downloads a pile of stories and then starts commenting.

Cheatify The Bitch:

Neat, short, to the point, and great! Karma wins!

Cheatify The Bastard:

See, this is the kind of balls to the wall, supercharged BTB that is what normal people want to read. Thank you! Amazing effort! 100 stars if I could.

 

[Djmac1031]

Was reviewing comments on my story Accidental Nudes because a new one came in, and while it was a very nice comment, it was this one from a few months ago that caught my eye and made me smile:

Dutchlynx77about 2 months ago
This was a very sexy story. In some ways, I'd like a follow-up (they're both such attractive people - inside and out!) but you might be right about leaving it just where it is - so we can take it... in so many delicious directions. Thanks for an erotic encounter that I'll think about again - many times. An easy five stars

The line that truly made my day was "They're both such attractive people - inside and out."

I wrote VERY little physical descriptions for the female character, even less for the male.

So the fact that this reader saw them as "attractive" is a testament to writing characters interesting enough without a ton of over description that allowed the reader to create their own unique vision of them in their head.

So I felt good about that accomplishment.

 

[MrPixel]

I don't get many comments, but the recent Nude Day stories have generated a handful, all positive, most asking for sequels. This morning was "I sure hope there's more to this story. Excellent!"

It was in response to the last chapter of the road trip trilogy, Barstow. I sort of had follow-on material in my head, and that nudge already has me 1000 words into a fourth installment.

 

[theWollstonecraftWoman]

On my most recent story posted here, From a Fantasy to the Thrill I have had the full range of comments (with only six so far). From insulting the female lead saying she'll die from VD, to Ic69Hunter telling me there shouldn't be the humiliation in the story. Which I appologized for not having tags about it, or a warning. To one very nice comment from a lady. And Sunday this lovely comment from David_e_martin...

This is an exciting story and it’s good to read something that’s not full of spelling and grammatical errors

 

[alohadave]

These type of comments show up A LOT in LW, too. “I don’t agree with what happened here, so let’s write an unhappy ending for your characters.” I’ve gotten similar comments on almost every story I’ve written in LW.

I saw one the other day where someone posted 6-7 comments with a whole story in them. It was a couple hundred words at least. Dude should just write their own stories.

 

[alohadave]

I'm guessing you mean this one?

Wow. I recognize that name because the same user left a nice comment on one of mine. People are vast; they contain multitudes. I guess.

He (I assume it's a man) posts a lot of comments like this. I've seen him all over. I think I've one positive comment from him in all the comments of his that I've seen.

 

[gordo12]

A nice comment on Cheatify The Bitch:

Very good! 5/5 stars

 

[gordo12]

Two comments from polar opposites:

The Bet:

A very discerning reader

Love lt and all your WORKS

You bust your ass to come up with something new and unique
PS: They missed something in the story!

I was not a fan of the duct taping and sending the video to all his contacts. At that point in the story she had no reason to be so vengeful. They were both headed to their happily ever after without hard feelings.

 

[theWollstonecraftWoman]

No accounting for taste or lack there of.

Two comments from polar opposites:

The Bet:

A very discerning reader


You bust your ass to come up with something new and unique
PS: They missed something in the story!

 

[shakna]

Maly Kiel is Maly Kiel.
Important.

An all too sweet comment on A Very Toofy Christmas.

 

[gordo12]

Two nice comments this afternoon from our old friend 26thNC. Surprisingly, he has returned to many of my stories multiple times and commented.

Cheatify The Bitch:

Again, for this damned good little BTB spoof.

Cheatify The Bastard:

I enjoy seeing bastards burn even more than the cheating wife. I hate seeing anyone get away untouched.

 

[Kumquatqueen]

A couple nice comments on Naked Bisexual Lube Wrestling:

'so well done' but more pleasingly, 'As someone with shit health - thankyou for what you do.'

Trying to add to the story count of stories with chronic illness or disability, which aren't fetishised nor made into inspiration porn. It's nice that someone appreciates it.

 

[Constories]

"Oh damn Liz is crazay."

A text from my beta reader who was halfway through my LW story.

 

[NoTalentHack]

A nice comment on Forever Bound, my BDSM love story that continues to hover irritatingly at 4.49:

Usually on Literotica the stories that really get me are the ones that are scratching an itch. This one isn't scratching any kind of itch, its not on the themes I usually enjoy. But despite that its so well written, the characters so considerately painted, especially for a short story, that I'd call it one of the best and most erotic reads on the site.

 

[djrip]

A couple nice comments on Naked Bisexual Lube Wrestling:

'so well done' but more pleasingly, 'As someone with shit health - thankyou for what you do.'

Trying to add to the story count of stories with chronic illness or disability, which aren't fetishised nor made into inspiration porn. It's nice that someone appreciates it.

I thought it was great!