Comments That Make Your Day

[gordo12]

I was told that Burn the Bastard takes were less common, and I was happy to present one.

Yep, reviews and scoring take a real drop when it's burn the bastard. All those little misogynists don't like the idea!

 

[SeraphNocturne]

OI8U2about 7 hours ago
I hope chapter 2 is coming soon. Chapter 1 didn't do much for me.

On my first uploaded audio narration, the Introduction for @oneagainst's The Light Between the Trees... I guess that means I should finish up that Chapter?

 

[oneagainst]

On my first uploaded audio narration, the Introduction for @oneagainst's The Light Between the Trees... I guess that means I should finish up that Chapter?

You mean get to the steamier bit where she actually has sex??!?

 

[SeraphNocturne]

You mean get to the steamier bit where she actually has sex??!?

Hell, I’m already invested and it’s not that raunchy. Why not.

 

[oneagainst]

Hell, I’m already invested and it’s not that raunchy. Why not.

The EDIT request for Ch 01 is still sitting there two weeks later, BTW, otherwise you'd have a ref at the top of Ch 01 already.

Not sure what's going on with the queues at the moment.

 

[NoTalentHack]

Very nice one from @joy_of_cooking on Medusa's Daughter:

It's amazing how vivid an image I have of this guy even though IIRC you never said a word about his appearance. It was all

"huge commissions for ya boy Chazz."

and

" It's nanobots, so... what does that mean? Can I, like, cut open my arm and suck them out like a snakebite?"

and

"All of my other muscles are working but the... fuck, what's the name? The muscle, the one named after the birth control thing"

Reminds me of a friend from college who went out on Halloween night wearing a lime green striped LaCoste polo, unbuttoned all the way, and a pink collared LaCoste shirt, also unbuttoned all the way. He popped both collars, put his sunglasses on the back of his head, and told people, "I'm a douchebag!"

It's nice when people really get the character you're presenting to them, even if they're as odious as Chazz.

Bonus fun comment from a guy following from LW:

Nope

 

[joy_of_cooking]

It's nice when people really get the character you're presenting to them, even if they're as odious as Chazz

It's not only me either. I read about two paragraphs to someone and asked her how she would draw Chaz. She said, young, white, spiked hair, polo shirt.

Poor polo shirts.

 

[Kumquatqueen]

'Great story, the sex is great but the London nostalgia is what really brings the warmth.'

Nice to see someone appreciates my very place-based tales. (Chaperoning Matthew)

 

[gordo12]

Nice Comment on April Fool - No longer

April Fool - No Longer
750 Word - A Fool No Longer.

Hahaha! Highly-amusing nonsense, well-done, I really enjoyed it!
DO keep writing or, should I just say "keep your end up"!
R.S.

 

[MillieDynamite]

A 750-word story, two stones for one bird.

Nice Comment on April Fool - No longer

 

[NoTalentHack]

A very kind comment from @SimonDoom on one of my older ones, Forever Bound:

I enjoyed this a lot as an appealing blend of bdsm and romance... I thought you convincingly portrayed it as based on real love and empathy, but like so many couples in love, these two have some issues to resolve.

I relate a little bit to the character of Alex, because I've dabbled in BDSM as a Dom, and greatly enjoyed it, but I'm not by nature a true dominant. I can relate to the struggle when two people are trying to navigate their way through BDSM play while also navigating a relationship. Reading one's partner correctly is always a challenge, whether during play time or real time. That seems real to me and I thought you handled it well.

Well-written, too.

 

[WendyTrilby]

I've been testing the limits of the readers with each story. I like my erotica rather graphic. By graphic, I mean real, with all the real sounds, smells, and tastes of sex. Sex is great, but it's messy, sometimes gross but beautiful. Bringing those elements into my stories is vital to my style. Some do not feel that real is sexy, and that's fine. But I feel it gives stories that are obviously fantasies a feeling of reality. When something feels real, the reader has an easier time projecting themselves into the characters.

I've received great feedback, kind comments wonderful suggestions, so I think I'm doing it right.

However, the comment that made my day was a simple note from NC_Costal, who commented on my story My Mother's Wicked Game. The comment was simple: I loved the plot twist.

NC_Coastal got it. The thing I love most about my stories are the plot twists. All short stories should have a plot twist at the beginning and a one at the end. It's how I write and I think it works. I was elated it was noticed, and it was one of the few comments I've ever replied to.

NC_Coastal then made another simple comment, and it has become my guiding light: I like your style and how much fun you have with third-rail taboo.

Third-rail taboo! I loved that thought. Not porn, but deeply erotic tales with explicit sex set against a good story (with a twist). No matter what the story or the genre, I always attempt to have my characters explore each other in intimate ways and places that are as far from vanilla as the third rail is from the train platform.

So, thank you MC_Coastal, wherever you are. Simple but kind comments like that mean everything to me, and you've helped me focus my direction all the way over to that precarious third rail where I shock and electrify.

 

[davion2308]

I have a story "Between the Stacks," I published five years ago. It's a quick little bit here https://literotica.com/s/between-the-stacks-1 and it's sitting at 4.18 at 118 votes.

Five years ago the (anonymous) single comment was: "I am looking forward to their next meeting ... "

Yesterday a second comment (anonymous) comment pops up: "I am waiting for so long for the next episode - please take some time for this!!!!"

And dammit if I'm not motivated to write a second round for this person. Maybe i make it a Halloween story but I'm going to write for that guy!

 

[joy_of_cooking]

I got my very own Stacnash review!

As an outsider to the genre, it was striking to me just how authentic a depiction of the fetish this was...

...I never felt like you were only writing for those who are already enthusiasts for this kind of material. You welcomed me on board and made me feel included, which I appreciated...

...that process of her discovering his kink is a potential epic story that I’d be excited to read in the future. This is only 4,000 words, but I’d be prepared to join the couple on their journey and you’ve got the talent to do it justice.

This is clearly a five-star piece of work and you should be very proud of it.

 

[MediocreAuthor]

I got my very own Stacnash review!

Those quotes kinda mirror how I felt about Asked and Answered. Now I need to read this one to see if how they compare.

 

[MediocreAuthor]

So this wasn't a comment on a story, but rather a comment from a fan on a story prompt.

Got to admit, femdom isn't usually my thing but that is hot

Mewehehehehe! Welcome to the femdom club, little boy.

 

[joy_of_cooking]

So this wasn't a comment on a story, but rather a comment from a fan on a story prompt.

Where could I see this prompt?

Femdom is, um, usually my thing.

 

[joy_of_cooking]

Now I need to read this one to see if how they compare.

Clothes Make the Masochist is a prequel of Learning to Wear the Heels He Likes . I did the series poorly. I've submitted an edit to fix that, but it hasn't been approved yet.

 

[Katie_Mae]

I mean, all my comments pretty much made my day, but I got the below as an anonymous feedback email and that really made my day but I have no way of saying thank you.

I check your page like everyday to see if there’s a new update lmao. Love your story chapters! 10/10 plot

 

[gordo12]

I mean, all my comments pretty much made my day, but I got the below as an anonymous feedback email and that really made my day but I have no way of saying thank you.

You can always put a copy of the email and a comment back on your profile page and or put a comment back with the story comments. Some people do come back to check. And it sounds like they monitor your profile page.

 

[gordo12]

Nice comment on Cheatify The Bastard sequel to Cheatify The Bitch:

I liked this tounge-in-cheek look at today's phone-centric technology as a way to find and get revenge on a couple of cheating spouses, and 5 stars for the karmic results.

 

[Djmac1031]

Again, not a comment, but a new reader reading a story then going immediately for the sequel always makes my day.

 

[MediocreAuthor]

I got this in a PM from @djrip concerning Rescuing the Fallen.

"Ch 3 be like:


Indeed it does, sir. It be just like that.

 

[Bamagan]

I got this in a PM from @djrip concerning Rescuing the Fallen.

"Ch 3 be like:
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Indeed it does, sir. It be just like that.

I like how in this version of the trolley problem, the loop track makes it simply a question of sequencing.

 

[MediocreAuthor]

I like how in this version of the trolley problem, the loop track makes it simply a question of sequencing.

That is the threat as present within the story. Bad things are here and more are coming. The only questions that remain are when, how bad, and for how long?