Comments That Make Your Day

[lit_ch3]

I've been testing the limits of the readers with each story. I like my erotica rather graphic. by graphic I mean real, with all the real sounds, smells and tastes of sex. Sex is great, but it's messy, sometimes gross but beautiful. Bringing those elements into my stories is vital to my style. Some do not feel that real is sexy and that's fine. But I feel it give stories that are obviously fantasies, a feeling of reality. When something feels real, the reader has an easier time projecting themseves into the characters.

I've recieved great feedback, kind comments wonderful suggestions so I think I'm doing it right.

However, the comment that made my day was a simple note from NC_Costal who commented on my story My Mother's Wicked Game. The comment was simple: I loved the plot twist.

NC_Coastal got it. The thing I love most about my stories are the plot twists. All short stories shold have a plot twist at the beginning and a one at the end. It's how I write and I think it works. I was elated it was noticed and it was one of the few comments I've ever replied to.

NC_Coastal then made aother simple comment and it has bcome my guiding light: I like your style and how much fun you have with third-rail taboo.

Third-rail taboo! I loved that thought. Not porn, but deeply erotic tales with explic sex set against a good story (with twist). No matter what the story or the genre, I always attempt to have my characters explore each other in intimate ways and places that are as far from vanilla as the third rail is from the train platform.

So, thank you MC_Coastal wherever you are. Simple but kind commments like that mean everything to me and you've helped me focus my direction all the way over to that precarious third rail where I shock and electrify.

And this is exactly why I like your writing.

 

[BobbyBrandt]

This particular reader has commented at least once on most of my stories. I'll put the comments in chronological order so his moods come into perspective. (Previous comments on four of the stories were lost when I replaced the chapter story version with the single post of each)

 

[onehitwanda]

It is rather strange that the first thing one woman notices in another is her “bum”. Which, together with a few other secondary things, inspires in the narrator a certain “warmth” in her “tummy”…. apparently she is quite ignorant about female anatomy. And there is one incongruity after another: “you are such a sweet woman” instead of “sweet person”; also, the narrator Willa, for some unexplained reason, resides with two gays, “elegant and artistic” of course, one of whom utters this utmost elegance: “I'll be sure to slip him a bit of extra tongue on your behalf”; and then Willa hears this gem from Jim regarding her husband: “….a man who last had sex with me more than two years ago, and only then because I physically got down on my knees and begged him to." This is simply ridiculous: no woman, even the straightest one, would ever beg a man for sex, and on her knees, to boot! So, still on Page-3, I am undecided whether to continue reading or to quit, because I sense that a mandatory sex between the two lovely ladies is not too far off …. with all, I am afraid, the attendant mandatory licking …. and in my humble opinion, romance does not mix well with sex – these are completely different realms.

Kittens, Wanda. Kittens.

 

[joy_of_cooking]

I don't know which I find more jarring, the comment or the gif.

And that's saying something considering she's got eye-tongues licking her eye-lids.

 

[onehitwanda]

I don't know which I find more jarring, the comment or the gif.

And that's saying something considering she's got eye-tongues licking her eye-lids.

Hey, at least it's not Vagina Dentata.

(I swear I'm not drunk)

 

[ElectricBlue]

This particular reader has commented at least once on most of my stories. I'll put the comments in chronological order so his moods come into perspective. (Previous comments on four of the stories were lost when I replaced the chapter story version with the single post of each)

Hard to Please Guy, huh?

 

[Publius68]

Please keep writing, give up your day job.

A comment from a while back that I only now read correctly...

 

[MediocreAuthor]

maxx308 about 20 hours ago
Absolutely loved the story, so very well written and so titillating.
Thank you so very much for sharing.
Five stars, a favorite, and a follow.

Is that considered a triple play?

 

[Smuttyandfun]

Is that considered a triple play?

I would say yes.

 

[Bamagan]

Is that considered a triple play?

I think 'trifecta' might be closer.

 

[oneagainst]

"I'm continually impressed by both the quality of your writing and your commitment to meticulous organization"

On the foreword to Only Consenting Adults - ch 00 has turned out to be one of my most highly rated submissions - so nice to see readers sharing my love of a good bibliography and proper footnote organisation. Catering to the organisation fetish....

 

[Bamagan]

so nice to see readers sharing my love of a good bibliography and proper footnote organisation. Catering to the organisation fetish....

There's a reason they call that anal compulsive!

 

[StillStunned]

An anonymous reader left this kind remark on the first chapter of "The Rivals"

"This is great- I'm kind of glad to find it a few weeks late because it means there's more to read!"

With a recommendation for another author for me to check out.

 

[BobbyBrandt]

Hard to Please Guy, huh?

I don't know. He claims to always give my stories 5 stars, including my latest one.

 

[Smuttyandfun]

I liked this one on my story: Just Roomies

Loved this story! Normally I'm not much of a fan of slow burn stories, this one is very slow and I have no patience, it's one of the best! The sex scenes weren't as hot as I usually like but that's my own problem 5 stars all the way, definitely worth the read

 

[MillieDynamite]

No comments for a few weeks. Not since the one I posted here last time. I feel so unappreciated. But the earnings in August at SW and Amazon offset that feeling a bit.

Had to change the SM to SW they sort of look alike.

 

[Rob_Royale]

Always nice to get a glowing anonymous comment.

Anonymous 21 minutes ago
Such a talented writer and fun stories. Even if I don't necessarily like all the content, I have enjoyed most of your stories. Thanks for taking the time to share with us.

 

[MediocreAuthor]

JIMSVANO 39 minutes ago
Interesting, atypical and good.

I'll take it

 

[oneagainst]

Sometimes, just not enough detail:

"Awful"

That's all Anon gave me to work with. What part? Characters? Plot? Sentence structure? Use of punctuation? Or just fully invested in the story as bad things happen to good people?

 

[MillieDynamite]

I had one that said, "Garbage!!!" Note the three exclamation points. No elaboration needed she or he hated all of it.

Sometimes, just not enough detail:

"Awful"

That's all Anon gave me to work with. What part? Characters? Plot? Sentence structure? Use of punctuation? Or just fully invested in the story as bad things happen to good people?

 

[MediocreAuthor]

Sometimes, just not enough detail:

"Awful"

That's all Anon gave me to work with. What part? Characters? Plot? Sentence structure? Use of punctuation? Or just fully invested in the story as bad things happen to good people?

He was probably talking about his own reading comprehension. Lol

 

[djrip]

Sometimes, just not enough detail:

"Awful"

That's all Anon gave me to work with. What part? Characters? Plot? Sentence structure? Use of punctuation? Or just fully invested in the story as bad things happen to good people?

Probably that last one

 

[Bamagan]

He was probably talking about his own reading comprehension. Lol

Or possibly they were mistakenly trying to intensify "awesome" to "awful" under the belief that the latter meant 'full of awe' instead of just 'some amount of awe.'

 

[MillieDynamite]

Ever the optimist, aren't ya?

Or possibly they were mistakenly trying to intensify "awesome" to "awful" under the belief that the latter meant 'full of awe' instead of just 'some amount of awe.'

 

[Bamagan]

Ever the optimist, aren't ya?

Quite the opposite, really, but I play one on the internet sometimes.