Comments That Make Your Day

[gordo12]

I finally checked out this story, and I'm glad I did. Very funny. (I'd seen the comments, so I knew the twist was coming, but that was clever, regardless.)

I left a comment, but it's awaiting moderation, so you'll probably get it in a few years, as long as comments take to post, sometimes. Haha

Thank you so much. I'll go have a look at the one you posted. That's part of what I enjoy about this thread. It motivates me to go check out stories.

[edit] wow, right off the bat 163 comments. That's extremely impressive!!!

 

[gordo12]

I was told that Burn the Bastard takes were less common, and I was happy to present one.

Holy shit, that was a hell of a story. I was on tenterhooks. Would she? Was she going to...? Awesome twist there at the end. And great writing. No wonder it's at 163 comments.

 

[Constories]

Holy shit, that was a hell of a story. I was on tenterhooks. Would she? Was she going to...? Awesome twist there at the end. And great writing. No wonder it's at 163 comments.

Thank you, very much!

 

[gordo12]

Another nice comment on Following Laura's Footsteps.

Anonymous
We need more Mammas in both industry and politics.

Now Mamma got a lot of comments from the story. Readers loved her. So I thought "A sequel" about her. LOL, one of the biggest mistakes I've made. The story turned out so far from the original Mamma it remains unpublished to this day!

 

[ElectricBlue]

pcman1950 4 days ago
Each word, thought, so sticky, viscous & succulent, clinging to the palette.

Anonymous 5 days ago
Wow. Words escape me. One of Lit's best stories. Well crafted and executed.

Cookiecreamy 5 days ago
Well written. Nice and steamy. Characters were delightful and naughty.

Honey Always Tastes Better from the Pot

 

[grenefire]

This comment on my story Dear Daddy Chapter 4 made my day:

“Holy Fuck… what a kinky & nasty prevarted scene. Love the change over in “ Mom”, being “ In-Charge” & Kinky as Fuck, ordering everyone to do her bidding. Was a bit surprised at the “ breeding reference “. But overall a story definitely worth “ Cumming”. You have come a long, long way since 2009”


In 2009 I wrote 2 stories and stopped writing. After 13 I decided to continuing my Dear Daddy story. I like to think my writing has gotten a lot better in during that 13 year gap, but it is always nice to hear other people agree!

 

[Limnophile]

My story 'Stealing Gold + Silver' https://literotica.com/s/tt-ch-01-stealing-gold-and-silver got a comment: "If the goal was to stun readers and leave them disgusted, mission accomplished. After reading this, I need to brush my teeth and take a shower."

It's a horror story. I'm glad I could inspire strong emotions and better hygiene, even if readers didn't appreciate it.

 

[Publius68]

wow, right off the bat 163 comments. That's extremely impressive!!!

Holy Bat Guano! That is an insane number of comments. Color me green, @gordo12!

 

[MediocreAuthor]

So I genuinely appreciate this comment on my newest story, The Understudy:

MrSmith27 about 8 hours ago
Great start. The inner turmoil of your heroine was a good read as we watched her evolution into a submissive slut

But is it wrong that I don't fully appreciate the commenter referring to Melody as a "slut"? Depending on your reading of the story, she is a slut, I suppose. Idk, I guess I just don't like hearing it?

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Heck, on Literotica, "slut" is probably considered one of the finest compliments a character can receive... Who knows?

 

[onehitwanda]

So I genuinely appreciate this comment on my newest story, The Understudy:



But is it wrong that I don't fully appreciate the commenter referring to Melody as a "slut"? Depending on your reading of the story, she is a slut, I suppose. Idk, I guess I just don't like hearing it?

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Heck, on Literotica, "slut" is probably considered one of the finest compliments a character can receive... Who knows?

train yourself to mentally replace "slut" with "empowered and sexually-fulfilled woman"

 

[MediocreAuthor]

Empowered? I would say no.

Sexually fulfilled? She definitely will be, by the end.

 

[onehitwanda]

Empowered? I would say no.

Sexually fulfilled? She definitely will be, by the end.

 

[djrip]

So I genuinely appreciate this comment on my newest story, The Understudy:



But is it wrong that I don't fully appreciate the commenter referring to Melody as a "slut"? Depending on your reading of the story, she is a slut, I suppose. Idk, I guess I just don't like hearing it?

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Heck, on Literotica, "slut" is probably considered one of the finest compliments a character can receive... Who knows?

Didn't she say she was his slut?

 

[MediocreAuthor]

Didn't she say she was his slut?

Good eye!
Yes, she does say that.

I may not be a slut... but I am his slut.

That said, I also call myself mediocre... But I don't appreciate it when other people call me that. Lol (unless they are simply calling me by name )

Ahh... The human condition.

 

[MillieDynamite]

Just received the following comments on Vengeance is Mine.

by onlythelonelylove  on 41 minutes ago

Sociopaths are still sociopaths and what Nietzsche said still holds: “When you stare into the abyss the abyss stares back; be careful when you fight monsters that you do not become a monster yourself.”

by WifeWatchman  on 5 hours ago

Interesting story. 5*

I think onlythelonlylove didn't realize that was my point, she became the very kind of person she hated.

 

[NoTalentHack]

A selection of comments from When the Shooting Stops:

*zip* Well, what have we here? Mass shooting? Emotional infidelity? Public ridicule and vast humiliation? Years worth of angst and self loathing? Top notch writing? That'd be a NTH tale, alright! Well it looks like I'll have one less crunchy sock to deal with tomorrow. Damn. *Zip* 5

The “NoTalentHack” name you go by really cracks me up. It is the complete opposite of the truth. I gotta say that I have enjoyed every story you have published here. This one definitely included. When I see the daily listing of new stories and see your name, that is the first one I go to and I am never disappointed. Eagerly awaiting more. Keep up the great work. You are the real deal.

Simply superb. What a great story! Extremely well-written, realistic adult dialog, genuine and truly heart-felt emotions, mature, thoughtful characters, a plot that makes sense and is consistent, and a thoroughly unique discovery situation all add up to a fantastic read. 10 stars! Bravo!

And one from feedback:

That was a tour de force in so many areas, from ripping up the internet and the trolls who inhabit it to showing people what a true loving wife story ought to look like... Kudos to you, and keep 'em coming because you've just enshrined yourself as the Thornton Wilder of this particular porn site.

 

[MillieDynamite]

Loyal fans, fanatics, you got to love them. Until that is, they start stalking you. Following you, planning a fan thing, an accidental run in here, "Hey, how are you? Nice dress," as they twirl the knife behind their back.

A selection of comments from When the Shooting Stops:







And one from feedback:

Yes, I had a facebook stalker who went a bit too far.

 

[NoTalentHack]

Loyal fans, fanatics, you got to love them. Until that is, they start stalking you. Following you, planning a fan thing, an accidental run in here, "Hey, how are you? Nice dress," as they twirl the knife behind their back.

Yes, I had a facebook stalker who went a bit too far.

Eek!

 

[MillieDynamite]

Eek, indeed! He's the reason I'm not on any social sites with my real name, nor do I often put my own picture up. The eye to the left and my once beautiful legs below are the exceptions here.

"Vain much?" you ask.

"Not much or often," I reply.

 

[gordo12]

Holy Bat Guano! That is an insane number of comments. Color me green, @gordo12!

Yeah, I'm green with envy too. My top story for comments over time is 156 so for a new writer to attract 163 comments in a few days blows me away. But it is a hell of a story and well worth reading for anyone who hasn't indulged yet. And a huge welcome to a new and very talented writer. Constories.

 

[Constories]

Yeah, I'm green with envy too. My top story for comments over time is 156 so for a new writer to attract 163 comments in a few days blows me away. But it is a hell of a story and well worth reading for anyone who hasn't indulged yet. And a huge welcome to a new and very talented writer. Constories.

Thank you so much! Do I need to copy/paste this comment of yours? Because it definitely made my day!

 

[gordo12]

Thank you so much! Do I need to copy/paste this comment of yours? Because it definitely made my day!

LOL, how about my Paypal address instead!

 

[SimonDoom]

I just got a positive comment from "JRRTolkien420." From the master himself. What's not to like about that? And who knew the old guy was a weed fan? Might explain the Tom Bombadil scene.

 

[Candy_Kane54]

I got a nice but critical comment on my latest story I Fought the Law ...

When they were talking, her chest clenched. But earlier, when in each others arms, they were in a clinch, not a clench. There were a couple other little edit things that could have been fixed, but the clinch/clench difference was the one that really caught my eye. It was a good story though, and I appreciated the hard work that obviously went into it!

Comments like this are helpful and appreciated. I was not aware of the clench/clinch dichotomy and will fix it shortly when I submit edits. You learn something new every day.

 

[MillieDynamite]

I bet I get those wrong a lot. Clinch and Clench, hum.

I got a nice but critical comment on my latest story I Fought the Law ...



Comments like this are helpful and appreciated. I was not aware of the clench/clinch dichotomy and will fix it shortly when I submit edits. You learn something new every day.