Comments That Make Your Day

Nice one on 'My Neighbor's Sexy Wife'

5 star fun!! As always, you create your scenes with gusto, add in a wicked twist, and let the reader revel in all the juicy detailed romping! Contest winner material!
 
And then comes this on Artist in the Park, from one of my most loyal readers...
Bravo, Maestro. Bravo. You’re good. You’re very good. But as big a fan as I am, I never expected a work as sublime as this.

This was a Bartok string quartet in prose fiction. Most Bartok listeners simply hear some beautiful harmonies and dissonance. I hear a long, protracted orgasm. This long, slow orgasm began as she peeked over his shoulder and culminated many pages later.

You’re so good I fucking hate you.
 
I'm happy to report that, according to the wackydoodle, I have ruined sex. This was, of course, my master plan all along, as overpopulation of humans and its attendant effects are the biggest problem on the planet, at least ecologically speaking. Now that none of you humans can enjoy sex anymore, my work here is done. It was definitely a stroke of luck that this website is the lynchpin in the global enjoyment of funky love and so vulnerable to my scribbles.
Excelsior!
🏆🏆🏆
 
Some days, it doesn't pay to write how you want a story to evolve. Perhaps I should have known better than to post it as a sequel to the first well-received brother/sister incest category story and have a brother and sister part ways. Too realistic for some, it appears, especially these two commenters as well as others. It's not a well-received story, but I'm certain it happens in reality a great deal:

"Horrible ending! 😢 I'll repeat what an anonymous user said a few days ago. I thought was (sic) the point of the story to begin with was that the Irish Twins were in love with each other, but you totally destroyed it?

Honestly, while I thoroughly enjoyed the first chapter, this one totally sucked big fat donkey dick. … [skipped reading after the first page to the end] I read the final page in disbelief. I was hoping for the siblings to stay together no matter what obstacles were put in their way. But you turned Andy into a heartless jerk who only cares about getting laid and his sister basically forgets about him and gets engaged to another man. I'm glad that I didn’t waste my valuable time reading the other nine pages in between. I hate this story now. 😒 1/5"

Another comment:

"Sadly, I agree with a number of these comments… I expected Andy to grow up, realize his foolishness, and figure it out. Frankly, there’s no way he’d be stupid enough to not call her. People mature…they don’t go backwards. This is not up to your standards."

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And on that set of notes, I might think about deleting the story, rewriting a "happy ending version," and letting readers feel better about the Irish twin siblings finding love and happiness with one another forever after.;):censored:
 
I just got a positive comment from "JRRTolkien420." From the master himself. What's not to like about that? And who knew the old guy was a weed fan? Might explain the Tom Bombadil scene.
Everyone knows Tolkien smoked a pipe... but now you know what was in it 🤭
 
"A brilliant bit of satire...if Jonathan Swift were alive and writing erotica, his name would be Kumquatqueen." - Image Nine Point Four

I'm very flattered! I'm now considering the concept of an erotic Gulliver's Travels, don't hold your breath.
 
Like this?

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I got a new comment on Eldritch Pact, and we all know I can't get enough of those. Lol

It's one of the most erotically satisfying descriptions I've ever read. And the pacing and building of tension was exquisite. Marvelous mastery of lyrical language, this was a delight to read. Thank you.
 
by Ilovetophoto68 on 26 minutes ago

This is the second time I read this story and I think I enjoyed it this time more than the first

This is why I really would like to be able to respond and/or react to the comments right in the comment section. Comments like these deserve some public recognition from the writer.
 
This is why I really would like to be able to respond and/or react to the comments right in the comment section. Comments like these deserve some public recognition from the writer.
I reply to almost every comment, and I tell Readers that in my forward
 
Thanks for reminding me I could use Instant Feedback. I still wish there was an easier way, though. I'm lazy that way :).
Oh... I rarely reply through instant feedback. I reply to comments in my own comment section. Like this.

And I mention that in my forward:
Don't forget to rate and comment, as I answer almost every comment I receive.
 
God. now I'm worried. The people who needed flappers for their ears would obviously need assistants for their genitals as well, but then there's the island of talking horses...
Houyhnhyms are Non-Human rather than bestiality, yes?
I'd got as far as Gulliver providing sex in the land of the giants...

On the same story someone says the first half is like a legal thriller, before getting to 'the fun I expect here. 5/5', and our very own @Bramblethorn said It's a shame the annual awards don't have a Most Educational category. 5*
 
Houyhnhyms are Non-Human rather than bestiality, yes?
I'm not certain! If memory serves, they were of human-level intelligence (or somewhat higher, if Gulliver's estimation is considered accurate), so presumably they're capable of giving and asking consent, assuming the language barrier is overcome to at least a small degree. But unlike most fantasy creatures, they're not humanoids or demi-humans or human hybrids, which are clearly a green light for fucking, or else completely made-up creatures that bear only a vague resemblance to terrestrial animals, like much of the tentacle-fucking oeuvre. They're basically just horses that have abstract language and culture. They'd probably be okay, but I could see an argument for disallowing them under the same rationale that says aged-up juvenile characters are a no-no. Is a sexy Lassie fanfic allowed if Lassie's telepathic? 🤷‍♀️
 
Yesterday, TarnishedPenny gave my Summer Lovin' story - my first competition entry - an encouraging comment:
Delightful. Good detail, believable, hot, choice ending. Two lucky people. I only regret there can’t be six stars.
What's made my day is that TarnishedPenny has just won the Summer Lovin' competition.
 
I have one faithful commenter whose incredible comment, I believe, pushed one story to record heights.
 
Anonymous comments can be sweet.
Just beautiful, and having chemo myself makes this all the more personal….
And it's nice to get told off for being too negative sometimes 😉
From
Migbird Interesting how you describe the content of this follow up piece by way of a list in your author introduction: mind control, blood play, enslavement, etc. But of course this piece is so much more — character rich, nuanced, troubling emotions, erotically poignant. So well crafted: thought provoking, mesmerizing especially when read as suggested after “Bite Me”. You enjoy sharing a vivid imagination — thanks for sharing.
 
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