Comments That Make Your Day

[MelissaBaby]

Anonymous comments can be sweet.


And it's nice to get told off for being too negative sometimes

I've had several comments from Migbird, and they are always thoughtful.

 

[Duleigh]

I just published Enchantress 3, a homage to Terry Pratchett and his discworld, and this is the response I got

Thank you, Thank You, THANK YOU for such a lovely long submission. It’s a joy to immerse myself in the crazy happenings of Discworld once again. You write beautiful tributes to the late, great, and sorely missed Sir Terry Pratchett. We’re blessed that you continue to honour his creativity and do it so well. Bless you and his memory.

 

[Publius68]

It seems almost cheating to post a comment from this, one of my most prolific and supportive commenters.

I usually avoid the Group Sex category, not because it’s not hot but because it’s frustrating. In any story with more than four participants I tend to get lost. I feel like a kid with ADHD. “Who’s sticking what into whom?” “Didn’t he have just have his tongue in the redhead a moment ago”?

I can keep the myriad characters in a Dostoyevsky or Dickens novel completely straight, but a group porn story confuses me?

But this story made me realize I was simply reading poorly written stories. Nine participants and I was completely aware who was doing what to whom throughout.

I take this as a compliment to some chainsaw-level editing work. I'd never written a full-on orgy before, and about the third time I the same side character licking three pussies at the same point in time, I realized that it was too hard to detail everything.
More importantly, I realized that having the viewpoint character being aware of more than just a little of what was going on was too ridiculous a conceit, even for my writing!

Then he stuck the knife in, just a little bit... deservedly:

True, this was the smuttiest and least character driven story you’ve ever written, and almost devoid of your characteristic humor. But it was, at the very least, very well written group smut.

It is true. Game Day was a complete story and needs no sequel. But I had a great plot twist that wouldn't get out of my brain, and I had to write Game Day - Playoffs, regardless that it's not much of a story. #Self-indulgent #Busted

Ever written a story/sequel that just didn't need to be written, just to clear it from your mental decks?

 

[MillieDynamite]

So, dear ole Nixrox returned and made an apology. Then, he gave me an explanation. I'm considering my response to him know. It helps to know where he was coming from with his comments. I'll say this for him, he's entertaining.

by nixrox  on 10 hours ago

MillieDynamite - Sorry about that - you are right and I made an error - your story is listed under NON-EROTIC, not Loving Wives, as I assumed and I apologise.
However, I do feel strongly about murder or physical abuse in the LW category. I suffer with PTSD from my time in military service and continue to this day, to shy away from any stories or pictures displaying human carnage.

 

[mirafrida]

Ok, I'll admit it, I appreciated this comment for its straightforward, 'turn the praise up to 11' sensibility

It was the best story I ever read. Please write a second part . Thank you

 

[Devinter]

This response I got on my story "Anything for You" really made my day:

" This was probably the best story I've read in a LONG, LONG time. You clearly dedicated time to this and it was well worth it. So cute, so wild, so fantastic. Thank you for writing this, I loved every minute of it. Perhaps a Part 2? I would love to see that.

The only critique I would give is that the beginning goes on for a bit too long. I think the story could have started when Alric arrived at Sigrid's house and that would've been just fine.

Once again thank you, you're extremely talented. " - Anonymous

This comment not only praised my creation very highly, but also provided me with valid criticism. The best of both world. The unicorn of comments. The story itself DEFINITELY is not for everyone, but to those that appreciate the kinks included, it seems to be a real hit. It taught me that you can definitely get a little wild and crazy in the creation process and still reach a decently sized audience.

 

[Publius68]

This comment just came in on the least popular entry of my Alistaire series. I was genuinely aware that I would get this exact comment and have been disappointed that it took over a year for it to show up.

Sharing harem girls with another guy is verboten.

The point of a harem story, is that the girls are so infatuated with the protagonist, that they're not interested in any other guys.

When the harem owner starts sharing his girls, it either feels uncomfortably close to pimping them out, or the protagonist is getting cucked. Both shatter the whole fantasy.

First off, douchebag, my story, MY rules. Also, your rules are reductivist and stupid.

Second, Alistaire does not have a harem. As he himself says, he has a board of directors. He and Ben are explicitly the members of BETH's harem. And Beth's harem also specifically violates this rule by the numbers.

Wow, I feel so much better now that at least one of these turkeys has found my work.

 

[MelissaBaby]

This made my day, and apparently, theirs as well.

On Queen of the Roller Derby, which happens to be 14 pages long.

 

[Rob_Royale]

Always nice to hear from someone who has read multiple stories. Too bad it was from that anonymous person, I'd have liked to have sent a thank you.

by Anonymous user on 09/01/2023
Such a talented writer and fun stories. Even if I don't necessarily like all the content, I have enjoyed most of your stories. Thanks for taking the time to share with us.

 

[MediocreAuthor]

Damn, I might have won a prize for explaining how to make a contraband prison dildo.

Where can I read the story that explains that?
It never hurts to be prepared...

 

[MelissaBaby]

Where can I read the story that explains that?
It never hurts to be prepared...

It's in My Fall and Rise and I'd be pleased if you read it, but in case you don't want to read the whole series, I can tell you.

What you need is:

A ball point pen
A few maxi pads, depending on how thick you want to make it
Dental floss
A latex glove

All but the latex glove are available to purchase through the prison commissary. The glove is contraband, but easy to obtain from the infirmary or the kitchen.

You just wrap the pads around the pen, wind the floss around them and tie it off to hold them in place. Then work the whole thing into the middle finger of the glove, pointy side of the pen down. Pull the rest of the glove over it and make a knot in it. Enjoy. Don't get caught. Masturbating in prison is a crime.

 

[MediocreAuthor]

It's in My Fall and Rise and I'd be pleased if you read it, but in case you don't want to read the whole series, I can tell you.

What you need is:

A ball point pen
A few maxi pads, depending on how thick you want to make it
Dental floss
A latex glove

All but the latex glove are available to purchase through the prison commissary. The glove is contraband, but easy to obtain from the infirmary or the kitchen.

You just wrap the pads around the pen, wind the floss around them and tie it off to hold them in place. Then work the whole thing into the middle finger of the glove, pointy side of the pen down. Pull the rest of the glove over it and make a knot in it. Enjoy. Don't get caught. Masturbating in prison is a crime.

What is the punishment for masturbation in prison? (If you weren't using contraband)

 

[Smuttyandfun]

Though I liked it, I still laughed at this one, for 'Girl on the Beach.' Considering how freely commenters usually offer advice, it was kind of refreshing for someone to tell me that I'm doing okay without them adding their two cents worth:

You are damn good writer. That’s all I have to say. I’d make a suggestion or two but you are doing fine.

 

[MelissaBaby]

What is the punishment for masturbation in prison? (If you weren't using contraband)

Prisons are public property, so any sexual activity in them is, technically, performed in public, as if you were doing it in the library or the post office. That provides the rationale for banning consensual sex between inmates. That said, I've never heard of anyone being criminally charged.

In most jurisdictions, the punishment would be some sort of suspension of privileges. Lockdowns are a common method; you would not be allowed to leave your cell, except for work and meals, for a specified period of time. So, no common room, exercise yard, etc.

In states which do not have a parole system, any misconduct or infraction of rules can result in a loss of "good time". Good Time is a system by which an inmate automatically earns a reduction in their sentence for good behavior. But good time days can be rescinded as well. How much you can lose for any particular infraction varies from system to system. I'd guess that for masturbation, you'd probably get a day or two tacked back on to your sentence in most places.

 

[onehitwanda]

Is a sexy Lassie fanfic allowed if Lassie's telepathic?

I think this is a brand new sentence, and it is extremely disturbing.

 

[MelissaBaby]

Prisons are public property, so any sexual activity in them is, technically, performed in public, as if you were doing it in the library or the post office. That provides the rationale for banning consensual sex between inmates. That said, I've never heard of anyone being criminally charged.

In most jurisdictions, the punishment would be some sort of suspension of privileges. Lockdowns are a common method; you would not be allowed to leave your cell, except for work and meals, for a specified period of time. So, no common room, exercise yard, etc.

In states which do not have a parole system, any misconduct or infraction of rules can result in a loss of "good time". Good Time is a system by which an inmate automatically earns a reduction in their sentence for good behavior. But good time days can be rescinded as well. How much you can lose for any particular infraction varies from system to system. I'd guess that for masturbation, you'd probably get a day or two tacked back on to your sentence in most places.

To get this thread back on topic, I did receive negative feedback from a reader who was unhappy that while writing about women in prison, I did not include any scenes of corporal punishment.

 

[onehitwanda]

To get this thread back on topic, I did receive negative feedback from a reader who was unhappy that while writing about women in prison, I did not include any scenes of corporal punishment.

... I'm no longer drunk enough for this thread.

 

[joy_of_cooking]

To get this thread back on topic, I did receive negative feedback from a reader who was unhappy that while writing about women in prison, I did not include any scenes of corporal punishment.

Corporal punishment like getting officially sentenced to a caning, Singapore style, or like a couple guards take you into the blind spot? I didn't think the us did the first one.

 

[Devinter]

Corporal punishment like getting officially sentenced to a caning, Singapore style, or like a couple guards take you into the blind spot? I didn't think the us did the first one.

I am fairly certain some US prisons are far worse than we suspect. I've seen a couple of documentaries on the matter that turned my blood to ice. Made me wonder who was truly the bad guys in the scenario; the inmates who had committed oftentimes terrible crimes, or the guards who seemed to get a sadistic rush out of beating them senseless for it. When you start feeling strong empathy for horrible people, you know something isn't quite right.

 

[joy_of_cooking]

Yeah, the second scenario happens a lot, no question.

 

[joy_of_cooking]

Wait, could you have misread my post? I meant that the US didn't officially sentence people to be caned, but prisoners do get beaten unofficially.

 

[theWollstonecraftWoman]

Wait, could you have misread my post? I meant that the US didn't officially sentence people to be caned, but prisoners do get beaten unofficially.

I got it. Not beaten, but what you were saying. Actually, I've never been in jail other than in my bedroom as a kid when I got grounded. I don't think I got any spankings even. But then again, I was a very good child.

 

[MelissaBaby]

Corporal punishment like getting officially sentenced to a caning, Singapore style, or like a couple guards take you into the blind spot? I didn't think the us did the first one.

It was my impression that he believed that inmates who misbehaved were taken to the wardens office for a spanking, and was disappointed to learn otherwise.

 

[MelissaBaby]

I am fairly certain some US prisons are far worse than we suspect. I've seen a couple of documentaries on the matter that turned my blood to ice. Made me wonder who was truly the bad guys in the scenario; the inmates who had committed oftentimes terrible crimes, or the guards who seemed to get a sadistic rush out of beating them senseless for it. When you start feeling strong empathy for horrible people, you know something isn't quite right.

Prison guards very often come from the same sociopath-economic background as the inmates. While it might seem that ought to make them more sympathetic, it generally has the opposite effect. Having come from similar circumstances, those who retain their liberty and privileges are prone to become contemptuous of those who have not.

 

[SimonDoom]

It was my impression that he believed that inmates who misbehaved were taken to the wardens office for a spanking, and was disappointed to learn otherwise.

Melissa, I'm sorry but I can't help myself: