Comments That Make Your Day

[Duleigh]

I got this comment on FaceTime from Millie yesterday; it made my day, but not in a good way.

"Mary, you look like shit!"

I felt like shit, too!

My Buffalo Bills fumbled and stumbled their way to a pathetic loss to the Broncos just to make you feel better and you don't even acknowledge the healing power of an incompetant opponent?

 

[MillieDynamite]

Duleigh, the winner is the winner, no matter how it happens. You'll find out if the incompetence had more to do with the Bills than the Bronco's defense in the next few weeks. Buffalo has a tough road to hoe over the rest of the season. Remember, the Broncos stumbled into a win the week before against the fabled Kansas City Chiefs. I think Mary has crapped out on us already.

My Buffalo Bills fumbled and stumbled their way to a pathetic loss to the Broncos just to make you feel better and you don't even acknowledge the healing power of an incompetant opponent?

 

[LIDiver]

I have no place in football conversations, I’m a tortured soul Jets fan….

 

[MillieDynamite]

Well, they beat the Broncos. Like Paris, you'll always have that.

I have no place in football conversations, I’m a tortured soul Jets fan….

 

[SimonDoom]

I have no place in football conversations, I’m a tortured soul Jets fan….

Ah, my sympathies. Don't give up. Even the most hopeless situation can get better. I mean, look at the Lions and the Browns. You have a good coach, and Rodgers may come back.

 

[MillieDynamite]

And if pigs could fly, we'd all have pig wings for supper.

Ah, my sympathies. Don't give up. Even the most hopeless situation can get better. I mean, look at the Lions and the Browns. You have a good coach, and Rodgers may come back.

 

[SimonDoom]

And if pigs could fly, we'd all have pig wings for supper.

“Trust me, Wilbur. People are very gullible. They’ll believe anything they see in print.”

 

[LIDiver]

And if pigs could fly, we'd all have pig wings for supper.

Mills, ouch!
And if there really were buffalo-wings, the bills would be above five hundred!

 

[MillieDynamite]

Yes, you could give the visiting teams food poisoning and bench half the visiting team for the games at home. But you can do that already, can't you?

Mills, ouch!
And if there really were buffalo-wings, the bills would be above five hundred!

 

[Candy_Kane54]

I published my first poem today and got this sweet comment:

Hello there, new author!
Congrats on your very first submission and a warm welcome on your discovery of the poetry section here on Literotica! This is a sad American haiku, but a very bold and ambitious undertaking stringing together 9 meters to make a one. I like risk taking writers and look forward to reading more of your poems.

 

[Devinter]

Got another lovely comment on my Winter Holiday story, from yet another Anonymous source:

" This was the best written story I have come across in Literotica in several years. You definitely should try writing stories for other outlets besides this one. There is nothing wrong with this outlet, but the potential for a reading audience is somewhat more limited. Keep going! "

If that commenter reads the forums, I hope they'll be pleased to know that I do write stories for other outlets too!

 

[EmilyMiller]

I’m cheating I know, but all the comments for chapter one of A Good Girl Gone Bad.

Including from our own:

1. @dmallord
2. @Jackie.Hikaru
3. @lc69hunter
4. @BelleCanzuto
5. @Djmac1031
6. @steelyblue73
7. @Victoria14xs
8. @EStaccato
9. @Theylo_Bleu
10. And of course Anonymous

Thank you for the love.

Em

 

[Djmac1031]

Sometimes it's the simplest ones that make you smile.

Left on my story Accidental Nudes:

BadHusbandMikeabout 4 hours ago
That was probably one of the most fun reads I've run across to date.

 

[Duleigh]

Almost perfect! Maybe your best story yet.

I love an honest reader

 

[MillieDynamite]

On Sex Sernade for Strangers in G Major, I got this one.

Helen1899about 16 hours ago
One hot story, imaginative in the extreme, I certainly had one wet pussy. Thank you author 5*

And for Carnal Crimes Pt. 01 - Back Road Cop from the same reader, I received the following.

Helen1899about 17 hours ago
Great 5* sad there is no more

If the person who asked me to write this series would ever give me more, I might write more for it. But alas, he and his wife aren't sharing their fantasy play anymore with me. They had a bull back in the 80s and role-played all sorts of things with him.

 

[Rob_Royale]

I had one recently that was paragraphs long but all he/she did was attack everyone who said anything bad about the story. Kinda weird.

 

[theWollstonecraftWoman]

My Buffalo Bills fumbled and stumbled their way to a pathetic loss to the Broncos just to make you feel better and you don't even acknowledge the healing power of an incompetant opponent?

We won fair and square. What turnovers there were were offset by all the bonehead penalties we had. Your guys' bonehead mistake cost them the game. But as good as the Bills are purported to be (prior to this week) as one of the most elite teams in the AFC, the Broncos shouldn't have been close enough to win on a field goal.

 

[gordo12]

A funny comment on FIDO:

Gotta admit this 5-star story is the best cuck story I've read lately, altho hot pants Cindy ended up on the short end of the stick. My wife is the one that feeds the dog so he sure as hell wouldn't rat her out.

Another comment on Transplant: Not so sure about the unbelievable part. There is enough evidence of the effect that it has generated scientific studies.

Unbelievable - but heartwarming.

 

[MillieDynamite]

Say what? What effect are we discussing, gordo?

A funny comment on FIDO:



Another comment on Transplant: Not so sure about the unbelievable part. There is enough evidence of the effect that it has generated scientific studies.

 

[gordo12]

Say what? What effect are we discussing, gordo?

Do organ recipients have memories of the donor?


The acquisition of donor personality characteristics by recipients following heart transplantation is hypothesized to occur via the transfer of cellular memory, and four types of cellular memory are presented: (1) epigenetic memory, (2) DNA memory, (3) RNA memory, and (4) protein memory.Oct 31, 2019

National Institute of Health: Paper.


It made for a great story, I thought, but you'd never know from all the "are you kidding me?" comments. But with some truth behind it, it does make you think!

Personally, I think it's one of the most imaginative stories I ever wrote. Old though, so punctuation wasn't great. Transplant:

 

[MillieDynamite]

OIC

Do organ recipients have memories of the donor?


The acquisition of donor personality characteristics by recipients following heart transplantation is hypothesized to occur via the transfer of cellular memory, and four types of cellular memory are presented: (1) epigenetic memory, (2) DNA memory, (3) RNA memory, and (4) protein memory.Oct 31, 2019

National Institute of Health: Paper.


It made for a great story, I thought, but you'd never know from all the "are you kidding me?" comments. But with some truth behind it, it does make you think!

Personally, I think it's one of the most imaginative stories I ever wrote. Old though, so punctuation wasn't great. Transplant:

 

[Candy_Kane54]

Just got this one for my story "What Dreams May Come."

Oh. My. GOD! I mean literally, right? The rest of the series was amazing; this story was incredible! I never would have expected a scientific explanation for Heaven (or any form of afterlife, if that term offends), but you've found one, and developed it inn excellent fashion.

 

[gordo12]

Nice comment on Hidden Boss:

Fun tale, my second read and it's as much fun the second time around. I have a lifelong thing for listening to rain hit tin roofs - caused by laying in tin-roofed barns as a kid but I'll go along with glass ones .......

 

[EmilyMiller]

I hope I’m not embarrassing her, but this from @Victoria14xs

When I read, I hope to be lucky enough to take in something “real,” something written because the author truly “had something to say.” Something the author couldn’t hold back - something inevitable and genuine and theirs alone.

This feels like that...

About A Good Woman

Thank you so much! Hard to think of kinder feedback.

Em

 

[gordo12]

Nice comment on Homeless:

Although quite predictable, I just love it - maybe it's my "romantic streak", maybe it‘s because I find myself in some places (I love children, but „it takes 2 to tango“ ... ) - anyway : 5/5 stars !