Favourite Fairy Tales - Modernized and Eroticized

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If little bo peep has lost her sheep, does that mean someone is using them?

 

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If little bo peep has lost her sheep, does that mean someone is using them?

the 3 lil pigs perhaps?

and what does bo peep do with her sheep?

and with a name like bo beep, she must be looking in at Little tommy Horner

 

[deliciously_naughty]

the 3 lil pigs perhaps?

and what does bo peep do with her sheep?

and with a name like bo beep, she must be looking in at Little tommy Horner

god I love you guys.

Does little tommy horner walk around with a big boner?


Gods we're getting crass here

 

[Tatewaki]

I'm posting the originating post again. Hopefully we can get some good discussions going on this topic.

-T

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I've read a couple of threads recently about rewriting Cinderella. That got me to thinking about other Fairy Tales. I think that they could be a goldmine of story ideas, especially for erotic short fiction.

So, on that note, what are your favourite Fairy Tales, and why? How would you like to see them spiced up? And would you like to see them modernized, or not? Often the "Once upon a time" thing is half the charm, but the stories themselves are timeless and could be set anywhere, and in any period.

What say you?

-T

 

[deliciously_naughty]

Thanks for reposting that T

So, on that note, what are your favourite Fairy Tales, and why?
I have always loved Rapunzel, Snow White and Cinderella

How would you like to see them spiced up?
Rapunzel...I think the story could be changed where the prince climbs up and finds the witch. She could use him as a slave, and be furious for fucking her rapunzel. And of course the prince and rapunzel's sex scene could be explicit.

Snow White...rather than the usual dwarves fucking SN, what if the step mother was jealous b/c sn's father was becoming interested in Sn and not her. She knows it's not reciprocal and sends SN away to protect her innocence. The father keeps trying to find her, so the Stepmom has to convince him the SN is dead (hence the apple...not poisoned, magicked). The prince is recruited by the Stepmom to rescue SN and take her away (and of course, induct her into sex)

Cindy...Although the stepmom as dom idea is fun, I think that it might be more interesting for Cindy to secretly lust after the king and for her to use the prince as a means to get closer to the king. She seduces him, the major domo and finally gets to the king...who ends up being gay and more interested in his footmen.


And would you like to see them modernized, or not?
I think we could do something interesting with them modernized, but it would change the story a little too much for me to want to write it. I wouldn't mind seeing someone else do it though.

 

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Snow white being lesbian lover of Stepmom? SM jealous of SW's attraction to PC, so if SM can't have her.....

 

[deliciously_naughty]

Snow white being lesbian lover of Stepmom? SM jealous of SW's attraction to PC, so if SM can't have her.....

that could work too

 

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Twisted Snow

which do you like better?

or should we each do our separate take and post to see who gets what feedback/votes/visits? Not that its a competition , doll.

 

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but do I dare write lesbian sex? I did in a couple of Loving Wives stories, but they scored mediocre. What do you think?

 

[deliciously_naughty]

Re: Twisted Snow

which do you like better?

or should we each do our separate take and post to see who gets what feedback/votes/visits? Not that its a competition , doll.

Grin, I kinda like that idea

 

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any other rules ( length, # or sort of sex scenes, "no no"s?)

 

[deliciously_naughty]

I like the idea of us each writing our version and comparing notes and such. I can try to give you a hand with the lesbian scenes...feel free to pm me about them. We can keep the board updated and such. I don't think there should be any other constraints.

Hey...anyone else wanna join in?

 

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I have begun mine. It is a modern setting. Dwarves are in the story, but perhaps not sexually ( so cliche).

 

[deliciously_naughty]

I have begun mine. It is a modern setting. Dwarves are in the story, but perhaps not sexually ( so cliche).

I'm getting started tonight (I was finishing up something else last night). I'm going to keep the fantasy setting I think, but yeah the dwarves are there but not sexually

 

[NASCARaddicted]

I gotta say, I am too tired right now to read through all the 7 pages. (so I don't know if this was already mentioned)

But there is this one (german) fairytale, that maybe could be used (I haven't read the original one since quiet some time, so I hope everything is right):


The Fairytale of Hänsel and Gretel

Hänsel and Gretel are siblings (just in case this names are uncommon for americans: Hänsel is male, Gretel is female - so maybe they commit incest). Their parents are poor, and so they evil dominant mother (I am not sure, but I think she is just the stepmother) tells the submissive husband to bring the kids to a remote place in the forest and leave them their (so that they don't find their way back.

Hänsel hears this, and so he fills his pockets with small pebbles. So, while the father leads them through the forest, Hänsel occasionally drops one of the pebbles to mark the way home (of course, the father doesn't notice this). So, after the father left them, they follow the trail of pebbles, until they are back home.

The stepmother is angry, and the next day, she tells the father he should lead them deeper into the forest. And before they leave, the mother also takes a look into the pockets of Hänsel and Gretel, to make sure that they don't have any pebbles in them.
So, the only thing that they have is some bread. So this time, the kids mark the way with crumbs of bread. But when the father left them, they notice that all the crumbs are already eaten by birds ... now they are lost in the woods.
They walk around sometime, until they find a small house. But the strange thing is: The entire house is made out of cake. They are hungry, so they start to eat a little bit from the walls and the roof. Suddenly a wicked witch comes out of the house. She is very pissed (you would be pissed, too, if some kids try to eat your house).
She catches the kids. She puts Hänsel in a cage, while Gretel has to help in the house. (in a Lit story, she could be forced to work as a prostitute)
The witch wants to overfeed Hänsel, until he is ready to be eaten. The witch is very short sighted. So, everyday, she grabs Hänsels finger to check how fat he is. Of course, Hänsel gets fatter and fatter. But since the witch is so short sighted, Hänsel fools her. Instead of his finger, she always grabs the gnawed bone of a chicken (on a lit story, it could be his penis, instead of a chicken bone). So, for the short sighted witch, it seems as if Hänsel never gets fatter.

One day, the witch prepares the oven (a big oven with an open fire). Gretel is standing behind her and suddenly, she gives her a big push, so that the witch falls into the oven and burns to death ...

Gretel releases her brother from the cage. (Maybe Gretel is glad that she doesn't have to work as a prostitute anymore, so she could offer her brother a free fuck with her.) So, now they find their way home (strange isn't it ? At first they couldn't find it, but now it's easy for them to get home). Anyway ... in the meantime the father was pissed, because he listened to his evil wife - he misses his kids so much. So he tells his wife to piss off, he never wants to see her again.
When his kids come back home, he is very glad to see them ...

 

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I'm getting started tonight (I was finishing up something else last night). I'm going to keep the fantasy setting I think, but yeah the dwarves are there but not sexually

dibs on " Twisted Snow" as a title

would you prefer I revert to the fairy tale setting for better comparison?

 

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Naughty Hansel and Gretel

I don't see any such stories on Lit, so go for it!

 

[deliciously_naughty]

dibs on " Twisted Snow" as a title

would you prefer I revert to the fairy tale setting for better comparison?

Nah...variety is the spice of life. You can have the title....I haven't found one that my story likes yet...but the final title usually hits me at the end of the story

 

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titles hitting deliciously

good thing we're not doing the three lil piggies....it might hit you like a Ton of Bricks.

being only half done the story, mine may change as well. Okay, I lie, I'm 4 paragraphs in....

 

[deliciously_naughty]

Re: titles hitting deliciously

being only half done the story, mine may change as well. Okay, I lie, I'm 4 paragraphs in....

better than me hugs...it's still bouncing around my head while I try to catch up on school work. I'll find time this weekend to get a good chunk if not all done

 

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better than me hugs...it's still bouncing around my head while I try to catch up on school work. I'll find time this weekend to get a good chunk if not all done

I think the isue is not free speech, but liability if someone acts out a fantasy posted here~an insane concept, but look at the Jenny Jones case, and the rock groups sued cause wackos acted out after hearing their lyrics.

 

[deliciously_naughty]

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I think the isue is not free speech, but liability if someone acts out a fantasy posted here~an insane concept, but look at the Jenny Jones case, and the rock groups sued cause wackos acted out after hearing their lyrics.

huh? what? confused as all hell right now

 

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huh? what? confused as all hell right now

apparently so was I- this ws intended for another thread.

I meant to say here that I've lost my momentum on snow...

 

[deliciously_naughty]

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apparently so was I- this ws intended for another thread.

I meant to say here that I've lost my momentum on snow...

no big...I'm two weeks behind in school so I need to do that right now anyways


I still plan to write mine when things cool down though...and if you write yours, I still want to read it

 

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no fear- I hope to finish it, just stalled.