Hardcore porn for women

[Dirty Slut]

Re: Is there a difference between male, and female porn?

Forgive me for asking, but I've been away for quite some time.

As Always
I Am the
Dirt Man

Nothing to forgive. Men just think differently than women is all. We might get off on the same things, but for different reasons altogether. Women tend to be giving in a relationship, but when it comes to sex, we need, nay we demand the same right to fully enjoy the act as much as you men, if not more. Luckily enough for me I've met a man who considers my enjoyment before his own. To him, I'm not just a pair of tits, long legs, and an ass to die over. We challenge each other daily, sometimes agreeing, but more often debating our differences in opinions. But I love him for that if nothing else.

DS

 

[Mhari]

Hmm. Well, all I can say is that, at least around here, "man-slut" does *not* have a positive connotation. Though I suppose I still see the point about using "slut" in general as a derogatory term...

 

[Vincent E]

You're right lou, the lines are pretty blurred. perhaps the only thing that might mark some of the porn for women is that there's actually a story.

That would kind of defeat the purpose of making porn. Let's face it, pornography with a story is erotica.

 

[TaffyJ]

Very interesting thread!

How about calling them dick-slaves?

I had to do some thinking about why I, personally, find promiscuous lifestyles offensive. My personal reasons...

Everything has sex, even garden slugs and flowers, in their own way. What makes us different as humans is that we attach so much social and emotional importance to this act that is, for us, intimate. In my elitist mind, I like to think of myself as more than just an animal. I like to think that human sex should involve something more than mindless biology. People who have frequent, indiscriminate sex with multiple partners seem to me like no more than dumb animals, scratching an itch. They seem to lack the mental capacity to realize they may be endangering others by spreading disease, and/or helping to cause emotional misery to others who are indirectly involved.

Next, my brain thinks of supply and demand. If a person is easily had, they must not be worth having.

I don't think the word slut should be whitewashed to make it all okay. But I do protest that there isn't such a stinging word to apply to men.

If a person enjoys sex and wants and has lots of it, then that's wonderful, as long as they are very careful not to hurt others. In a perfect world, we could all have as much nookie as we wanted without complications, but that's not the real world.

On the other topic...

My main gripe about most hardcore porn for men is that the women are attractive, but many of the men are unattractive, and just have big dicks. Worse yet are the ugly guys with average dicks. What the hell is that for? If I gotta look at his ugly face and hairy beer gut, he better be packing something signifigant to make up for it! Do we EVER see ugly women with no tits or ass in hardcore? If the women in porn have to be so perfect as to give the average woman an inferiority complex, then the men should be equally as attractive. In my hardcore porn flicks, I'll take an attractive guy with an average dick any day over an ugly guy with a big dick.

 

[bridgeburner]

That's one of the ways you can tell that most porn is made for men: average guys banging superior looking women. It's geared toward the male fantasy, afterall, and what guy wants to see some hot stud that he'll never measure up to getting the chicks? It's far easier for men to overlook the real challenge to their virility: stamina and the ability to shoot copious amounts of sperm several times a day.

Female porn stars don't have to really climax, but the male stars do. No matter how good looking or how well endowed, if the guy can't get it up and keep it up and shoot it off and then repeat, he's not going to get far in porn unless he hires out to do fetish vids where his cock isn't important.

 

[bridgeburner]

Things I'd like to see in porn:

Less "fixed" looking women. In general I don't find them sexy --- they look like marginally more life-like Barbie dolls. I'm tired of the over done hair and makeup and honest to god are there any porn actresses left on the planet who still have pubic hair and no piercings? All those pussies start to look exactly the same. It's trendy. Trendy pussy. How sad is that?

Less goofy, useless story. If your actors can't act then don't let them talk. Please don't write me any convoluted crappy scripts to make excuses for why some woman is screwing the entire football team and the watching janitor. I don't need a reason if it's going to be stupid. If you can give me a good performance and story on top of the sex, great, but honestly, don't bother if you're just going to make me roll my eyes. I'd rather just see people strip down and fuck because "Uh, it's porn, that's what we do" than have to suffer through even two minutes of the unbelievable cheesiness of most porno scripts.

I really don't care much for 15 minute blow-job scenes, or for watching women get sprayed in the face with semen and I've really got this kind of gag thing about other people's spit. I don't want to watch some woman hawking up a loogie and rolling it around on her tongue and dripping ropes of saliva. That's gross. It's one thing to do it and another thing entirely to watch it done, but I imagine it's not done for my benefit but for that of the men watching. ----If anything in the world could convince me that men might be the slightest bit self-conscious about the taste of their own ejaculate and whether or not women really like it, it's porn fellatio. You get the impression that these women would gleefully wrestle in kiddie-pools full of congealing spunk shoveling great gobbing spoonfuls into their mouths and snorting it like coke. Isn't this a bit of overkill, gentlemen? I mean, semen's fine, but it's never going to be a chocolate shake. So what?

I'm sure there are other things I just can't think of them right now. I'm starting to have horrid visions of the kind of porn that the "marketers" probably think women want. It's turning my stomach.

"more story, more romance, more clothes and nicer men"
It's starting to sound like "Precious Moments Porn".


-B

 

[sweetnpetite]

Re: Male and female porn.

This is FALSE

Woman like porn every bit as raunchy and degrading as men. (pay attention I already said that).

My first lit story was non-consent. I thought that all of my story's would be as that is my favorite category- but I entered the suervivor contest and had to write a bit of everything. Anyway, it is the story that I got the MOST feedback from women- and it was all positive. (The only negative feedback came from men who didn't believe that a woman would really be turned on by this)

The whole reason I said PORN for women, BY women, is because men *think* they know what we like- but they don't. Yes women like your stories, but they would never mistake them for one written *by* a woman. (Unless you are *extrememly* tallented)

We don't want more romance. We don't want more story. We just want to be more than a prop for a man to demonstate his sexual prowess. We want porn that acqnowleges us as the NOUN and the VERB rather than the OBJECT (gramerically speaking) Its difficult to explain to a man because porn is already aimed toward you. Its like explaining how dificult it is to drive a stick shift when your a lefty to someone who's right handed. Your either gonna get it or your not.

Porn for women is no different from porn for men EXCEPT is is "her story" not "his." In other words it is about her pleasure, her fantasies, and her satisfaction. She doesnt come for him- she comes for her. IF she doenst' come- if she's teased and frustrated, its because that is her fantasy, her pleasure, not his. IF she is raped, it is her fantasy (or at least the female reader's fantasy) not his. You can't explain it, you've got to see it.

(By the way ladies, feel free to post links of stories that fit the bill)

NOt all women like the same things in porn. I happen to like the overdone hair and make-up that bridgeburner is sick of. I like the cum shot, facial what have you. But I hate when they spit on a girls ass or pussy or whatever to lube her up. I like degradation, I like dirty daughter stories, ect. Porn for woman by women doenst' mean every woman is going to like every bit of it. It means that the womans interests and desires are considered when the stuff is being made. IF woman create porn that turns *them* on, other women will enjoy it too. No matter how depraved or sick it is.

Some porn involves the rape or general degredation of women, and that is aimed at men. Personally, I dislike that kind of thing, and I think most men do also. I never write anything like that except when it is a role-playing story, and I always emphasize that it is role-playing. I try to aim my stories at women and I have gotten some very complimentary feedback from women telling me how much they like my stories, and they use their fingers or a dildo or a vibrator to get off on them. Some women, especially those who have been posting on this thread may not believe it that but it's true.

 

[Black Tulip]

I agree with SNP.

Loads of women like stories about degradation, humiliation, non-consent, whatever.

I do not believe that all the FemDoms are just a fiction of the male mind, the same goes for the submissives.

As I said before, somewhere, it's about fantasy and women have those in the same degree of variety as men.

Don't ever try to lay an unwanted hand on me (I'm 5.8 or 5.9 with a lot of pounds to it ), but I like reading non-consent and mild BDSM.

And I can assure you, I am definitely a woman.

 

[bridgeburner]

Exactly, SnP and BlackTulip!

I totally agree. I like it rough and raunchy reading it or watching it. I like penetration shots and cum shots and filthy language. I cannot tell you how many mainstream films I've rented on the possibility that they might have a passable non-consent scene that I can fantasize into hardcore. The very idea that girl-porn should be hearts and flowers and period costumes all the time makes me ill.

Not all men like one kind of porn so why should all women? It's like a guy who's got one technique for giving head and he just can't understand when his new girlfriend doesn't like it the same as his old girlfriend. He's left thinking "Duh, women like it this way, right?" Women are individuals treat them as such.



-B

 

[Pure]

One of the queens of raunch imo is Linda Jean. I wonder if she fits your specs, SnP

http://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=15950

 

[Sshafer]

replie to Sweetnpetite

SP we think a like. On this board I'm running a Poll on a magazine. Go to poll on Lit mag and read over and tell me what you think. As I said in my last replie to poll. I'm think that women write better than men. Thats why I would slant the mag to reading for women and men. You and I are talking about the same thing only mine is in magazine forum. By the way I'm male and before I bed any woman I find out what they enjoy in bed what makes them hot. It makes for better love making if men would ask and liston to what women like to do in bed.

 

[Dirty Slut]

Re: replie to Sweetnpetite

Originally posted by Sshafer
SP we think a like. On this board I'm running a Poll on a magazine. Go to poll on Lit mag and read over and tell me what you think. As I said in my last replie to poll. I'm think that women write better than men. Thats why I would slant the mag to reading for women and men. You and I are talking about the same thing only mine is in magazine forum. By the way I'm male and before I bed any woman I find out what they enjoy in bed what makes them hot. It makes for better love making if men would ask and liston to what women like to do in bed.

I don't really think that we women write much differently than men. In fact I just got a feedback the other day accusing me of being a guy because of the way I write my stories. Nor do I think we women write better than men as per your generalization. And I don't think men write better than women either. Each author is an individual, and as such should be respected in that matter not lumped together with their sex, hair color, fashion sense, or what hair they shave off.

I think it would be a great idea though if more men asked what we individual women liked in bed, but then again it tends to take away some of the surprise of getting to know each other, doesn't it.

DS

 

[dr_mabeuse]

I've been staying out of this one, but I think I finally have to protest. I think it's pretty naive to think that only a woman can write for a woman or a man for men. Isn't that what we call sexism? The assumption that there's an inherent character difference between the sexes?

I noticed some time ago that I tend to write from a woman's point of view. That is, my stories follow her feelings and experience more closely than they do the man's. A man's feelings and emotions during sex are pretty basic: Can I? Will she let me? Oooh! I can and I will! Ah, this is great! A women's experience is much more nuanced and interesting. There's this fascinating ambiguity over being thought a slut if she expresses her own sexual desires, there's a tension between her need to be loved and her masochistic desires. There's all sorts of drama in her feelings and sexual responses you just don't find when you concentrate on the man's point of view.

To me, "men's porn"--if there is such a thing--tends to focus on what's done: what goes where. The porn I like focuses on the dynamic between the people and what she's feeling. So I resent being tarred with the "Men only" label just because of my sex.

---dr.M.

 

[Dirt Man]

I've been staying out of this one, but I think I finally have to protest. I think it's pretty naive to think that only a woman can write for a woman or a man for men. Isn't that what we call sexism? The assumption that there's an inherent character difference between the sexes?

I noticed some time ago that I tend to write from a woman's point of view. That is, my stories follow her feelings and experience more closely than they do the man's. A man's feelings and emotions during sex are pretty basic: Can I? Will she let me? Oooh! I can and I will! Ah, this is great! A women's experience is much more nuanced and interesting. There's this fascinating ambiguity over being thought a slut if she expresses her own sexual desires, there's a tension between her need to be loved and her masochistic desires. There's all sorts of drama in her feelings and sexual responses you just don't find when you concentrate on the man's point of view.

To me, "men's porn"--if there is such a thing--tends to focus on what's done: what goes where. The porn I like focuses on the dynamic between the people and what she's feeling. So I resent being tarred with the "Men only" label just because of my sex.

---dr.M.

While I don't write from a woman's POV as such, I do center the stories that I write more on the woman, than the man because yes, the drama is within the women, and not the males. To think otherwise is just plain silly, and uninformed, uneducated, not to mention inexperianced in the are of making love, or sex, or whatever you are calling fucking these days.

As Always
I Am the
Dirt Man

 

[sweetnpetite]

I've been staying out of this one, but I think I finally have to protest. I think it's pretty naive to think that only a woman can write for a woman or a man for men. Isn't that what we call sexism? The assumption that there's an inherent character difference between the sexes?

I noticed some time ago that I tend to write from a woman's point of view. That is, my stories follow her feelings and experience more closely than they do the man's. A man's feelings and emotions during sex are pretty basic: Can I? Will she let me? Oooh! I can and I will! Ah, this is great! A women's experience is much more nuanced and interesting. There's this fascinating ambiguity over being thought a slut if she expresses her own sexual desires, there's a tension between her need to be loved and her masochistic desires. There's all sorts of drama in her feelings and sexual responses you just don't find when you concentrate on the man's point of view.

To me, "men's porn"--if there is such a thing--tends to focus on what's done: what goes where. The porn I like focuses on the dynamic between the people and what she's feeling. So I resent being tarred with the "Men only" label just because of my sex.

---dr.M.

Dr. M Ilove you-

But, men have demonstated epeatedly on this board that they *don't* know what women want. (Oh porn for women, more romance more story line) We (women) *do* like the porn intended for a male audience (we've said that) BUT ther's an extra element that only a woman can provide. As you said, woman are more complicated creatures. You can only *guess* what is going on in our minds. you can know what it feels like to fondle a womans breast, but you can't know what it feels like to be her being fondled- you can only guess.

Nobody said you can only write porn for men. Theres a subtle difference between that and what i am saying. And from what i know of nen, they don't really understand these subtleties and complexities. They like to boil things down to "what's the point" There is nothing wrong with that- its just different.


What i am suggesting is a market nitch. Dirty porn for woman by women. The point is that it is neither *what men like* nor *what men think women like* but women sharing there turn ons with other women- from raunchy to romantic. My guess is that men would like it as much as woman would- but they would be shocked and suprised in many cases, just as many women are shocked to discover that they are not the only ones who like really truly nasty porn. Which is a secondary purpose- to let those women know that they are *not* alone. that there is nothing wrong with them, if men start taking over filling these pages with their stories, it defeats both of these purposes.

Its kind of like a "dirty girl support group"

"Hi. My name is sweet. and i'm a dirty girl"

"hi sweet!"

 

[sweetnpetite]

Re: Re: replie to Sweetnpetite

I don't really think that we women write much differently than men. In fact I just got a feedback the other day accusing me of being a guy because of the way I write my stories. Nor do I think we women write better than men as per your generalization. And I don't think men write better than women either. Each author is an individual, and as such should be respected in that matter not lumped together with their sex, hair color, fashion sense, or what hair they shave off.

DS

I agree that men and women don't necessarily write different- it's more the perseption that they do that causes the conflict. Men wrie fine, until they start to *try* to write for women. thats when they start to guess what we want and start trying not to offend us. lots of men on this board have made there guess at what "porn for women" ment and where wrong. They are probably all wondering right now, if we like the exact same thing, then why do we need a special market, (If your stll wondering, reread the thread- its all there) The point is, there are "woman's markets" but they don't cover all that women like, leading people to believe that that *is* all we like. I'm tying myself in circles trying to explin this. I need to stop, cuz i yhing anyone whos ever gonna get it has go it already and anybody who hasnt probably never will.

 

[SlickTony]

Hey, Taffy! Haven't heard from you in a long old time!

I understand what you're saying about promiscuity, but don't agree with you about the use of the word "slut." It's been used too long as a wholly subjective pejorative to describe any woman, no matter how broad or narrow her experience, whom other women in her community suspect is getting more than they are.

 

[Guest]

With all respect, i actually think there are fewer differences between men and women than most people think, gender traits are applied as a continuum, and many men have more 'feminine' traits than some women. We are a complex species, and sex stories are written about individuals, not archetypes.

And there really is the difference between 'male' and 'female' porn. Pornography appreciated by women is simply more sophisticated in terms of character and plot. It issn't necessarily written by women, but rather by anyone who can write well, and see into the soul of their characters. It is about people, and what they feel.

Classic 'male' porn, the simple stuff reduces women to objects, they are not complex creatures but things who are simply sexually available and built like Jessica Rabbit. it is written for men who do not know, or like, and often fear women. And many men fit into that category, because they don't understand that the people they're fucking are human.

I don't like that sort of porn. At all. It is simply bad writing that escapes because its target audience doesn't understand people, or care to. But sex is first and foremost about feelings. Perhaps some men fear the feelings that accompany sex. But really, they are what make the act special, and elevate it above mere masturbation.

When we really talk about 'male' or 'female' erotica, it would be better to talk about good versus bad writing. It is about writing for adults versus for emotional adolescents. I like well-written erotica. The good stuff works for all genders.

 

[Pure]

SnP I wonder if this is hardcore and female oriented enough to suit you:

from Got a Job, ch 3, by Linda Jean,
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=10782

[verbatim excerpt]
We sat down in a booth that was near the back; it had a very high back, and it circled around. I sat between them; the Jeff guy pulled me close, and he kissed me. When he finished, Johnny turned my face and kissed me. I felt my head spinning from the excitement of kissing these two men; I was naked under the sexiest dress, between two strangers in public place. I knew that these two men wanted sex with me, and from the looks of the rest of the men that I saw when we walked in, they looked like they wanted me. God forgive me right now; I wanted sex with them right now.

I could not concentrate on dinner at all; all I could think about was the wicked desire I had right now, going through my mind and body. Jeff put his hand on my right thigh, and since my dress was slit the way it was, he would have easy access to my shaved mound. I opened my legs enough to allow him access to me. I felt his fingers find my clit; I know it was swollen, and when he slid a finger inside my hole, he found me very wet. I know because he said to Johnny, “Shit Johnny you got to feel this; she is soaking wet.” Johnny wasted no time in reaching in from the other side; I had to open my legs a little more for both of them to have free rein. One started rubbing my clit as the other started finger fucking me, right there at the table.

I closed my eyes and just soaked in the wonderful feeling they were giving me. I found I my breathing was becoming labored because I craved a climax so bad. The way he spoke of me
somehow affected me even more. I felt like a dirty whore, or a nymphomaniac; I felt so fucking hot; I felt so warm, and the fingers felt so wonderful. I knew they where deliberately driving me crazy, getting me so worked up to want sex.

It worked all right. I wanted it right now. I wanted to climax so bad, but more than that, I wanted to get fucked. I mean really fucked hard, it had been so long since I had ever felt this worked up. Oh hell, I wanted a cock so bad; I needed a cock so fucking bad, my head was spinning with lust. I reached down to both of their crotches and grabbed both of them.

They were hard as rocks. I found Johnny's mouth and we kissed; we kissed as two hungry animals ready to mate. I turned my head to Jeff, and we kissed just as hot. They were really working my clit, my vulva, and my hole. My vulva was soaking wet, and I could feel the fingers sliding up and down the inside of the folds. I was moaning, and when we stopped kissing, I said, “Oh you two have got me so fucking hot, God I need it bad.”

I turned to kiss Johnny again, and I heard a voice ask, “Can I get you anything else, coffee, desert, fire hose?” It was the waiter, and when he said that, I stopped kissing and held onto Johnny and looked at the waiter.

Jeff said, “Yea. I think we could use a good size sausage about 10” long and at body temperature. Can you get that for us? There is a big tip in it for you.” The waiter was in his early 20’s, and his eyes were big as saucers as he watched them fingering me. He had a clear view of my open legs and both of their hands and fingers working in and on me. My legs were open for Jeff and Johnny; the front of my dress was lying to my side.

The waiter said in a very dry mouth, “Ahh, I’ll see what I can do. I think we have some.”

Just as he started to turn, Johnny said, “Hey kid, make it nice and fat; you know big like a black man’s dick.”

The kid or waiter almost choked and said, “Yes sir, I’ll find one for you.”

Jeff said to me, “I bet you're so hot, a nice fat sausage would feel real good right now, wouldn’t it baby?”

I was hot all right, but I did not want him to use something like that in me right here in a public place. I mean, My God, I couldn’t. I need a man, not a sausage. Trying to be convincing as possible. I said, “Whatever you want, I want; if you want to fuck me with a sausage instead of your dick, well I’ll take it, but I sure would rather have you instead.” I was hoping to somehow talk him or them out of it.

It was very hard to think like this. I mean those two were working me over, keeping me at such a high sexual state of lust. I went back to kissing them both, and before too long the waiter came back with a sausage on a plate, laid out with parsley on the side.

He sat it down in front of Jeff and said, “I hope that is the right size; I mean if you want a smaller one, we have it, but I thought you, I mean the lady, would like the fatter one.” I looked at him and then at the sausage on the plate. It was real thick and a good 12 inches long. I was thinking it was too thick for me. I closed my eyes hoping and praying that Jeff and Johnny were putting the waiter and me on.

The waiter finally left. Jeff whispered in my ear, “Are you hot baby?"

I moaned and said, “Yes, I’m so hot.”

He then said, "I’m going to fuck you right here with that sausage, and after you come, the three of us will eat it. Is that nice and nasty for you dear?”

I heard that and my tummy turned. I knew I could not say no, I did not want to do that, but… at the same time, it was so nasty it was exciting. In fact it was very exciting because of that. I decided it best not to say anything and just moaned into his ear. I closed my eyes as I felt a hand leave my bottom and the movement the arm made as it reached for the piece of meat on the plate.

I held onto Jeff’s neck as I felt the end of it at my vulva; it was not cold, or hot. It slid into me so easily, it almost shocked me. I knew it was way too big for me; however it slid right inside of me. Either they had opened me enough, getting me ready for it, or maybe all the fucking I had done today had opened me up so much.

I felt it enter, and God forgive me, I moaned with pleasure as it gave me an unbelievable sensation. I bit down on Jeff’s neck to keep from crying out. Johnny kept working my clit, and between the two of them, I was in Heaven. It was pure bliss. Once Jeff had a good portion inside of me, he started fucking me with it.

[end]

 

[Dirty Slut]

Originally posted by Pure
SnP I wonder if this is hardcore and female oriented enough to suit you:

from Got a Job, ch 3, by Linda Jean,
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=10782

[verbatim excerpt]
We sat down in a booth that was near the back, it had a very high back, and it circled around. I sat between them, the Jeff pulled me close, and he kissed me. When he finished Johnny turned my face and kissed me. I felt my head spinning from the excitement of kissing these two men; I was naked under the sexiest dress between two strangers in public place. I knew that these two men wanted sex with me and from the looks of the rest of the men that I saw when we walked in they looked like they wanted me. God forgive me right now I wanted sex with them right now.

I could not concentrate on dinner at all, all I can think about was the wicked desire I had right now going through my mind and body. Jeff put his hand on my right thigh and since my dress was slit the way it was, he would have easy access to my shaved mound. I opened my legs enough to allow him access to me. I felt his fingers find my clit, I know it was swollen and when he slid a finger inside my hole he found me very wet. I know because he said to Johnny “shit Johnny you got to feel this, she is soaking wet” Johnny wasted no time in reaching in from the other side, I had to open my legs a little more for both of them to have free reign. One started rubbing my clit as the other started finger fucking me right there at the table.

I closed my eyes and just soaked in the wonderful feeling they where giving me. I found I my breathing was becoming labored because I craved a climax so bad. The way he spoke of me some how affected me even more. I felt like a dirty whore, or a nymphomaniac I felt so fucking hot, I felt so warm and the fingers felt so wonderful. I knew they where deliberately driving me crazy getting me so worked up to want sex.

It worked all right, I wanted it right now, I wanted to climax so bad, but more than that I wanted to get fucked. I mean really fucked hard, it has been so long since I had ever felt this worked up. Oh hell I wanted a cock so bad; I needed a cock so fucking bad my head was spinning with lust. I reached down to both of their crotches and grabbed both of them.

They where hard as rocks, I found Johnny mouth and we kissed, we kissed as two hungry animals ready to mate. I turned my head to Jeff and we kissed just as hot. They where really working my Clit, My Vulva, and my hole. My vulva was soaking wet and I could feel the fingers sliding up and down the inside of the folds. I was moaning and when we stopped kissing I said “Oh you two have got me so fucking hot, God I need it bad.”

I turned to kiss Johnny again and I heard a voice ask, “Can I get you anything else, coffee, desert, fire hose?” It was the waiter and when he said that, I stopped kissing and held onto Johnny and looked at the waiter.

Jeff said. “Yea. I think we could use a good size sausage about 10” long and at body temperature. Can you get that for us? There is a big tip in it for you.” The waiter was in his early 20’s and his eyes where big as saucers as he watched them fingering me. He had a clear view of my open legs and both of their hands and fingers working in and on me. My legs where open for Jeff and Johnny the front of my dress was laying to my side.

The waiter said in a very dry mouth “Ahh, I’ll see what I can do, I think we have some.”

Just as he started to turn Johnny said “Hey kid, make it nice and fat, you know big like a black man’s dick.”

The kid or waiter almost choked and said, “Yes sir I’ll find one for you.”

Jeff said to me “I bet your so hot, a nice fat sausage would feel real good right now wouldn’t it baby?”

I was hot all right, but I did not want him to use something like that in me right here in a public place, I mean My God, I couldn’t, I need a man, not a sausage. Trying to be convincing as possible I said “what ever you want, I want, if you want to fuck me with a sausage instead of your dick, well I’ll take it, but I sure would rather have you instead.” I was hoping to somehow talk him or them out of it.

It was very hard to think like this, I mean those two where working me over keeping me at such a high sexual state of lust. I went back to kissing them both and before too long the waiter came back with a sausage on a plate laid out with parsley on the side.

He sat it down in front of Jeff and said “I hope that is the right size, I mean if you want a smaller one we have it, but I thought you I mean the lady would like the fatter one.” I looked at him and then at the sausage on the plate. It was real thick and a good 12 inches long. I was thinking it was too thick for me. I closed my eyes hoping and praying that Jeff and Johnny where putting the waiter and me on.

The waiter finely left, Jeff whispered in my ear “are you hot baby?’

I moaned and said, “Yes, I’m so hot.”

He then said, "I’m going to fuck you right here with that sausage, and after you come, the three of us will eat it, is that nice and nasty for you dear?”

I heard that and my tummy turned, I knew I could not say no I did not want to do that, but… at the same time, it was so nasty it was exciting, in fact it was very exciting because of that. I decided it best not to say anything and just moaned into his ear. I closed my eyes as I felt a hand leave my bottom and the movement the arm made as it reached for the piece of meat on the plate.

I held onto Jeff’s neck as I felt the end of it at my vulva, it was not cold, or hot, it slid into me so easily it almost shocked me. I knew it was way to big for me, however it slid right inside of me. Either they had opened me enough getting me ready for it, or maybe all the fucking I did today had opened me up so much.

I felt it enter and God forgive me I moaned with pleasure as it gave me unbelievable pleasure. I bit down on Jeff’s neck to keep from crying out. Johnny kept working my clit and between the two of them I was in Heaven, It was pure bliss. Once Jeff had a good portion inside of me, he started fucking me with it.

[end]

Nice story, but in all fairness I'd have to downgrade it to a 4 for crappy editing, spelling errors, and gramatical errors as well. Too bad she didn't take a little time editing it to make a 5, eh. But since I didn't go to the story site, I won't vote on it at all. Fair enough?

DS

 

[MR. Gibson]

you are right Dirty slut,( I hate calling you that because I feel I am demeaning you but that is your name on this site you chose for yourself) I agree that there is no real difference between male and female porn writers. But I do feel that women writers may get into feelings of people a little more then men do because women do that in general in our society. And I do want everyone to know that even though I do love a women who has a nice body I love her for her brain as well. Like just because I like women with nice bodies doesn't mean I think they are tramps. I definetly do not think that!I just wanted people to know that. And just because men may write a lot about ladies with killer bodies doesn't mean they think they are all sluts. that's untrue.because my girlfriend Buffy that I mention in my profile has a body like Dirty slut. and I know that DS and my girlfriend are bright women and should not be demeaned for their bodies! I think I said my peace. take care all!


MR. Gibson' erotic tales!http://www.literotica.com:81/stories/memberpage.php?uid=264926

 

[Dirty Slut]

Originally posted by MR. Gibson
you are right Dirty slut,( I hate calling you that because I feel I am demeaning you but that is your name on this site you chose for yourself) I agree that there is no real difference between male and female porn writers. But I do feel that women writers may get into feelings of people a little more then men do because women do that in general in our society. And I do want everyone to know that even though I do love a women who has a nice body I love her for her brain as well. Like just because I like women with nice bodies doesn't mean I think they are tramps. I definetly do not think that!I just wanted people to know that. And just because men may write a lot about ladies with killer bodies doesn't mean they think they are all sluts. that's untrue.because my girlfriend Buffy that I mention in my profile has a body like Dirty slut. and I know that DS and my girlfriend are bright women and should not be demeaned for their bodies! I think I said my peace. take care all!


MR. Gibson' erotic tales!

How about that, I have a body double somewhere in the world. Cool Beans.

DS

 

[MR. Gibson]

that's right DS, And you are certainly one of the top sexy queens on this bulletin board. (At least with me anyway)




MR. Gibson' erotic tales!

http://www.literotica.com:81/stories/memberpage.php?uid=264926

 

[Black Tulip]

SnP

Just to prove how right you were to start this thread:

Gallery Magazine is currently seeking submissions of erotic fiction. Gallery is a softcore men's magazine that has been around since 1972. Fiction submissions should be 2000-2500 words (approx.) in length, and written with a male audience in mind.

Subjects Gallery does not print include the following: S/M, pedophilia, male/male sex, bestiality, sex with minors, incest, references to drugs and/or drunkenness, sex for money, and using authority to manipulate a subordinate for sex. Otherwise, you may be as depraved as you'd like. And please keep in mind that stories should get to the sex quickly.

I found this little gem surfing on the net. Need I say more?

 

[MR. Gibson]

that's interesting info black tulip. thanks for sharing. some men are such pigs huh?