Horror story - rules/limits?

[Aurora Black]

Japanese hentai type stuff. I've had Britney Spears and Jennifer Love Hewitt abused so far. I have plans for a dozen or so more celebs over the next ten or so stories. It should be a lot of fun, but after having trouble getting Jennifer passed the last time, I've been reluctant to finish a few stories that I have in the works, afraid they won't get accepted.

Write them anyway and see what happens.

 

[Stella_Omega]

TheeGoatPig, I like hentai, but- Brittney Spears..
Why waste a perfectly good tenticle on such a nonentity?
oh, why, oh why?

 

[Lauren Hynde]

So my idea of the aborted fetus coming back as a grown man to take brutal revenge on his mother would be okay? Or not?

The category is Erotic Horror. In what way is an aborted foetus coming back as a grown man to take brutal revenge on his mother going to be erotic?

 

[SEVERUSMAX]

The category is Erotic Horror. In what way is an aborted foetus coming back as a grown man to take brutal revenge on his mother going to be erotic?

Oh, there will be sex. Just very rough and angry sex. Probably NC/reluctance type, except that there will be a strong Horror component to it.

 

[Lauren Hynde]

Oh, there will be sex. Just very rough and angry sex. Probably NC/reluctance type, except that there will be a strong Horror component to it.

I didn't doubt that there would be sex, I questioned the erotic element of it. If the story is about "brutal revenge", it's not about sex or eroticism. The sex is incidental and, from your description, "very rough and angry sex" of the "NC/Reluctance type", it would seem much closer to the type of proto-snuff content that gets rejected on a regular basis.

 

[jeninflorida]

I didn't doubt that there would be sex, I questioned the erotic element of it. If the story is about "brutal revenge", it's not about sex or eroticism. The sex is incidental and, from your description, "very rough and angry sex" of the "NC/Reluctance type", it would seem much closer to the type of proto-snuff content that gets rejected on a regular basis.

wow, lots of chatting. with my story the only sex, or sexy part is when she flirts with this man, to bring him to an ice rink, that is where he meets his faith. so no sex, and no snuff (had to look that word up, lol) so i learned something new today, time to go home!

 

[Lauren Hynde]

wow, lots of chatting.

That's what we do.

 

[SEVERUSMAX]

I didn't doubt that there would be sex, I questioned the erotic element of it. If the story is about "brutal revenge", it's not about sex or eroticism. The sex is incidental and, from your description, "very rough and angry sex" of the "NC/Reluctance type", it would seem much closer to the type of proto-snuff content that gets rejected on a regular basis.

There will not be snuff, because there is no death as such of the characters (aside from the early abortion, of course). The nature of the revenge is partly sexual. The other part is brutal. Is it erotic? That's a matter of opinion. I have read stories where men get their cocks bitten off. I don't find that all that erotic myself. For me, the eroticism is in the "grudge fuck" concept, which I find sexy. Not the rape element so much that is erotic, but the idea of sex between a man and woman whom he hates or despises. It's the mixture of sex and hate. But I understand why you don't find that erotic. It's a matter of taste.

 

[Lauren Hynde]

There will not be snuff, because there is no death as such of the characters (aside from the early abortion, of course). The nature of the revenge is partly sexual. The other part is brutal. Is it erotic? That's a matter of opinion. I have read stories where men get their cocks bitten off. I don't find that all that erotic myself. For me, the eroticism is in the "grudge fuck" concept, which I find sexy. Not the rape element so much that is erotic, but the idea of sex between a man and woman whom he hates or despises. It's the mixture of sex and hate. But I understand why you don't find that erotic. It's a matter of taste.

I didn't say I don't find the idea of grudge fuck erotic, or that i didn't enjoy the idea of very rough and angry sex between two people who hate each other. I was only pointing out that in the context of a tale of brutal revenge, the sort of sex you describe seems like the kind that gets rejected in NC/R as being too extreme. But you're the one writing it, I'm sure you'll know how to work around that.

 

[hotchkiss]

I got a story bounced because it was left unclear if the girl involved survived a ritualistic Lesbian Vampire scene! I had to rewrite and still do rewrite the ends of My Raven tales. Strange.

 

[SEVERUSMAX]

I didn't say I don't find the idea of grudge fuck erotic, or that i didn't enjoy the idea of very rough and angry sex between two people who hate each other. I was only pointing out that in the context of a tale of brutal revenge, the sort of sex you describe seems like the kind that gets rejected in NC/R as being too extreme. But you're the one writing it, I'm sure you'll know how to work around that.

I hope so. It's definitely my most extreme idea yet, and probably likely to be my most controversial. There will be some interesting challenges involved, including knowing just the right level of violence to write about. I guess that I'll find out. I guess I misunderstood your drift.

 

[SEVERUSMAX]

wow, lots of chatting. with my story the only sex, or sexy part is when she flirts with this man, to bring him to an ice rink, that is where he meets his faith. so no sex, and no snuff (had to look that word up, lol) so i learned something new today, time to go home!

Yep, we're all chatterboxes. No silent, stolid types here.

 

[Extreme Bohunk]

TheeGoatPig, I like hentai, but- Brittney Spears..
Why waste a perfectly good tenticle on such a nonentity?
oh, why, oh why?

*coffee spew*

 

[TheeGoatPig]

TheeGoatPig, I like hentai, but- Brittney Spears..
Why waste a perfectly good tenticle on such a nonentity?
oh, why, oh why?

Hey, I don't knock other people for their fetishes and attractions to whoever. I found Britney highly attractive before she got married and had a child (I wrote the bulk of the story three years ago).