dirty haiku

[Honey123]

rising high above
warmth penetrating downwards
the sun kisses me

 

[Honey123]

"seventeen haiku?" is posted.

revisions of what i think are the 17 best of the poems I've written in this thread (as of the other day).

feedback is, as always, welcome.


http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=489474

and definately worth the read!!!

 

[Honey123]

Biting down harder
juices dripping down my chin
Enjoying the peach

 

[nerk]

rising high above
warmth penetrating downwards
the sun kisses me

Biting down harder
juices dripping down my chin
Enjoying the peach

As ever, your poems make me want to be the sun and make you my peach.

 

[Honey123]

As ever, your poems make me want to be the sun and make you my peach.

held between my hands
lewd smile forms on my lips
pause before pleasure

 

[Remec]

Bear feasts,
sweetness dripping,
.....slips into cave

 

[nerk]

day 39

colors of sunrise
through tatters of mist - a glimpse
of her skin in lace

 

[nerk]

day 40

fern's fronds in the rain
sway and bounce - dancer searching
for the big spender

 

[nerk]

day 41

sound of coming rain
faster than understanding
remember that kiss

 

[nerk]

day 42

tall reeds jostling
men from town, come far to watch
the water lilies

 

[Honey123]

thrown against a wall
crushed, shattered into pieces
like a glass, my heart

 

[nerk]

thrown against a wall
crushed, shattered into pieces
like a glass, my heart

so sad

Lost inside adorable illusion

 

[Honey123]

so sad

Lost inside adorable illusion

protected by words
given shelter by the sounds
your voice to my ears

 

[nerk]

protected by words
given shelter by the sounds
your voice to my ears

building you a yurt
of language, filling you with
my throbbing diction

 

[Honey123]

building you a yurt
of language, filling you with
my throbbing diction

Lifting, settling
upon each word you raise
Enveloping all

 

[nerk]

Lifting, settling
upon each word you raise
Enveloping all

... gurgling ...

 

[nerk]

day 43

clothes piled on the shore
summer sweat stripped off her skin
by cold, cold water

 

[nerk]

day 44

After the Perseids



meteor shower
stars fall like panties in my
overcast bedroom

 

[butters]

After the Perseids



meteor shower
stars fall like panties in my
overcast bedroom

this smacks of wishin' on a star, har har
though i like 'overcast bedroom'. yes indeedy.

 

[nerk]

this smacks of wishin' on a star, har har
though i like 'overcast bedroom'. yes indeedy.

overcast night- no
falling stars, or panties
just wishful thinking

crap ... I think I improved it by trying to explain

 

[nerk]

day 45

still night, drinking with
the crickets
in the next yard
neighbors cum softly

 

[nerk]

day 46

her warm breath, soft lips
whisper - nothing to see but
fireflies in deep woods

 

[nerk]

day 47

bare trees, brittle grass
hard frost - warming your cold hands
under my sweater

 

[nerk]

day 48

passion fades and grows
Cicadas sing soft loud soft
all day, making out

 

[LadyGreyFortress]

bare trees, brittle grass
hard frost - warming your cold hands
under my sweater

This one ranks in my top three favorites of the days...so far anyway!