dirty haiku

[UnderYourSpell]

As there is nothing worse than a constipated poet ... I will endeavor to make it unnecessary to let me off a second time.

Sits back, feeling a small swell of pride that he managed to resist temptation and not make any cracks about making it necessary to get me off.

OK, I couldn't resist entirely.

*Goes away to write a turd poem*

 

[Remec]

Spent

cascading pulse
ripples the landscape
.....everything collapses

 

[nerk]

cascading pulse
ripples the landscape
.....everything collapses

very nice

 

[nerk]

day 32

toy carried away
on swift currents – eyes glisten
why did I say that?

 

[nerk]

day 33

fall trees blazing, foot
on the gas, your lips on my...
we're going to die

 

[nerk]

day 34

perfumed like a whore
kisses that taste of dark rum
night blooming jasmine

 

[Honey123]

nothing is as simple
as a flower in full bloom
yet so beautiful

 

[LadyGreyFortress]

perfumed like a whore
kisses that taste of dark rum
night blooming jasmine

love this one, makes me think of warm summer nights

 

[PandoraGlitters]

fall trees blazing, foot
on the gas, your lips on my...
we're going to die

liked this

 

[nerk]

nothing is as simple
as a flower in full bloom
yet so beautiful

so true
Thanks to the bee that made you!

 

[nerk]

liked this

love this one, makes me think of warm summer nights

thanks to both

 

[Rayven101]

mountaintop in fog
private for sex - the wind blows
"A Hundred Mile View"

Another one I like! Lots of images stir with this one

 

[nerk]

Another one I like! Lots of images stir with this one

Important lessons about reading the signs in your hurry to find a place to sigh.

 

[nerk]

Day 35

sensual granite
river rocks left bare by drought
rounded like girl's hips

 

[nerk]

day 36

listen to the rain
rushing across still water
waiting for her touch

 

[butters]

sensual granite
river rocks left bare by drought
rounded like girl's hips

listen to the rain
rushing across still water
waiting for her touch

you definitely have something going on with these. uh huh.


(not a ku, for all sorts of reasons, but a short)
thunder grumbles
thick air shivers
first drops appear

 

[nerk]

you definitely have something going on with these. uh huh.


(not a ku, for all sorts of reasons, but a short)
thunder grumbles
thick air shivers
first drops appear

a rose by any other name...
this smells very sweet.

 

[Honey123]

so true
Thanks to the bee that made you!

you're adorable
thank you for giving me life.

 

[nerk]

you're adorable
thank you for giving me life.

awww, shucks.
If I had anything to do with it, I'm proud of myself for it.

 

[nerk]

day 37

appearing through mist
across the lake, a lone spruce
hard as stone at dawn

 

[nerk]

"seventeen haiku?" is posted.

revisions of what i think are the 17 best of the poems I've written in this thread (as of the other day).

feedback is, as always, welcome.


http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=489474

 

[Rayven101]

appearing through mist
across the lake, a lone spruce
hard as stone at dawn

this one is beautiful....all you need now is the boat that takes us to Avalon

 

[nerk]

this one is beautiful....all you need now is the boat that takes us to Avalon

I like the cut of your jib.

 

[nerk]

A new story I've finally gotten accepted. A vignette about an experiment in Daddy Dom-ing. Any feedback is welcome.

http://www.literotica.com/stories/sh....php?id=487772

 

[nerk]

day 38

sunlight reflected
on ceiling - golden ripples
she glides over me