dirty haiku

[TheMightyPen]

by the waterfall
I took her from behind hard
wet and satisfied

 

[nerk]

This one ranks in my top three favorites of the days...so far anyway!

thank you

 

[nerk]

day 49

blue trumpets crawling
the walls, pressing tight to her
back, morning glory

 

[Honey123]

fantastic additions!

 

[mirandavillere]

these are awesome

 

[nerk]

fantastic additions!

these are awesome

thank you!

 

[nerk]

Two Shorts

poem
glimpse
feeling
garden toad
allude
ninja turtle
divine
ephemera

muse
hot
gift
inspiration
ravage
blush
thank you
cool
muse

 

[nerk]

day 50

find another way
she won't come out in the storm
tree down across road

 

[nerk]

day 51

secret gasps after
she cums – wren landing on branch
makes rain fall again

 

[nerk]

* edited spam post by dagwood

Accepted in that spirit, certainly, but I am curious how you'd work it.



I use the 17 syllable form as a discipline to keep myself from spilling all over the place, but obviously, it's arbitrary and not the best form in which to capture any given images.


some of the earlier ones got reworked here in less rigid form
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=489474

 

[nerk]

Day 52

morning fog clearing
by the bed, coffee cooling
taking her slowly

 

[Rayven101]

morning fog clearing
by the bed, coffee cooling
taking her slowly

I am catching up and this one I like....inbetween dreamstate and waking my favorite time.

 

[nerk]

I am catching up and this one I like....inbetween dreamstate and waking my favorite time.

welcome back aboard
this mind adrift between dream
and reality

 

[nerk]

Day 53

twisted by harsh winds
tree clings tight to stony peak
in his lover's arms

 

[nerk]

Day 54

on her knees, fingers
finding the root, pulling up
a perfect parsnip

 

[butters]

on her knees, fingers
finding the root, pulling up
a perfect parsnip

wonderful little write!

 

[nerk]

wonderful little write!

thanks

 

[nerk]

Day 55

salt taste on her skin
hips lifting her lips to mine
waves roll in and out

 

[Rayven101]

on her knees, fingers
finding the root, pulling up
a perfect parsnip

another one I like....enjoying Gaia's gifts...

 

[nerk]

another one I like....enjoying Gaia's gifts...

just wait til i start writing about your melons

 

[Rayven101]

just wait til i start writing about your melons

lol you could lump that in with Gaia's bounty! I just had a visual of you shopping for melons at the grocery store

 

[nerk]

lol you could lump that in with Gaia's bounty! I just had a visual of you shopping for melons at the grocery store

hefting and squeezing, sniffing and

... er ...

i just wanted to see if they were ripe.

 

[Rayven101]

hefting and squeezing, sniffing and

... er ...

i just wanted to see if they were ripe.

oh they are ripe! lol

 

[nerk]

oh they are ripe! lol

...must have a taste...

you know what a snob I can be about produce

 

[butters]

Accepted in that spirit, certainly, but I am curious how you'd work it.



I use the 17 syllable form as a discipline to keep myself from spilling all over the place, but obviously, it's arbitrary and not the best form in which to capture any given images.


some of the earlier ones got reworked here in less rigid form
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=489474

the spammer quoted my own post, nerk.