dirty haiku

[drown]

as if on demand...

darling,
make the fucking leap!

i will consume you.

 

[butters]

winter bends bamboo
down low - for no reason up!
it springs, shakes off snow

drag a pine needle
behind her knee – watch as she
pulls against the rope

i am really enjoying watching how these are developing with time, nerk. your imagery here is quite vivid, capturing the moment.

 

[Honey123]

How can beauty change
from a soft petal to a
memory of death


*sorry..just thinking of the roses I kept from my mother's funeral*

 

[nerk]

How can beauty change
from a soft petal to a
memory of death


*sorry..just thinking of the roses I kept from my mother's funeral*

It's an elegant expression of complex feelings.
Thank you.

 

[nerk]

i am really enjoying watching how these are developing with time, nerk. your imagery here is quite vivid, capturing the moment.

let me bash my head
against the wall enough times
and I'll start to learn

Goofy 575 response aside, I do see some development, and the support of this group of poets has been a big part of it.

Thank you.

PS. as cute as the new avatar is - and it is super-cute - i do miss your cleavage

*wistful sigh*

 

[nerk]

Day 62

watching a bee crawl
deep in a lily – my tongue
still tastes your nectar

 

[Rayven101]

watching a bee crawl
deep in a lily – my tongue
still tastes your nectar

This is fantastic! Brings many images to my mind.

 

[butters]

let me bash my head
against the wall enough times
and I'll start to learn

Goofy 575 response aside, I do see some development, and the support of this group of poets has been a big part of it.

Thank you.

PS. as cute as the new avatar is - and it is super-cute - i do miss your cleavage

*wistful sigh*

become one with
bricks, wall - understand
solidarity - love mortar




no smoothing over the judges

 

[nerk]

become one with
bricks, wall - understand
solidarity - love mortar




no smoothing over the judges

smooth?

solidarity
bricks, mortar become one wall
with love, understand?


I was hoping more for a bit of rough.

 

[nerk]

This is fantastic! Brings many images to my mind.

thank you
though it's a sad state of affairs when even watching insects makes me think of sex.

 

[butters]

smooth?

solidarity
bricks, mortar become one wall
with love, understand?


I was hoping more for a bit of rough.

you calling me a bit of rough?

*squints*

 

[Honey123]

Before you judge me
walk a mile in my shoes
then we may hold hands

 

[TexDanL]

Haiku times two?
Love rises from the ashes of passion

The rising complete
Let the coupling begin
Then there is just love

Passion spent, wilted
Let the true joining begin
Like a phoenix fire

 

[nerk]

Before you judge me
walk a mile in my shoes
then we may hold hands

not sure my feet will
fit in your shoes - holding your
hand does sound nice though

 

[nerk]

you calling me a bit of rough?

*squints*

Certainly not.

Not at all.

No, really.

Maybe a little.

Well what if I was, huh?

*oogles at avatar*

 

[butters]

Certainly not.

Not at all.

No, really.

Maybe a little.

Well what if I was, huh?

*oogles at avatar*

too many syllables

i may be east london, but i'm no chav or 'ender, got that?
good.

*pokes you in the eye with a daisy*

 

[nerk]

Day 63

pulling out the old
basil, finding lush new growth
thriving in its shade

 

[butters]

pulling out the old
basil, finding lush new growth
thriving in its shade

*smiles*

 

[butters]

cries in the night
waves rush, break,
sea foam on black rock

 

[nerk]

cries in the night
waves rush, break,
sea foam on black rock

beautiful

 

[butters]

beautiful

fanku

been too busy to be blogging of late?

 

[drown]

there is no notice...

i hear the ice break in you.

flow,


as if you could.

 

[butters]

ice-broken
moments melt
as vodka-tongues explore

 

[nerk]

Day 64

hide my face in your
soft flesh - let the sun find some
other meat to burn

 

[nerk]

fanku

been too busy to be blogging of late?

Aye, seems all I can do to get through the day and choke off 1k words.
Some people thrive in chaos. Some, not so much.