dirty haiku

[nerk]

Day 122

cold suburban night
smelling wood smoke, imagining
lonely wilderness

 

[nerk]

Day 123

chickadee will sing
all winter, til I forget
these other birds' songs

 

[butters]

the wind creeps through cracks
in these old walls, whispering
of the one who left

*sighs*

 

[butters]

ah! that is what most of these remind me of - small but weighted sighs

 

[nerk]

Day 124

dark night for tiny
vampires to stalk, but why must
they bring their parents?

 

[nerk]

ah! that is what most of these remind me of - small but weighted sighs

poor words, carrying
the dreary weight of my thoughts
in these gentle sighs

thank you chip.

 

[Obsequium]

Predominance

Been sneaking a peek now and then, big fan... So I thought I'd try my hand at this.

Inspiration watch every move,
Little chameleon playing in my threads,
Perdominance corrected her vision.

Enjoy...

Obsequium

"I staked my claim and made my mind a nation.
Border closed to all tourist".

 

[Obsequium]

Travel log

Travel Log... 02November10

Just arrived in Munich, settled myself in my hotel room for the next week of business and visiting a few old friends, stepped out onto the balcony and...

Dark velvet sky shines,
Migrating winged bird over the ocean fly,
Seductions breeze holds course.

Obsequium

 

[Tio_Narratore]

Aunt's desk discloses
Tales and missives erotic.
What is niece up to?

 

[nerk]

Aunt's desk discloses
Tales and missives erotic.
What is niece up to?

yikes!

 

[nerk]

Day 125 & 126

Yes, I was a bad boy and the one I wrote yesterday never made it out of the notebook. The paper one, I mean.

stones from the old wall
tumble down hill, looking for
the stream that shaped them

leaves cover the trail
rocks and roots lurking under
forgive me, ankle

 

[nerk]

I quite like this

Just arrived in Munich, settled myself in my hotel room for the next week of business and visiting a few old friends, stepped out onto the balcony and...

Dark velvet sky shines,
Migrating winged bird over the ocean fly,
Seductions breeze holds course.

Obsequium

such a strong mood, it's a glimpse of something wondrous.

 

[CharleyH]

Thunder mistakes my love
bright is the neon
my cunt is split by two

 

[butters]

stones from the old wall
tumble down hill, looking for
the stream that shaped them

i so like what this embodies!

 

[nerk]

i so like what this embodies!

I have a life-long lust for ruins.
seeing humanity's works laid low justifies my laziness

 

[nerk]

Thunder mistakes my love
bright is the neon
my cunt is split by two

rowr!

 

[nerk]

Day 127

in the park at night
she appears then disappears
under each streetlight

 

[nerk]

Day 128

rain confuses light
today, a handsome man wound
up in my mirror

 

[Obsequium]

Travel Log

Travel Log... 04November10

Still in Munich, had dinner last night with an old friend. Great company, great food, great play and great...

Mighty oak tree shakes,
Minks burrows securely beneath it's roots,
Crest fury, storm breaks.


Mmmm...Obsequium

 

[Obsequium]

Oooopppps....

Wrong keyboard.

Obsequium

 

[Obsequium]

stones from the old wall
tumble down hill, looking for
the stream that shaped them

This one stuck, rattling in the clutter of my brain, it shines!

Thanks for the imagery,
Obsequium

 

[butters]

Thunder mistakes my love
bright is the neon
my cunt is split by two

and now whenever i read your name i'll be thinking 'thunder-cunt'!

 

[nerk]

and now whenever i read your name i'll be thinking 'thunder-cunt'!

I want you to know that I tried, I tried really hard to not do this



Two men enter
one man leaves

 

[Obsequium]

Travel log

Travel Log... 05November10

Can't sleep, still a little zone disoriented. So, I try to look over my meeting notes. Nothings getting through without sleep. I need to calm my mind and just relax...

Soft pink hooded bud,
Gardeners fingers strumming notes the body plays,
Glorious rose left bloomed.

*yawn*
Goodnight, Obsequium

 

[butters]

I want you to know that I tried, I tried really hard to not do this



Two men enter
one man leaves

*snerk worthy*

Can't sleep, still a little zone disoriented. So, I try to look over my meeting notes. Nothings getting through without sleep. I need to calm my mind and just relax...

Soft pink hooded bud,
Gardeners fingers strumming notes the body plays,
Glorious rose left bloomed.

*yawn*
Goodnight, Obsequium

like the idea behind this, O - perhaps you could retain all it says without so many syllables, retaining the organic nature of the imagery but maybe losing the music allusions? entirely up to you, m'dear - all i has are suggestions.

like:

soft pink bud
a gardener's fingers
a glorious rose blooms