Poetry Discussion Circle

[BooMerengue]

Boo!

Find a poem and stick it up woman!

The deed is done, you evil wench!

 

[wildsweetone]

i know and i love you too.






it'll be great, you'll love what you learn, i promise.

 

[WickedEve]

Anyone want to offer up a poem? Poetry Discussion Queue

 

[WickedEve]

White by Angeline is now available for critique.

 

[WickedEve]

Poets, don't forget to check out the poetry discussion circle. Comment if you haven't yet. Also, consider posting a poem in the queue. We'll soon be needing a new poem for critique.

 

[twelveoone]

Poets, don't forget to check out the poetry discussion circle. Comment if you haven't yet. Also, consider posting a poem in the queue. We'll soon be needing a new poem for critique.

hey, yo, yo, yo, when are YOU going to post one?

 

[WickedEve]

hey, yo, yo, yo, when are YOU going to post one?

Anxious to rip into one?

 

[twelveoone]

Anxious to rip into one?

well maybe...
more anxious to read one
I know you find this hard to believe~ I'm a fan, sort of, I don't stalk, sort of

 

[twelveoone]

EVIE, EVIE, EVIE
lighter is on....

 

[twelveoone]

I swear Eve, if you don't...I'll submit another one...you all wouldn't want that now.

 

[twelveoone]

Ode to Senna Jawa

OM-pah, OM-Pah, OM-pah, OM-pah
all hail the king of dogma
while all the world slumbers
he sits and counts the numbers


Damn, that's alot of fingers


I warned you

 

[WickedEve]

I swear Eve, if you don't...I'll submit another one...you all wouldn't want that now.

I'm not planning to submit one any time soon. I want others to have an opportunity to go first. I'll be happy to set up a thread for a new poem and comment on the poem.

 

[Lauren Hynde]

I had a list somewhere of the people who had made enough comments to be up next with their own poems. Let me go look for it, or update it.

PS: I remember Eve was right at the top...

 

[WickedEve]

I had a list somewhere of the people who had made enough comments to be up next with their own poems. Let me go look for it, or update it.

PS: I remember Eve was right at the top...

Okay. Honesty time. I really can't take the stress of having one of my poems critiqued that thoroughly. I'm weak, and I've been on crack all week. I've been boozing and crying. I've been chasing the neighborhood cats and throwing rocks at cars. I ran outside half naked this morning and bit the elm tree in my front yard. Then I turned on a squirrel and... you don't want to know the rest. I'm not stable.

 

[Lauren Hynde]

At least you know how to have fun.

 

[WickedEve]

At least you know how to have fun.

Well, the squirrels do call me Party Girl.

 

[Lauren Hynde]

Here's a list of eligible poets who still haven't had anything critique'd:

- The_Fool
- Wicked Eve
- Vampiric_Mirage
- flyguy69
- Senna Jawa
- PatCarrington/TheRainMan
- Nickie Smiles
- cymry
- CrowSingsOver
- average gina
- jthserra
- darkmaas

One of you must have a poem to put up for discussion! Come on, don't be shy.

 

[BooMerengue]

Okay. Honesty time. I really can't take the stress of having one of my poems critiqued that thoroughly. I'm weak, and I've been on crack all week. I've been boozing and crying. I've been chasing the neighborhood cats and throwing rocks at cars. I ran outside half naked this morning and bit the elm tree in my front yard. Then I turned on a squirrel and... you don't want to know the rest. I'm not stable.

Ohhh go ahead Evie! Who knows? Maybe it won't be ripped apart- maybe it will just be glanced at.

 

[twelveoone]

Okay. Honesty time. I really can't take the stress of having one of my poems critiqued that thoroughly. I'm weak, and I've been on crack all week. I've been boozing and crying. I've been chasing the neighborhood cats and throwing rocks at cars. I ran outside half naked this morning and bit the elm tree in my front yard. Then I turned on a squirrel and... you don't want to know the rest. I'm not stable.

I was wondering who that woman was I was with all week ~ Crack Squirrel Challenge then.

 

[WickedEve]

I was wondering who that woman was I was with all week ~ Crack Squirrel Challenge then.

Um... I don't think we need a new challenge.
I actually stalked a squirrel this past Fall. He was twittering and twitching around my yard, and I followed him with my camera. He'd stop and look at me, then move a few feet, then look again. I have many photos of a big, bushy, blurry tail.

 

[twelveoone]

Um... I don't think we need a new challenge.
I actually stalked a squirrel this past Fall. He was twittering and twitching around my yard, and I followed him with my camera. He'd stop and look at me, then move a few feet, then look again. I have many photos of a big, bushy, blurry tail.

That was me, damn you, you promised...

 

[WickedEve]

That was me, damn you, you promised...

Oh, that's your bushy ass in the photo. Sorry. Easy mistake to make...

 

[Angeline]

Oh, that's your bushy ass in the photo. Sorry. Easy mistake to make...

I love the photos in your sig line. They look like aliens.

love,
Agnes

 

[Lauren Hynde]

Here's a list of eligible poets who still haven't had anything critique'd:

- The_Fool
- Wicked Eve
- Vampiric_Mirage
- flyguy69
- Senna Jawa
- PatCarrington/TheRainMan
- Nickie Smiles
- cymry
- CrowSingsOver
- average gina
- jthserra
- darkmaas

One of you must have a poem to put up for discussion! Come on, don't be shy.

Ahem.

 

[WickedEve]

Ahem.

What?
Oh.
If no one volunteers soon, then someone can pick one of my poems that they'd like to tear into. But my god, don't pick something crappy. I have some crap in my submission's list.