Pretty please, play with me.

[WickedEve]

Re: Hammer toes

Get a pair man...smack her ass instead of sucking her toes..haha

Incidently a hammer toe is when the toes are compressed...usually in shoes that are too tight over long periods...the tissue and bones become compressed and resemble a hammer on a piano....next time I am charging for the medical advice..haha

Blarney, I thought you were on your way to work?

So, do you think you could do a hammer toe, Red?

By the way, Blarney, thanks for suggesting the ass smacking.

 

[Rybka]

Current Poem

Will somebody please re-post the poem that is presently under construction? - This thread has veered rather off course recently and I don't know how far the work has progressed.

Regards, Rybka

 

[WickedEve]

Rybka

Sorry, I forgot about the poem. Okay, back to poetry posting only!

REDWAVE
I never realized
that your brains were scrambled
that your insides were churning and twisted
or that I
was perpendicular to your plane

WickedEve
I was clueless,
despite a precipitous trail of hints
trampled over,
and left to writhe in obscurity.

TheDR4KE
I didn't think
to ask, to look, to question.
Not so much you,
although it is you to whom this apology goes out,
but rather me.
Should I not have searched my soul and known ... ?

 

[REDWAVE]

Toe time

Yeah, but it's been a fun digression! Lemme see-- poem, what poem-- yeah, we were working on (playing with?) a damn poem here.

I was going to post it, but I see WE beat me to it. Look forward to your contribution, Rybka.

 

[Blarneystoned]

haha..I said I have to work the next three days...I have today off

haha...Im glad you liked the ass smacking..haha..

Im betting the good doctors is hurting right now....haha...I lured him in with hook line and German mine field...haha

I have to give him credit though for the banter....it showed intelligence..haha...Im only sorry he had to go get reinforcements...haha....I think he realized there was a hook in his lip and needed help removing it..haha

 

[WickedEve]

Re: haha..I said I have to work the next three days...I have today off

haha...Im glad you liked the ass smacking..haha..

Im betting the good doctors is hurting right now....haha...I lured him in with hook line and German mine field...haha

I have to give him credit though for the banter....it showed intelligence..haha...Im only sorry he had to go get reinforcements...haha....I think he realized there was a hook in his lip and needed help removing it..haha

Well, since you're off, why don't you add a stanza. I'm sure it'll be brilliant. Actually, I dare you to do. Double dirty dog dare ya!

 

[REDWAVE]

Please!

Somebody add a stanza, please! I think we've exhausted the subject of Eve's toes.

How about posting a photo of those tootsies, wicked woman?

 

[Lauren Hynde]

Re: Please!

Somebody add a stanza, please! I think we've exhausted the subject of Eve's toes.

How about posting a photo of those tootsies, wicked woman?

You are very impacient, aren't you, you commie cocksucker? It's summertime, things move just a little slower now.

I'll add one later today, for now I need to go take a bath. You know how sand gets everywhere...

And don't worry, you couldn't get me miffed with all the teasing in the world.

 

[REDWAVE]

Bath?

Do you need any company in that bath, Lauren? Want me to wash your toes?

 

[Blarneystoned]

what is the topic of your poem and what was your last stanza....

I dont want to scroll back 9 pages to read what was thought of...haha....next time triple dog dare me...haha..

Blarney

 

[Rybka]

Poem

REDWAVE
I never realized
that your brains were scrambled
that your insides were churning and twisted
or that I
was perpendicular to your plane

WickedEve
I was clueless,
despite a precipitous trail of hints
trampled over,
and left to writhe in obscurity.

TheDR4KE
I didn't think
to ask, to look, to question.
Not so much you,
although it is you to whom this apology goes out,
but rather me.

Rybka
I seldom sensed
how much it was I missed.
A little less is life worth now.
Shrunken my world
to grumbling in the gloom.

 

[WickedEve]

Thank you for restoring order, Rybka.
I like "grumbling in the gloom." Love alliteration!

 

[Rybka]

My pleasure WE.

You wrote:

Love alliteration!

Then you might like an old poem I wrote entitled Loon.
I just submitted it so it may be posted tomorrow.

Regards, Rybka

 

[Blarneystoned]

Ode to all the people I do not know

Chaos breeds life to a thread gone to pasture
Within its fences comfortable cows go wait for slaughter
Not realizing the combustible engine held within
The mind and the potential for things greater than self

Wolf waiting with a butcher knife filled with laughter
A raging bull out of milk, looking for your daughter
Who's your daddy? Let's begin
This wild ruckus and make to lend this thread some help

I call upon the dead and driven poets
Held beyond the bounds of life
To breathe some storm into this calm
And rain into the desert so it may bloom again

Blarneystoned

 

[Lauren Hynde]

Pretty please, play with me
«Let's play a poetry game! I'll write a stanza, and then someone else adds the next stanza, and so on...»





I never realized
that your brains were scrambled
that your insides were churning and twisted
or that I
was perpendicular to your plane
REDWAVE

I was clueless,
despite a precipitous trail of hints
trampled over,
and left to writhe in obscurity.
WickedEve

I didn't think
to ask, to look, to question.
Not so much you,
although it is you to whom this apology goes out,
but rather me.
TheDR4KE

I seldom sensed
how much it was I missed.
A little less is life worth now.
Shrunken my world
to grumbling in the gloom.
Rybka

I should have heard,
in spite of your hushed appeals,
the echoing throb of your ghost,
known your heart's desires,
the metallic taste of your blood.
Lauren Hynde

 

[WickedEve]

Everyone, anyone? Do you think we need one or two more stanzas to wrap this up? Someone else want to add to it? Karma, smithpeter, Lickmyboot, Goodguy?

 

[Lauren Hynde]

patiens, quia æternus

I think we still need 2-3 stanzas. There's no need to rush it...

 

[WickedEve]

No need to rush. I'll give everyone 3 minutes to contribute.

Seriously, the poem is turning out very interestingly.

 

[Lauren Hynde]

par est fortuna laboris

I think so too. I'm quite eager to find out what happens in the end...

psst, eve! why are you hidding? we all know you're here...

 

[WickedEve]

*whispering in L's ear* I didn't know I was hiding. I've changed my av, my location, my title under my name, my sig line. I must have made myself invisible too.

 

[Lauren Hynde]

Yeah, I wanted to talk to you about that! I'm in a maneating class in GB! I had to get someone to post nekkid pictures, another to write me an erotic poem and had to stalk yet another until getting stalked back! How did you get your diploma so fast?

I love your new avatar, title and location, Eve.
But your signature's priceless

 

[WickedEve]

I have to give old blarneystoned half the credit on that sig line. That was his rule #4.

So, did you pass the class?

 

[Lauren Hynde]

I have to give old blarneystoned half the credit on that sig line. That was his rule #4.

So, did you pass the class?

Of course! I even got extra credits for quality of the various prey and fine style of stalking.

Yeah, I know. I've been watching the blood from the side of the road all day, but prefered not to stop for help...

 

[lickmyboot]

I never realized
that your brains were scrambled
that your insides were churning and twisted
or that I
was perpendicular to your plane
REDWAVE

I was clueless,
despite a precipitous trail of hints
trampled over,
and left to writhe in obscurity.
WickedEve

I didn't think
to ask, to look, to question.
Not so much you,
although it is you to whom this apology goes out,
but rather me.
TheDR4KE

I seldom sensed
how much it was I missed.
A little less is life worth now.
Shrunken my world
to grumbling in the gloom.
Rybka

I should have heard,
in spite of your hushed appeals,
the echoing throb of your ghost,
known your heart's desires,
the metallic taste of your blood.
Lauren Hynde

OKay...I'm new at this add-a-stanza-chain-letter-poetry thing, so please kindly edit as you wish. (And I'm an awful speller--be forewarned!)

I bent to my delirium
the shadowed voices rushing in my ears
I pushed beyond your limits,
pleasure twisting to pain--recoiling back unto itself
I laid you bare


This is a lot harder than it looks!

 

[TheDR4KE]

This is a lot harder than it looks!

You did great. I'm with the others -- I really like where this work is going.

I am a little concerned that we won't give Red anything to do on the editorial front though

Quack

the D