RedHairedandFriendly
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Darkniciad said:. . . I'd say I'm up and running at full steam again
I so wish I were.
Looking forward to your addition.
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Darkniciad said:. . . I'd say I'm up and running at full steam again
Do you think the story will be ready to close by the dates I have included? Or do you seeing us needing more chapters?Darkniciad said:I'm trying to wrap up in time to get the edit through before midnight tomorrow *laugh*
Darkniciad said:I'd say that determination lies primarily with you and Slyc. The important thing is the final confrontation between good and evil, and the two of you have the most insight into the primary players in that battle. Ms.D will need to wrap up Benedict and Muriel, and I'm sure there are threads others want to expand on, but the primary conflict is up to the two of you.
From my perspective, I could wrap Guy at any given moment. I have any number of ways I could move him along, kill him off, or fold him into a nice comfy position for a while.
I should be able to get them in the sack in the third one, setting it up in the one that's due soon would give me plenty of time so it sounds good to me.RedHairedandFriendly said:MsD.... How are you feeling with the relationship between Muriel and Benny? What time frame are you seeing for them?
I'm sure slyc is more than willing to help ya out. No rush on the chapter either; we're flexible.Darkniciad said:I'm going to have to have a talk with Slyc about some things. Bags is going to have to tie into this one heavily, and I want to make sure I have his reactions to everything correct. Between time and my previously napping muse, I'm struggling. I think I need a little inspiration from Bags himself to push this one over the edge.
Thanks for checking in. If you need any help, just holler.Darkniciad said:In a PM back and forth with Slyc now. At least I know that I have Bags' reactions running true to character. I'm going to give DL a yell here in a minute, because he had an idea to play off something I'm starting in my chapter. Need to hammer it down so that everything meshes up and can be brought to a conclusion within the number of chapters we have running currently. May be a bit of a conflict between the two ideas, but I'm sure we'll find a common thread we can draw out of it to get both chapters over the hump.
Apologies for the delay. My brain simply wouldn't wrap around the period for some reason. I wasn't able to visualize properly, and things simply weren't flowing. I erased reams of stuff that read back as stilted once I let it simmer for a while.
Darkniciad said:Think I may be onto something now. Slyc just suggested the very first idea I had, which I'd back-burnered, and I'm re-thinking it. I liked it a lot, but scrapped it for a reason I just might be able to mend.
Problem is, it might cause problems for DLs idea. Then again, I may have an idea of how to work that out too, since he immediately follows me in the schedule. With a delay, it would be hard to pull off, but following chapters just might work.
By Gump, I may be getting somewhere, because I have images and conversations flowing through my head now.
Lemme go make some Hamburger Helper for me and the youngun' and see what simmers while it's simmering
deathlynx said:I can always improvise on the fly, you know that Dark...We'll figure something out, never fear...go with what feels natural and we'll figure it out in the end
Darkniciad said:Everything is hammered out now, so I'm off to write, and then to bed when I can't keep my eyes open any longer.
If all goes as it has, I should get home a little early from work tomorrow and have the opportunity to attack it again. I'm going to do my damndest to have the first draft finished by tomorrow evening to send out for review before passing it on to my editor. He'll likely finish giving it the once-over before the day's out.
Again, apologies for the delay.
We may just have to ressurect another thread soon, beause a certain silvery-haired lass is whispering in my ear about Halloween.
RedHairedandFriendly said:MsD.... How are you feeling with the relationship between Muriel and Benny? What time frame are you seeing for them?