MelissaBaby
Wordy Bitch
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I have tried writing the same Halloween story twice now, and just have not been able to make it work. I'm going to throw in the towel on it and see if I can't get something else done before the deadline.
If anyone wants to take a crack at this idea, have at it. A young woman becomes conscious in a cheap motel room, and realizes she is looking down at her own murdered body. She is a ghost stuck in the room, unable to leave. She finds that when the room is empty, she goes into a semi-conscious state, a sort of hibernation. When people are in the room, she becomes more alert. She feeds off the sexual energy of those who use the room for that purpose. But when darker events take place, she becomes a raging spirit seeking to protect anyone else from her same fate.
Seems like a good idea, especially from a voyeuristic standpoint, but I just can't get it right. So, if anyone wants the idea, perhaps for next years' contest, it's all yours.
If anyone wants to take a crack at this idea, have at it. A young woman becomes conscious in a cheap motel room, and realizes she is looking down at her own murdered body. She is a ghost stuck in the room, unable to leave. She finds that when the room is empty, she goes into a semi-conscious state, a sort of hibernation. When people are in the room, she becomes more alert. She feeds off the sexual energy of those who use the room for that purpose. But when darker events take place, she becomes a raging spirit seeking to protect anyone else from her same fate.
Seems like a good idea, especially from a voyeuristic standpoint, but I just can't get it right. So, if anyone wants the idea, perhaps for next years' contest, it's all yours.