"To keep the review thread clean..."

[Sara Crewe]

All that glisters is not 2-(p-isobutylphenyl) propionic acid, Highness.

I pick the lead box.

There's been an update in Belmont. The good casket is now made from kryptonite but luckily there was a second update to the story. You get two choices.

 

[Tzara]

Mrrmx!

 

[RhymeFairy]

Hi ya ...

I just had to peep in and get my spankin'. I know I have been really
remiss in my Thank You's to Art, and Blue for the mention of my new
poems last week. To some this might seem silly, to me ... the mark
and forgetfulness of a busy girl.

Also, I want to mention how appreciative I am of the readers
and writers here. It takes time to do all we do, and to find that
time each and every day requires real commitment.
I Thank You for the mention, the reads, votes, and especially
the criticism, even if in a private email, lol.

Just had to let ya'll ... everyone know I am feelin' tha love and
Thank You for taking the time to do all you do here at Lit. and on
the Poerty Boards, my home away from home ~




...

 

[4degrees]

fuck thats awesome, A.

 

[joeys-game]

glassbags

"auntie what's eating you behind your eye?"

street people
the corner holds a market
that can only be seen when the moon is hiding from
her children

dirty men from huts beside the freeway
sell select cut meat still cold of course,
of course

women stand as if all ready spread and exposed
never knowing that the fact that they were willing was the thing paid for
what came after was just for show

shine men reflect false moon
light selling swallowing in moths whole
fish bowling them in their bellies
moth eyes change swelling false moon reflect

but

the guy with the glassbags
the only one not product on display
not open with need
not thumping good book

Thats are man

he puts magic hour on the map
souls at peace
crystals cut pain ventricle but leave jagged drooling scabs
magnify kaleidoscope the little beautie I see
but sever the finger-snap connected color in my eye

Really enjoying your stuff..great imagery!

 

[wildsweetone]

Really enjoying your stuff..great imagery!

i've got to agree, great imagery and an amazing way with words. far out!

 

[Lauren Hynde]

and from yesterday, Lauren, what is your poem about? I feel like I accidentally mixed in some psilocybin with my portabello sauce...and that is upsetting to me.. I guess its the jazz influence lost on me, I havent a clue there either...

Hi, Maria!

I don't like having to explain a poem word by word - otherwise it makes reading it no fun at all - but let's just say it is fundamentally about non-conformity and about how strict adherence to rules imposed by third parties kills the soul. I think all elements in the poem point towards those two things.

And a big thank you to Tzara and everyone who commented or read.

 

[Guest]

Thank you Maria for mentioning my poem, 'Fight Club' in your reviews. Also much thanks to those who took the time to comment.

 

[vampiredust]

Thanks to everyone who read and/or commented on my latest poems

Hugs go out to you all

 

[mvrk101]

Nice, I like your stuff,

 

[4degrees]

sorry i hijacked.
i am too easily provoked.

 

[RhymeFairy]

Thank You Art for the mention of my new poem * Release~
Also hugs going out to LeBroz and 4 Degrees for their kind comments. I do know this is not one of my better writes, but I like the spice and it felt good saying what I had to say ...

I also have to Thank all other readers.

I appreciate everyones continued support of all my rambling thoughts and visions.

 

[Many Feathers]

Wow...

A bit of Romance and Rosewater this morning... with
Heart Keeper by Many Feathers
as he woos a soft pen..

***

Coloring a fairy world image
Firefly by virgin_not leaves a soft sigh...

***


All I have time for today and...MyNecroticSnail Are you just playing puns...with MIP's?

I'm truly flattered Rains...*grin* Thank you.

 

[joeys-game]

Thanks to Liar for mentioning my new poem..Feeling It..and thanks to all who read and/or commented

 

[Guest]

Thanks to 4degrees for the mention of my very un-vanilla poem, 'Switch' and mostly thanks to those that have commented.

 

[4degrees]

glad you enjoyed, tzara. coked up on pentothal and caffeine is a confusing combo for me, i can't tell if i'm up or down, hense the erratic poetics.

curt

 

[duckiesmut]

Mr. Fly, I'm going to have to give Fridays back to you or another helpful individual.

Work..*****...yadayadayada.

 

[Christina O. Leigh]

Sorry, Eve. *sigh*

 

[WickedEve]

Deleting people's posts again. What a cunt!

I did not delete any posts.

 

[Christina O. Leigh]

 

[Christina O. Leigh]

 

[Christina O. Leigh]

 

[WickedEve]

I did not delete your posts or anyone's posts. I did not move our posts to this thread. But I agree with them being moved. I do not know of your troubles, but please do not drag me into your dark place.

In the spirit of the holiday (which I choose to celebrate, and perhaps you do, too.) I will say a prayer for your emotional health and happiness, dear saldne.

I have nothing else to say on this matter.

peace,
eve

 

[flyguy69]

Mr. Fly, I'm going to have to give Fridays back to you or another helpful individual.

Work..*****...yadayadayada.

I'm so sorry that I didn't see this until now, duckie! Thanks for covering Fridays as long as you have.

I didn't see this because I haven't been around much, and that isn't going to change for awhile. Can anyone else pick up the Friday reviews? There's a free hard-boiled egg in it for you. Two, even.

 

[bluerains]

I have thought about that...what do you suggest we do.. would be nice to link the comment with the forum...

Suggestion: New poets may need more direction to find this thread than the basic comment: "mentioned on today's review*"