Comments That Make Your Day

[Lifestyle66]

With my latest story, "Abuse Addict", about a Special Forces sniper/team sergeant/retired mercenary who divorces the wife who raise their kids (equitable 50/50 divorce with no BTB), and picks up a gangbang slut who only wants his undivided attention to watch her with his bourbon in hand ONE DAY PER MONTH ... in exchange for unlimited sex the rest of the month ... I received the following (sample of several dysfunctional opinions):
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"Anonymous user on 7 hours ago

I shudder to think we have special force ops like this guy LOL.

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Wow! This anonymous must think Spec Ops people are as ignorant as he is!

 

[kathyisgr65]

Ur as horny as u are smart...why ty kind sir

 

[oneagainst]

Awesome comment from fellow writer Cali_Love on oh so controversial romance Back to Where It Almost Began:



The only Christmas present I need.

Lol... "too good for Lit"! Rock on!

Some of the best writing I've ever read is on Lit, you're in good company...! (Seriously, have you *SEEN* what passes muster for a netflix series these days?)

 

[Publius68]

From the recent responses to Father Christmas:

So I decided to start reading the Contest Story, looked down the list and your title caught my eye. Heck yes, start at #3 and work back up.

Well, in my mind you have woven a new Christmas classic for all the adults of the world! Very well written, could not put it down. Thank you for this story, brighten my Holiday Spirit's

Merry Christmas and Happy New Year to you and your family.

The most recent comments I've gotten on this story have all ended like this one, which warms my heart.

"A new Christmas Classic..." Not bad for a short little stroker that turned into a longer stroker, then, when I wrote the second sentence about Samantha, turned into a ten-page Romance...

 

[FifthEstate]

Anonymous about 20 hours ago
This was a nice one about my 9 chapter saga titled
Warden’s Wife Pays His Debt.

This was the best series I ever read. I felt so bad when Mylo’s time was up because his adventures were fascinating and I wanted more. However, the story was tied up quite nicely. Thank you for the amazing content, sir. You are remarkable.

 

[StillStunned]

Last night's milestone (100k views for Too Cold Not to Fuck) apparently piqued @dmallord's curiosity:

And to think it all started out with something 'too little' to keep him warm. Nice story starter.

Thanks! Be sure to check out the sequels: Too Hot Not to Fuck and Too Early Not to Fuck.

 

[MelissaBaby]

Last night's milestone (100k views for Too Cold Not to Fuck) apparently piqued @dmallord's curiosity:


Thanks! Be sure to check out the sequels: Too Hot Not to Fuck and Too Early Not to Fuck.

A rebuttal

Too Drunk To Fuck

 

[StillStunned]

Three new comments just got posted on my stories, so I feel justified in boasting here yet again.

On Flesh for Another Fantasy
from @forgotmyantidepressants:

I enjoyed this very much. The end was very sweet

from @AlexFourways:

Great story for a quicky!

Thanks!

And Anonymous has caught up with their reading and posted this on Too Early Not to Fuck:

Okay you've left a nice well wrapped plot thread, "Sal beamed. "Great idea, big brother!" She took Aisha's hand and pulled her towards the door. "We'll make coffee and exchange secrets while we wait."
As she closed the door behind Aisha and herself, the look she gave me spelled trouble." Author my mischievous acquaintance, are you planning for Sal to rope in Aisha? I sure hope so but it'll still be wonderful to see more regardless

Confession: I completely forgot about Sal and Aisha going off to gossip together. Oh well, this might lead to another story for New Year's Eve.

 

[EmilyMiller]

The lovely @FreyaGersemi on Heaven & Hole:

“Outstanding!!!! When I grow up, I want to be Emily Miller!! Or at least able to write as well!!!”

What an amazing Xmas gift .

Em

 

[Phantom300]

Second one in 2 weeks commenting on the construction of the story. Not something I even thought about honestly.

 

[ShelbyDawn57]

Just got this one on my latest; Sweet Wine and Apple Pie. May be the first to actually address the technical aspects of a story I wrote and to emphasize stuff I worked pretty hard on. Made me feel like I just might know what I'm doing, occasionally

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Excellent, a good old style love story.it had a plot established, detail about the characters, 2nd work plot dtailed together and flowing from one plot to the next, everything was in context and characters, plot, direction, all culminated in a successful ending

 

[gordo12]

Christmas has come early! ❄ A 5* From our dear old friend 26thNC on Homeless: I made him cry!

by 26thNC  on 2 hours ago

A great story that is worth much more than the *5 I gave it. After more than 30 years as a soldier and then big city ER and trauma RN, I have seen and done too much to be very sentimental. Very few stories in Literotica raise any emotion other than anger or disgust that anyone could be so sick. But this story actually brought tears. That takes some good writing, and you did it here. Thanks for posting it.

 

[gordo12]

And an ANON gives a nice comment on Sir Peter Renton:

Great story, I’ve missed your stuff. Don’t really understand how you feel that you don’t fit into lit as it’s a broad church and not everyone wants tons of graphic sex

 

[joy_of_cooking]

From Her First Foot Boy:

I have been reading erotica for about as long as I've known what my hand can do to myself, and fetish/BDSM stuff for almost as long. This is hands down the best story I've ever read. Not even close. I hope you have the motivation to write more in this series (because I love these characters) or at least in this style and genre. You have an amazing talent for blending the sexual aspect with the human which makes the work so much better.

 

[dmallord]

This from Red String of Fate:

"Absolutely excellent. Very romantic. A story of a deceitful partner destroying a relationship leading to a relocation to an opportunity for a new beginning in employment and acquaintances. I never look for any story to have a now and herever after termination unless it is a global nuclear holocaust which will ultimately be superseded by a natural rebirth. There could be a variety of paths for the red silk thread to lead to in the weeks, months, years ahead. Each of these might lead to a series of inter-related events in multiple generations. What would you prefer? For one of Minami’s father's actors to terminate Ethan surreptitiously and take Minami into a domesticity she would abhor? Or for Ethan to remain in his stifling tech position, hesitant to sweep Minami into matrimony as he watches Minami wait hopefully for an elapsing three weeks until she drinks her final fatal tea? There are many possible endings to dmallord's wonderful story. The beauty of the story at this point is that it leaves each of us the opportunity to write our own sequel of events hereafter to suit our own desire and fantasy."

It distills the content and rebukes some others for leaving it an open-ended Romance story. I appreciate that insight very much.

 

[Lifestyle66]

Another from my story "Abuse Addict":
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I didn't even read the story!!
by bhill8671  on 12/22/2023
I am a FORTY YEAR survivor of Emotional abuse and I can tell you that there is NOTHING funny, sexy or erotic about it at all!!! While physical abuse is very, very bad; In my opinion and my opinion only, emotional abuse is worse by far!!! With physical abuse, you can see the scars, BUT, with emotional abuse, the scars ARE HIDDEN!!! I pray to God that you do not have a family! Because, if you do, they should run from you as far and as fast as possible!!! You are a sick individual!!!
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If he didn't read the story, he doesn't know who or how anyone in it was abused. This comment goes to show how some people are easily triggered, and open stories just to 1-bomb them without reading.

 

[ShelbyDawn57]

Another from my story "Abuse Addict":
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I didn't even read the story!!
by bhill8671  on 12/22/2023
I am a FORTY YEAR survivor of Emotional abuse and I can tell you that there is NOTHING funny, sexy or erotic about it at all!!! While physical abuse is very, very bad; In my opinion and my opinion only, emotional abuse is worse by far!!! With physical abuse, you can see the scars, BUT, with emotional abuse, the scars ARE HIDDEN!!! I pray to God that you do not have a family! Because, if you do, they should run from you as far and as fast as possible!!! You are a sick individual!!!
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If he didn't read the story, he doesn't know who or how anyone in it was abused. This comment goes to show how some people are easily triggered, and open stories just to 1-bomb them without reading.

Besides, he's wrong. If dealt with appropriately, abuse can be quite funny. A snippet from one of my stories. BTW, the character Liz is based on my ex, who just happens t have BPD, so I know a bit about abuse... Ah, sweet revenge, even if it is fictional. So therapeutic. LOL


We ordered and ate and talked, all five of them pestering me with questions about how it felt and was I enjoying myself. It was magic until I saw Liz in the mirror.

I watched as she walked across the restaurant to the table. “Christy, David, I didn’t know you were coming to town. We could have done dinner as a family.” Spite and vitriol dripped from Liz’s words as she glared at Carla.

“We are mother,” Christy almost matched her tone. The look on David’s face was a little scary. Neither of them had forgiven their mom for her stunt with the email. Liz flinched at the response; she was standing right next to me and hadn’t even noticed; I was waiting for the moment she did.

“Well, if that’s true, where’s your father?” That famous arrogance showed up.

“He’s sitting right next to you.” It was Carla’s turn. “And thank you for the lovely letter you had your friend Connie send to me and the kids. It helped me see just what a wonderful man Michael really is. I mean, to have put up with a bitch like you for as long as he did.” I never wanted Carla to look at me the way she glared at Liz.

Liz’s face went white as it hit her what she was seeing, her mouth falling open and her words leaving her as her eyes darted from Christy, to David, to Carla and then to me. I just smiled and waved.

“Actually mom,” it was Terrance, “I don’t think Michael really works tonight, I was thinking she looks more like a Michelle. What do y’all think?” he had emphasized ‘she,’ glancing at his brother and sisters and then at me. “Dad, are you ok with Michelle when you’re dressed?” I smiled and nodded.

It was Terrance, calling me dad that did it. Liz screamed, full-blown horror movie, teenage girl about to get killed by the bad guy screamed, right there in the restaurant. Turning on her heel, she tried to run away and fell over the table behind her, knocking their food and drinks on the floor, covering herself in pasta and a variety of sauces. The marinara matched the red in her face.

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EDIT: And the comment that validated the scene. (Got to keep with the theme of the thread, after all)

Really, really loved Liz’s reaction when she met Michelle at the Italian restaurant, the scream was the perfect touch.
Love, Mimi
BTW: I love all your stories
Xoxoxo

 

[EmilyMiller]

This, from the lovely @dmallord, made my day in two ways? First his kind words. Second lovely to see him back and hopefully in better health.

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The imagery was beautiful, as was your storytelling choice of words, e.g., Scintillating Sapphires Set in a Sea of muted freckles - those 'esses' slithering off the tongue seemed extra nice. And where does one find, ever, a sea of muted freckles in a story in Lit? A couple of spots caused me to stumble - that first-person back-and-forth thing you mentioned, but all is well - as well for Noelle and Mark as you closed the story, too. What is that old saying – Less is More?

— A Holiday Wish

 

[ShelbyDawn57]

This, from the lovely @dmallord, made my day in two ways? First his kind words. Second lovely to see him back and hopefully in better health.

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The imagery was beautiful, as was your storytelling choice of words, e.g., Scintillating Sapphires Set in a Sea of muted freckles - those 'esses' slithering off the tongue seemed extra nice. And where does one find, ever, a sea of muted freckles in a story in Lit? A couple of spots caused me to stumble - that first-person back-and-forth thing you mentioned, but all is well - as well for Noelle and Mark as you closed the story, too. What is that old saying – Less is More?

— A Holiday Wish

Well deserved. Story got my 5 stars...

 

[Smuttyandfun]

A nice comment on 'A Perfect Christmas' from KachinaDoll:

KachinaDoll17 minutes ago
8am Christmas morning. A lovely, sexy, soppy, romance. Thank you. Just what I needed. Time to give hubby his special present.

Thanks. And I hope you have a lovely Christmas.

 

[Stimtheone]

This one made a whole month

 

[EmilyMiller]

Our own @lc69hunter

“Em, this story puts you in the realm of authors along with @TarnishedPenny , which is rarified territory in my book”

About: A Holiday Wish

‘Em

 

[ShelbyDawn57]

Got to love comments like these from Revenge Served Cold with Vodka Neat

A truly amazing story. Don't let anyone tell you different.

 

[EmilyMiller]

Wow! Just wow! From the way too kind @FreyaGersemi

“Stunning! I am speechless at the feet of Ms. Miller's wonderful imagination and unparalleled wordcraft. And for anyone reading this comment thinking I'm exaggerating, I urge you to read the story and THEN tell me I'm exaggerating. I guess I'm not that speechless after all.”

About: A Holiday Wish

Em

 

[FreyaGersemi]

All true!! Read her stories!!!!