LitWridoNaNoWriMo 2004 - The Support Thread

[Liar]

Grats to everyone who has finished

I thought about p[osting an excerpt from mine, but didn't wanna embarass Lou

Are you sayoing that there is not one snippet of all fifty thousand words that wouldn't embarrass Lou? That's one major achievement.

 

[Guest]

Are you sayoing that there is not one snippet of all fifty thousand words that wouldn't embarrass Lou? That's one major achievement.

Quite! LOL!

 

[Colleen Thomas]

Are you sayoing that there is not one snippet of all fifty thousand words that wouldn't embarrass Lou? That's one major achievement.

LOL, the one I was planning on posting might

Still editing the majority of those 50K words

 

[Colleen Thomas]

HA! Like that's likely to happen.

Go for it!

I'm just about to break through 30,000, btw!

Grats Lou Lou

Alarms screamed, the stars rotated violently and the g forces pressed Lou back into the padded seat.

“Bollocks!” she exclaimed, punching several buttons and jamming her foot down on the tail rudder petal. The ship continued to spin, increasing the G’s, until her hands were forced back to her body and she couldn’t move them. The planet was rising to meet her, filling the view port and she felt like she would pass out as her vision began to go red.

The motions stopped, alarms went silent, the screens went dark and the star field and planets faded, leaving her panting and staring at gray walls.

“Fuck me,” she panted.

Lucky stood next to the cockpit, staring at her. Lou was apprehensive, removing her helmet and looking up at the instructor. Lucky’s face was grave and Lou started to worry, until she realized the tall woman was fighting back a grin.

The dark headed trainee smiled tentatively and Lucky chuckled while shaking her head.

“Bollocks?”

“It means bullshit,” she said, blushing slightly.

The busty instructor burst out laughing, before climbing into the simulator behind the startled trainee.

“Nina, take it back up,” she called.

Lou felt Lucky’s full breasts in her back and shivered when the instructor’s fingers closed over her hands on the controls.

The star field faded back into existence and the lights came back up on the control panel.

“This isn’t hard,” Lucky whispered in her ear.

Lou shivered, feeling an unfamiliar, yet familiar stirring in her tummy.

“Left hand is thrust. Ease it forward to increase, back to decrease,” she said, slowly moving the control forward then back.

“I understand that, It’s the other little thingy that’s not cooperating.”

“The yoke?”

“Yes, that’s it. Term slipped my mind, the yoke.”

Lucky’s next question shocked the country girl.

“Ever give a guy a hand job?”

“Erm, well, once,” Lou stammered.

“Same concept. It’s sensitive, so be gentle. Which ever way you move it, the ship is going the opposite way. Just like if you pull down on his cock, a fellow will stand on tip toe.”

As she spoke, Lucky gently moved the yoke back, causing the nose to rise.

“No need to be rough with it, in fact the more severe you are, the less likely it is to do what you want, just like with a guy.”

“So, um, just move it slowly?”

“Not slowly, gently, there is a difference.”

“What’s that?”

Lucky’s hands left the controls and cupped Lou’s generous breasts, causing her to gasp. Those hands began to gently, but firmly knead the sensitive orbs. When her nipples hardened Lucky captured each between thumb and forefinger and began to gently, but quickly squeeze them.

“Gentle, but not slow,” she whispered, nipping the startled girl’s ear.

“Oh my!”

“Indeed. If you are having trouble with thrust just let me know, I’ll give you a private demonstration in my room,” Lucky whispered before shouting for the tech to bring the sim down.

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Lou stood outside the door to Lucky’s room and chewed on her lower lip. She knew she shouldn’t be here, if Tucker caught her he would go ape shit, but the itch between her legs wouldn’t be stilled. She had tried masturbating, cold showers, even black coffee, which only made her gag. At the oddest times she would feel Lucky’s hands on her breasts again, and she was forever staring at the tall instructor’s crotch in her tight flight suit.

Tonight had been the last straw, waking up to find Holly gently masturbating, just a few feet from her. She had feigned sleep, but the blonde had been so hot she had found her self wet and wanting. Now she stood here, indecisive. What if the invitation had just been a joke? She would really feel foolish.

Screwing up her courage, she gently rapped on the door. A few moments later it opened and a sleepy Lucky, wearing only a long tunic top was staring at her.

“What’s up?” she asked by way of greeting.

“I…erm…that is…I was wondering if I could get that lesson in thrust!” she blurted out, blushing furiously.

Lucky poked her head out, looked left and right, then grabbed her by the arm and jerked her into the room. Her quarters were larger than the one Lou shared with the rest of her flight. There was a big bed and a private bathroom, as well as a kitchenette and small living room.

Lucky turned her back and walked into the kitchen, her bare ass plainly visible beneath the hem of the shirt. She came back and handed Lou a tumbler.

“Drink it,” she ordered.

Lou did so, choking on the alcohol as it burned her throat. Lucky laughed and stood back to admire her.

“You must need it bad girl, to risk this.”

“Well, yes…I suppose I do need a good shagging pretty badly.”

“I love that accent. Okay baby, I’ll give you some lessons in thrust, but it’s going to have to be quick. Reveille is in two hours and I still have to figure out how to smuggle you back to your room without tucker nailing both our asses to the wall.”

The tall instructor pulled the shirt off and tossed it to the floor. Lou felt her pussy twitch when Lucky was revealed in her naked glory. She moved purposefully to the night stand and pulled out a strange harness which she began to buckle around her waist.

“Don’t just stand there Lou, get naked, times a’wastein” she called.

The dark-haired trainee quickly kicked off her boots and started undoing the buttons on her blouse. She was just removing her bra when Lucky turned to her and she froze. The belt around her waist held up a Prick! Not a real one of course, but it looked real and was larger than even the recruiter had been.

“What’s the matter? Never seen a cock before?” Lucky asked with a smile as she stroked the monster dildo.

“Never on a woman!” Lou exclaimed.

Lucky chuckled and turned back to the nightstand, grabbing a tube of lubricant and slicking up the dildo as Lou finished disrobing. Once she was naked Lucky approached her and the grabbed her. Spinning her around the instructor, grasped a hand pull of hair and jerked Lou’s head back hard.

“Something tells me you’re the kind of girl who likes it rough, am I right?” she purred.

Lou felt a shiver run through her and was only able to nod, no words would form in her suddenly dry mouth.

Lucky chuckled again, a sound Lou found incredibly sexy and exciting. Without warning she shoved Lou to the table and roughly bent her over it.

“Spread em,’ she grunted, kicking at the inside of Lou’s leg. The petite trainee let her legs slide out, exposing her pussy to Lucky’s fevered eyes.

“Fuck,” she said, grasping the base of the thick dildo and rubbing it up and down Lou’s lips.

Lou moaned, feeling the big cock at her entrance and tensed when she felt Lucky grasp her hips. The air was forced from her lungs and her eyes teared up when Lucky drove into her with a wicked thrust of her powerful hips.

“Geezus. I’m sorry, baby,” Lucky said, pulling all the way out.

“Are you all right?” she asked, stroking Lou’s back.

“Yes, I think so,” she managed.

“You should have told me you weren’t experienced,” the tall instructor chided as her hand gently massaged Lou’s abused pussy.

“I thought I was,” she groaned, causing the instructor to laugh out loud.

She returned the head of her cock to Lou’s entrance and pressed forward slowly. Lou groaned as she felt it stretching her open and fought to relax as her muscles clenched. Lucky went easy, feeding her an inch or two at a time, and stopping frequently to let her adjust.

Lou felt stuffed. She had never even imagined she could feel this full before. Nothing had prepared her for it and the signals shooting to her brain from her abused tissues were nothing short of mind blowing. Thick, heady pleasure mixed with both sharp and dull pain. Her mind couldn’t sort them out, they were too intertwined and she wasn’t sure if it was pain or pleasure, but whatever it was she liked it.

Eventually Lucky’s hips bumped her shapely rump and she knew it was all the way in. Lou surprised her self by letting out a deep breath, she hadn’t realized she had been holding her breath.

“All right Pilot, ready for some thrust?” Lucky purred.

Lou nodded and looked back over her shoulder to see Lucky setting her feet and she thrilled when the cute instructor’s warm hands clamped down on her hips. Lucky drew back about half way and thrust forward, eliciting a groan from her lovely partner. The dildo dragged a little on the way out so she thrust back in before getting as much out this time. Lou moaned and her hand snaked between her legs to begin wildly massaging her clit.

Lucky smiled and began to pound into her, enjoying the squishy sounds the big cock made as it forced tissue aside.

Lou was in heaven, Nothing had ever felt this good. Her body shuddered through another mini climax and her inner muscles clamped down on the huge cock. She felt her body tense and bit her lower lip as the first of several powerful orgasms began to tear at her sanity. Wave after wave of outrageous pleasure assaulted her mind and with each one she felt more and more disconnected from her body and reality.

“no…no…no..please..no more…”

She found it odd to hear herself mumbling that, the last thing she wanted was for Lucky to stop. The instructor seemed to know thin and picked up her pace, causing Lou to shudder violently. She felt another orgasm coming, this one seemed to be building in her stomach and when it exploded she felt something in her head tear loose. She gave a feral cry and thrust back wildly on the plunging dildo, driving it deeper into her hungry pussy. It hit something deep inside and a lance of pain-pleasure blotted everything from her mind.

She came back to reality to find lucky no longer inside her. Her pussy throbbed, but she felt so empty she couldn’t believe it. She wanted more.

“You gonna make it?’ Lucky whispered, gently stroking her back.

“Yes,” she managed, her tongue seemed cloven to the roof of her mouth and speech was difficult.

“You’ve got a fantastic ass,” Lucky said, pushing a finger into Lou’s anus up to the first knuckle.

“Oh!” she exclaimed.

“Ever had anyone in there?” Lucky asked in a hushed tone.

“No! never.”

“Want to?” she asked with a big grin.

The very thought was so naughty it made her tingle.

“I don’t know, isn’t it supposed to hurt?’ she asked tentatively, fighting down the urge to just say yes to whatever this magnificent woman wanted to do to her.

“It can, but not if you do it right. How bout it sugar? Want to feel this big dick in your ass?”

Lou bit her lower lip and nodded slightly. Lucky smiled and placed the head at the entrance to her pussy, shoving it deep into her.

“Oh! I thought…”

“Gotta get it all slick for you,” Lucky interrupted, pulling out after a few quick thrust and bringing it to Lou’s tight pucker.

Lou tensed, waiting for it, but Lucky just held it there and stroked her cheeks gently.

“Relax. You have to stay relaxed or it will hurt.”

Lou nodded and forced herself to relax. Lucky applied firm pressure and the dark haired girl felt it begin to enter her body. She fought the urge to tense, and groaned as the head opened her sphincter and passed into her anus.

Lucky took it slow, but she knew exactly what she was doing. When the head butted up to Lou’s internal muscular ring, the one she couldn’t control, Lucky slapped the girl’s ass with all the power she could muster.

Lou squeaked in surprise and before her body could react, Lucky jammed forward, opening the internal sphincter with only a slight stab of pain.

After that, it took only a short while for lucky to bury the entire dildo in her lover’s quivering ass. She just watched for a while, immensely enjoying the way Lou’s muscles were working beneath the pale skin of her ass.

Lou felt stuffed. If she thought the big toy in her cunt was something, the way it lewdly stretched open her ass was even more powerful. When it began to move inside her bowels she felt a shudder of pleasure. Her hand snaked down to her wet pussy and began to stoke her hyper sensitive clit.

Lucky grabbed two hands full of her hair and pulled hard, making Lou’s back arch, allowing the instructor a better angle to really tear her lover up. The huge cock moving in her ass was nothing short of incredible and the orgasms quite simply, destroyed any conception she had entertained before of what sex was all about.

It was almost time for reveille before Lucky arranged a diversion and Lou managed to drag herself back into the room.

 

[Guest]

OMG Colly! LOL!

Yep, that was hot.

I find it amusing that you think I might've been embarrassed by it. Actually, to be honest, the only thing that I am mildly embarrassed by is the fact that you portrayed me as so inexperienced!!! Hahaha!!!

I know, the character is only very loosely based on me.

Lou

 

[Colleen Thomas]

OMG Colly! LOL!

Yep, that was hot.

I find it amusing that you think I might've been embarrassed by it. Actually, to be honest, the only thing that I am mildly embarrassed by is the fact that you portrayed me as so inexperienced!!! Hahaha!!!

I know, the character is only very loosely based on me.

Lou

More than loosely, at least as well as I can do with words on a page to portray you the way I see you. I wasn't sure you would be embarassed, but I wasn't going to take the chance

*HUGS*

 

[pop_54]

OMG Colly! LOL!

Yep, that was hot.

I find it amusing that you think I might've been embarrassed by it. Actually, to be honest, the only thing that I am mildly embarrassed by is the fact that you portrayed me as so inexperienced!!! Hahaha!!!

I know, the character is only very loosely based on me.

Lou

Lo virgin girl (Nice one Colly) Grats on the 30 grand boss Lou

Well I can announce with pretty cock sure confidence that I should reach the goal tomorrow: 47,130 as of this evening, no more tonight cos I've got square eyes now, but I should be able to rattle off 3 grand tomorrow with ease... At the beginning I never dreamed I'd make it with my current work load in real life, but the purchase of a second hand lap top has ensured my goal is in sight... Bloody good bargain actually, £25 for a mac powerPC fully loaded with MS compatible software and MS office as well as Mac word, only thing wrong with it is the battery pack's are fucked and need replacing, works fine on mains though, and I've been writing in the office at work.

 

[Colleen Thomas]

Lo virgin girl (Nice one Colly) Grats on the 30 grand boss Lou

Well I can announce with pretty cock sure confidence that I should reach the goal tomorrow: 47,130 as of this evening, no more tonight cos I've got square eyes now, but I should be able to rattle off 3 grand tomorrow with ease... At the beginning I never dreamed I'd make it with my current work load in real life, but the purchase of a second hand lap top has ensured my goal is in sight... Bloody good bargain actually, £25 for a mac powerPC fully loaded with MS compatible software and MS office as well as Mac word, only thing wrong with it is the battery pack's are fucked and need replacing, works fine on mains though, and I've been writing in the office at work.

grats pop!

*HUGS*

 

[pop_54]

GO NANO WRITERS!!!

Hey Pops, did not want to bump my last thread - BIG KISS BABY! I will try to read another of your stories very soon. Busy but I do mention you under the best thread as my girl Lou

Ello gorgeous HUGE KISS!!

Hey where did you get that pic of our town square you're using as an av We're a funny lot round here, we don't like strangers in town See ya kid, take care.

 

[pop_54]

grats pop!

*HUGS*

 

[CharleyH]

Ello gorgeous HUGE KISS!!

Hey where did you get that pic of our town square you're using as an av We're a funny lot round here, we don't like strangers in town See ya kid, take care.

Studying Pierrpoint. Your last executioner. I emulate well.

 

[pop_54]

Studying Pierrpoint. Your last executioner. I emulate well.

Yea old Sid, nice bloke actually, good at ropework

 

[Black Tulip]

Oh god, this is going all wrong.
The story is blossoming but at this rate I will get kicked out of college soon.
Don't have to worry about the job.
I know I will get kicked out anyway. LOL
Shit, that's why I went back to studying.

After the orgy I went on to the killing.
I was sitting in front of the pc, twisting and turning around, trying to figure out how you can stab someone behind you.
The story keeps pouring out at the moment, what was that about the third week?
Another 3000 words or so in an hour or two.

 

[pop_54]

Oh god, this is going all wrong.
The story is blossoming but at this rate I will get kicked out of college soon.
Don't have to worry about the job.
I know I will get kicked out anyway. LOL
Shit, that's why I went back to studying.

After the orgy I went on to the killing.
I was sitting in front of the pc, twisting and turning around, trying to figure out how you can stab someone behind you.
The story keeps pouring out at the moment, what was that about the third week?
Another 3000 words or so in an hour or two.

Go Tulip, Go girl

 

[English Lady]

No NaNo'ing for me the last couple of nights so i amstill just short of 40k. I plan to do some writing today, and I want to really pushit so i can get to 50 000 by mid week..do you think I can?

 

[Svenskaflicka]

do you think I can?

Does the word "duh!" mean anything to you?

 

[Black Tulip]

Does the word "duh!" mean anything to you?

Exactly! Go for it EL!



Pops, thanks for the encouragement.

 

[Guest]

I think I can, I think I can...

I know I can! I know I can!

I know you can! And I know you can, too!

GO ALL!!!! We are almost on the final push.

Lou

 

[pop_54]

No NaNo'ing for me the last couple of nights so i amstill just short of 40k. I plan to do some writing today, and I want to really pushit so i can get to 50 000 by mid week..do you think I can?

Without a shadow of doubt you can dear Go for it sweetheart, sorry I couldn't wait for you, but I'm afraid that's me, always been impetuous.

I'm not only going to be impetuous, but I'm going to be quite drunk later in celebration at reaching 50,087 at the end of the last paragraph written just now. Still only into 1972 so this could go on until next Nano, but hey who cares.... You may note my postings becoming less and less coherent from this point on this evening.

 

[Black Tulip]

Whooopppeee for Pops!

 

[Colleen Thomas]

Without a shadow of doubt you can dear Go for it sweetheart, sorry I couldn't wait for you, but I'm afraid that's me, always been impetuous.

I'm not only going to be impetuous, but I'm going to be quite drunk later in celebration at reaching 50,087 at the end of the last paragraph written just now. Still only into 1972 so this could go on until next Nano, but hey who cares.... You may note my postings becoming less and less coherent from this point on this evening.

YAY!!!!

Grats pops!

*HUGS*

 

[Guest]

Without a shadow of doubt you can dear Go for it sweetheart, sorry I couldn't wait for you, but I'm afraid that's me, always been impetuous.

I'm not only going to be impetuous, but I'm going to be quite drunk later in celebration at reaching 50,087 at the end of the last paragraph written just now. Still only into 1972 so this could go on until next Nano, but hey who cares.... You may note my postings becoming less and less coherent from this point on this evening.

WOOHOO!!!

Well done, Pops!!!

There was you worrying you wouldn't have time this year. You stormed it!

Lou

 

[Dingus Guy]

Congrats Pops!!!

And anyone who I have missed. Keep going people. Happy Thanksgiving while I am at it to all my Literotica brothers and sisters who celebrate this special Holiday!!!

 

[Svenskaflicka]

I passed the 30K!!!


But... I'm running out of story! I'm down to February - and the story will end in the beginning of June! (Probably not the way Japanese school years end, but fuggadugg, I'm doing this Swedish style!)

Big congrats to you pop - and if I haven't said earlier, to all the rest of you who have already reached 50.000. I'm very jealous.

 

[pop_54]

Thank you so much ladies and gentleman... *Takes a bow and almost falls flat on face*

And for those of you still plodding along... Get bloody plodding, you can all still do it