Ok, well suck on this one JHolley...
I may be blamed for starting a lot of shit around here (and that really doesn't bother me) but one thing you'll never hear me accused of is poor spelling, grammar and mechanics.
Shall I accuse you then? Yes I think I will.
1)Seeing as Becca Bitter and Bitter has(have?) (Try adding a space “has (have?)”) a sincere desire to be put to work, maybe Laurel and Manu can find a little something that he/she/it can help out with.
2) You're breaking my heart. I used the ambiguity to emphasize how unimportant I felt your post was. And I know a lot of stay at home moms that don't seem to suffer from the victim state of mind.
3) Talk about calling the kettle black....
4) Um, that should be "him and me" not "he and I." Also, whatsoever is one word. Moreover (also one word), I was supporting HSWriter's new position and, although he didn't ask, I was defending him. Yeah, yeah.(Double word use consider revising, Fragment consider revising)Mind my own business. We covered that.
5) Sorry, Becca, darling, but what I have read so far didn't particularly impress me. I doubt I'll be actively seeking anything more.
Wow an apology! I'm sincerely sorry you were angry. It showed. And now another flame
6) And I was angry when I posted my reply. I was angry because every FUCKING TIME I TURN AROUND someone is flaming.
7) And now that we've both vented, what say we bury the hatchet and have some egg nog (Try no space (eggnog) and Mydol? I'll buy. (So as a man with PMS do the drug companies provide your Mydol free of charge?)
I assure you that I was not intending to flame. And if you look carefully, you'll notice I apologized to Becca for overreacting. (Oh yes? Let me count 5 flames then a one line sorry and what was that 2 flames straight after the sorry?)
As often as possible, actually. (Fragment consider revising) And I assure you, (consider semicolon ; ) I treat women much better than you might see here.
Okay, here's the punchline. (Try a space (punch line)).
Please put through your spelling and grammar checkers, you obviously have the best of both that were ever made.
Jupiter
I may be blamed for starting a lot of shit around here (and that really doesn't bother me) but one thing you'll never hear me accused of is poor spelling, grammar and mechanics.
Shall I accuse you then? Yes I think I will.
1)Seeing as Becca Bitter and Bitter has(have?) (Try adding a space “has (have?)”) a sincere desire to be put to work, maybe Laurel and Manu can find a little something that he/she/it can help out with.
2) You're breaking my heart. I used the ambiguity to emphasize how unimportant I felt your post was. And I know a lot of stay at home moms that don't seem to suffer from the victim state of mind.
3) Talk about calling the kettle black....
4) Um, that should be "him and me" not "he and I." Also, whatsoever is one word. Moreover (also one word), I was supporting HSWriter's new position and, although he didn't ask, I was defending him. Yeah, yeah.(Double word use consider revising, Fragment consider revising)Mind my own business. We covered that.
5) Sorry, Becca, darling, but what I have read so far didn't particularly impress me. I doubt I'll be actively seeking anything more.
Wow an apology! I'm sincerely sorry you were angry. It showed. And now another flame
6) And I was angry when I posted my reply. I was angry because every FUCKING TIME I TURN AROUND someone is flaming.
7) And now that we've both vented, what say we bury the hatchet and have some egg nog (Try no space (eggnog) and Mydol? I'll buy. (So as a man with PMS do the drug companies provide your Mydol free of charge?)
I assure you that I was not intending to flame. And if you look carefully, you'll notice I apologized to Becca for overreacting. (Oh yes? Let me count 5 flames then a one line sorry and what was that 2 flames straight after the sorry?)
As often as possible, actually. (Fragment consider revising) And I assure you, (consider semicolon ; ) I treat women much better than you might see here.
Okay, here's the punchline. (Try a space (punch line)).
Please put through your spelling and grammar checkers, you obviously have the best of both that were ever made.
Jupiter
