Valentine's Day Story Contest 2005 Ideas

Hugs~

woohoo~

I knew I would find a Valentine Day Contest
thread soon,

Hey Missy ~

Sir Hugs~

she_is_my_addiction

woohooo here we go,

I had this thought of a story where the
heart that beats in chest was controlled
and operated by microscopic people and then
the guy/gal falls in love and the heart demands
more than the people than man the heart can
muster but see that the love is beautiful and
much needed and they pull together to pound the
heart fast enough for .... the joining <grin>
 
A new kind of computer romance...

A geeky computer guy gives the woman of his desires a computer as a gift... she tries to accept but he insists...

But this computer is loaded with worms and other stuff that allows the geeky guy to view every thing she does... thus making him fall in love with her even more...

She finds out about the spyware and such and turns the tables and begins watching him... she finds a blog and sees his love for her and even though at first she is mad and some discusted at his spying, somehow she ended up falling in love with him...

This continues on until on Valentine's day the finally end their charade and consumate there love for each other!

I know it's dumb, but I'm sleepy and have a headache! Damnit lit needs spell checker!
 
missygail said:
A new kind of computer romance...

A geeky computer guy gives the woman of his desires a computer as a gift... she tries to accept but he insists...

But this computer is loaded with worms and other stuff that allows the geeky guy to view every thing she does... thus making him fall in love with her even more...

She finds out about the spyware and such and turns the tables and begins watching him... she finds a blog and sees his love for her and even though at first she is mad and some discusted at his spying, somehow she ended up falling in love with him...

This continues on until on Valentine's day the finally end their charade and consumate there love for each other!

I know it's dumb, but I'm sleepy and have a headache! Damnit lit needs spell checker!

one for the nerds out there....
 
Exhibitionist/voyuer(sp?) anyone?

A guy developes a crush on a woman that moves into the apartment next to his... his crush drives him to things he's never done before, like spying on her and perhaps sneeking into her apartment...

Upon sneeking in he finds her diary and discovers she feels the same for him... though now he has to find some way to get with her without devulging how he knows her feelings...

Another twist could be that he offers up computer skills for her usage. Her computer crashes and she has no money to fix it... he repairs computer but finds files dedicated to him as if she intentialy left them for him to see....

Told you I was tired!
 
missygail said:
Exhibitionist/voyuer(sp?) anyone?

A guy developes a crush on a woman that moves into the apartment next to his... his crush drives him to things he's never done before, like spying on her and perhaps sneeking into her apartment...

Upon sneeking in he finds her diary and discovers she feels the same for him... though now he has to find some way to get with her without devulging how he knows her feelings...

Another twist could be that he offers up computer skills for her usage. Her computer crashes and she has no money to fix it... he repairs computer but finds files dedicated to him as if she intentialy left them for him to see....

Told you I was tired!

I like the second variation. Maybe he finds she has taken pics of him using a hidden cam.
 
sirhugs said:
I like the second variation. Maybe he finds she has taken pics of him using a hidden cam.

Yes, that works better.... perhaps she is the peeping tom... hidden camera and a regular cam as he was out in the parking lot working on his car and she was seemingly out on her balcony relaxing...

There could also be videos and other files of what his pictures and such does to her...

Perhaps he locates her blog online where she describes in detail how sexy she finds him and what she does to herself as a result... and perhaps how frusterating it is to be so shy and fear his rejection (reason she doesn't do anything about her feelings)...

Then to make sure it is a Valentine's day story he presents her with the computer on Valentines or near there and upon turning on her new and improved computer there is a multi-media file that automatically opens up in which he's created a video especially for her with an ending slide asking her out for valentine's day...
 
or maybe he discovers that she is the author of a blog named " My Secret Valentine", and that HE is the unnamed object ....
 
a student teacher version

Lil Johnny and his senior year buds are bored this Feb 14. So they start throwing those little cinnamon hearts , trying to score one down the sexy young teacher's cleavage. This is esp hard to do without her seeing.

Johnny does not score any direct hits buut his buddy does and shouts " 2 points". Teacher sees Johnny about to pitch and assumes he threw the heart now embedded in her bra. She makes him stay after class. As she scolds him, she starts wriggling, then digging her fingers between her cleavage to try to dislodge the heart. She then explains that the pointy edges are digging into her breasts, making them uncomfortable. Johnny asks if it is that or her fingers making her nipples so hard. He offers to help......
 
while decorating the gym for the high school dance, lots of incidental body contact tween the nerdy guy and the head cheerleader - hands brush, then hips bump, then a few more, then he falls on top of her off a ladder. After the initial shock wears off, she realizes how horny she feels and notices his large woodie pressing against her. She takes him into the girls locker room....

also available in lesbian flavour
 
Hubby arrives home from his business trip early on V day, finds rose petals strewn from front door to the bathroom. where they float in the drawn tub. He hides in the closet to see who wife is expecting....
 
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Just a reminder to everyone that literotica does have a non-erotic section... though warning entering these in a contest can get a lot of confused public comments, because most either don't realize that there is a non-erotic section or just don't venture into that area....

You could write a special non-erotic valentine's story about a 40ish woman who has her first date(since her divorce from a twenty-year marriage) with a guy from work that has been bugging her non-stop... she finally aggrees to a Valentine's day date...

Get into details, talk about how nervous the date makes her, describe her sweat palms and her nervous laughter...

Tell how she ends up liking this guy a lot more out on a date than the normal pushy flirt from work..

Talk about how she worries if he will or won't kiss her when he lets her off at the door.... then tell about how after they say good bye and she closes the door she has to lean against it and slow her heartbeat... she vows that she will definitely see him again...

You could even get away with two stories out of this general idea... the first would be like this and in the non-erotic section, but the section would be in the erotic section... a story of their first time together, but it shouldn't be written in the normal form of smut so easily found around here... it should be a loving union, gentle, caring... though still passionate

Maybe Mr. New guy gives her more pleasure than her husband of twenty years ever gave her...
 
missygail said:
Just a reminder to everyone that literotica does have a non-erotic section... though warning entering these in a contest can get a lot of confused public comments, because most either don't realize that there is a non-erotic section or just don't venture into that area....

You could write a special non-erotic valentine's story about a 40ish woman who has her first date(since her divorce from a twenty-year marriage) with a guy from work that has been bugging her non-stop... she finally aggrees to a Valentine's day date...

Get into details, talk about how nervous the date makes her, describe her sweat palms and her nervous laughter...

Tell how she ends up liking this guy a lot more out on a date than the normal pushy flirt from work..

Talk about how she worries if he will or won't kiss her when he lets her off at the door.... then tell about how after they say good bye and she closes the door she has to lean against it and slow her heartbeat... she vows that she will definitely see him again...

You could even get away with two stories out of this general idea... the first would be like this and in the non-erotic section, but the section would be in the erotic section... a story of their first time together, but it shouldn't be written in the normal form of smut so easily found around here... it should be a loving union, gentle, caring... though still passionate

Maybe Mr. New guy gives her more pleasure than her husband of twenty years ever gave her...

and is there something wrong with our normal smut?:eek:

seriously , non erotic stories or romance stories often win contests, and a Romance story is ideal for V day. I just suck at writing them.
 
Hi everyone,

I'm new to this so please be kind, I would appreciate help and guidance.

I like the valentine story, perhaps something like this might be some fun:

Out shopping for a Valentine present for my wife. I'm at the mall, heading for the Victoria's Secret store when I look up at the second level and see a woman standing at the edge of the upper level railing looking at the shoppers below.

She is wearing a fairly short skirt, and the way she is standing provides me with a great upskirt view. As I walk on, I decide the view was too good to be true and double back for a second look.

The second look is just as good as the first, but the woman sees me looking and stares down at me. I walk on and head for the escalator to get to the upper level where Victoria's Secret is.

As I get off the escalator, I realize that to get to the store, I must walk past this woman. I am a bit embarrassed at getting caught looking up her skirt, but suck I it up and head for the store.

As I walk past her, she rises and moves toward me. There is a twinkle in her eye and a slight smile crosses her lips.

There are many ways to move this one along, perhaps I bring my bi-curious wife the ultimate Valentine's Day present?

Anyway, this is my first attempt, let me know if I am on the right track.
 
My idea but not mine...

This is copy and pasted from a newsletter that I get... I've had an idea like this before, but Raven puts it so much better....

Dear Raven: Valentines Day Dinner Surprise

Dear Raven,
My husband is a very predictable sort. He has already made reservations for Valentine's dinner at our favorite restaurant, where we know everyone. After dinner he will give me a piece of jewelry then we will be off to the theater. This has been the same for the last 10 years. Do you have any suggestions that could liven this up?
Almost Asleep in Michigan

Dear Almost Asleep,
First Raven would like to remind you that you are equally accountable for bringing excitement or the lack thereof, into your marriage. Raven would also like to assume that you DO appreciate your husband for taking the time to plan a lovely, if not traditional, Valentines Day for you. (And remind you that jewelry is ALWAYS a good thing) Your husband may not be creative but he is thoughtful, and I truly do believe it IS the thought that counts.

So sleepyhead, it is up to you to be the creative one, let's make this Valentines dinner one he will never forget. Raven has some ideas for you!

A sure-fire way to make a dinner unforgettable is with a remote control toy.
Remote Control toys cum in several shapes, Eggs, Butt Plugs, Butterflies etc... In a situation like this Raven would ask herself if her lover is an ass man or a pussy man, then consider what he would find most exciting and choose accordingly.

Now, if I were planning this evening for my lover it would look something like this:

Even though my lover is an avowed ass man, I decide to appeal to both sides of his nature. After agonizing over which remote toys to give him, and being that I always do things in a big way, I decide to get three, a , Butt Plug, an Egg, and Vibrating Panties. After I test each one to be sure everything is in proper working order, I cleverly wrap each of the three boxes, each containing just one of the remote controls, in different colored wrapping. This helps me to remember which is which. The waiter has just delivered our appetizers. I lean over and whisper in his ear that I have something else that will wet his appetite and then I give him the first remote to unwrap. I smile as he looks over the remote control, trying to figure out what it is. I smiled even more as he turned it on and off.
Finally, I switch the button to the on position. I take his hand, and sitting up just a bit, place his hand under my ass so that he feels the vibration of the Butt Plug. Now he is the one smiling!
Being that all men love high tech gadgets, he is enthralled. He delights himself to no end by turning the remote on every time our buddy Tim the waiter comes over to our table. The fact that he is stimulating me in front of people we know, unawares to them, just adds to his enjoyment.

After Tim brings our dinners, I give him the main course, the box with the remote control for the vibrating Egg. I apologize for this object being where I cannot currently guide his hand. He could hardly eat his dinner because he could not wipe the grin off his face, as he alternately flipped the switches on and off. I could hardly eat my dinner, for obvious reasons.
Now at this point, he thinks that life just can't get any better, and he has thanked me many times for such a wonderful Valentines Day gift. He has absolutely no idea that there is something yet to cum, me!

Tim returns to take our desert order. I am not surprised when my predictable sweetie turns on both the Butt Plug and the Egg He leaves them on and I am squirming by the time desert arrives.
Every few minutes he glances over at me with that sly questioning look, I just know he is wondering how long can I hold out. Looking very smug, he casually enjoys his desert between his glances at me.

I will never forget the look on his face when I handed him the third box. His look of surprise turned incredulous then quickly turned in to sheer wickedness. He offered me his hand and waited expectantly. I was surprised to find myself feeling shy while I guided his hand to the Vibrating Panties.

I knew what was cumming and so did he as he sat watching me try to hold back the inevitable. I was on the edge and he knew it. I buried my face in his shoulder not wanting anyone to see my face or hear me gasp. He reached over as if he was going to stroke my hair, but instead fisted his hand in it. In a low voice he reminded me that I did not have his permission to cum.

Even though it had been just a minute or so, it felt like an eternity had passed before he pulled the fist down to tilt my face up to his. My eyes pleaded with him while he savored my struggle. His lips lowered to almost touch mine as he breathed in to me the word, now. I shuddered as my climax surrendered to his kiss and his mouth devoured my scream.

So wake up Sleepyhead! Raven guarantees that this is the perfect way to put some spice in to your Valentines dinner. Now imagine how much fun the theater could be.

Yours in Infinite Possibilities, Raven

 
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sirhugs said:
and is there something wrong with our normal smut?:eek:

seriously , non erotic stories or romance stories often win contests, and a Romance story is ideal for V day. I just suck at writing them.

Never! Smut is always good for a good orgasm or two... but as valentine's we should pull on the heartstrings a tad... instead of pulling on that other object so much... :p *grinz*

Yeah, same here... my sis won't read my erotica stories because of the weirdness factor, but she will read a nice non-erotic/romance story if I'm able to create one... dunno if I can...
 
missygail said:
Never! Smut is always good for a good orgasm or two... but as valentine's we should pull on the heartstrings a tad... instead of pulling on that other object so much... :p *grinz*

Yeah, same here... my sis won't read my erotica stories because of the weirdness factor, but she will read a nice non-erotic/romance story if I'm able to create one... dunno if I can...

my sis is born again....
how bout a story about a born again prude who lets lose when seduced with chocolates n roses, and when she lets lose, reallt lets lose?
 
NHGUY:

I like the outline. I am a detail freak, so would like more flesh on dem bones, but the idea is sound.
 
howdy~

the horses whinney from stabled girths
no not, that the day draweth near for
the challenge. Till the gates open the
riders share wine and song of long lost
and those to dawn.

<huddles up close to the camp fire>

"I have two tales ready to tel <grinin'>

Love Potion #69
(cupids chemistry experiment)
&
Dream of a Kiss
<title subject to change>
(a knight in shining armors challenge)

tick tock tick tock tick ...
 
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to combine fantasies- how about a Desperate Housewives uncensored Valentine's Party?
 
erotic chocolate

Wife's best gf buys her a chocolate cock as a joke gift. Hubby is at work. they unwarp the gift. One thing leads to another.... they lose track of time. Soon hubby arrives home. He is puzzled when one of them ( which?)comes out of bedroom naked with chocolate streaks around her mouth ( and between her thighs?) . He is even more shocked when the second appears. looking similar. etc......
 
Feb 14 18th birthday

our protagonist is either a nerdy guy or shy gal. For years the valentine hyoe has made the birthday downbeat. A tad bittersweet even, since (s)he has watched older sibs with their mates having such fun.

There is obviously an ugly duckling/cinderella ending, but I am not clear how the middle goes....
 
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fucking...mad sex...threesomes?? :) maybe a little gang bangin? :D I may not be so lucky all the time, but I think you'll like the story I've got comin :p
 
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