Non Poetry Posts from the Suddenly Thread

[minsue]

To the newest Literotica Guru:

 

[Liar]

giggle

 

[lucky-E-leven]

giggle

That is so cute! Not feeling enough passion suddenly to do it justice with a poem, but wanted to say...'That is so cute!'

~lucky (enigmatic as always)

 

[echoes_s]

lol, Thanks Maria!

The wretched King Minos has decided your fate. His tale wraps around his body 2 times.
The sweet light no longer strikes against your eyes. Your shade has been banished to... the Second Level of Hell!
Second Level of Hell

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You have come to a place mute of all light, where the wind bellows as the sea does in a tempest. This is the realm where the lustful spend eternity. Here, sinners are blown around endlessly by the unforgiving winds of unquenchable desire as punishment for their transgressions. The infernal hurricane that never rests hurtles the spirits onward in its rapine, whirling them round, and smiting, it molests them. You have betrayed reason at the behest of your appetite for pleasure, and so here you are doomed to remain. Cleopatra and Helen of Troy are two that share in your fate.

 

[Maria2394]

hehe, youre welcome echoes

seems we are in really good company, I am also banished to the second level and a dear friend of mine, ( i wont give his secret away) will be there too..I guess level 2 is for poets, ya think

lol, Thanks Maria!

The wretched King Minos has decided your fate. His tale wraps around his body 2 times.
The sweet light no longer strikes against your eyes. Your shade has been banished to... the Second Level of Hell!
Second Level of Hell

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You have come to a place mute of all light, where the wind bellows as the sea does in a tempest. This is the realm where the lustful spend eternity. Here, sinners are blown around endlessly by the unforgiving winds of unquenchable desire as punishment for their transgressions. The infernal hurricane that never rests hurtles the spirits onward in its rapine, whirling them round, and smiting, it molests them. You have betrayed reason at the behest of your appetite for pleasure, and so here you are doomed to remain. Cleopatra and Helen of Troy are two that share in your fate.

 

[Tathagata]

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You have come to a place mute of all light, where the wind bellows as the sea does in a tempest. This is the realm where the lustful spend eternity. Here, sinners are blown around endlessly by the unforgiving winds of unquenchable desire as punishment for their transgressions. The infernal hurricane that never rests hurtles the spirits onward in its rapine, whirling them round, and smiting, it molests them. You have betrayed reason at the behest of your appetite for pleasure, and so here you are doomed to remain. Cleopatra and Helen of Troy are two that share in your fate.

Hmmmmm
You and I, Helen, Cleo and Maria....so whats the bad part of this for me??

 

[echoes_s]

Hmmmmm
You and I, Helen, Cleo and Maria....so whats the bad part of this for me??

uhmm...exhaustion?

we shall have to take care of you...no?

 

[Tathagata]

uhmm...exhaustion?

we shall have to take care of you...no?

I've never been so anxious to get to hell in my life


How are you doing Ms. Echoes_s??

 

[echoes_s]

I've never been so anxious to get to hell in my life


How are you doing Ms. Echoes_s??

LOL Big T...isn't that a scarey thought in some ways?

Not bad today,
it's raining here, so no outdoor work done and I was going to till the garden area today to get it ready. Supposed to be like this for a few days.
Started working on reviews, but it's time to get supper ready then torture kids for a while

How are you doing?
Besides working

 

[Tathagata]

LOL Big T...isn't that a scarey thought in some ways?

Not bad today,
it's raining here, so no outdoor work done and I was going to till the garden area today to get it ready. Supposed to be like this for a few days.
Started working on reviews, but it's time to get supper ready then torture kids for a while

How are you doing?
Besides working

Just dandy
; )
suppose to rain here till saturday or so too.....
I'm glad
I like the rain...but it interferes with baseball so.....
see why i'm so anxious to get to hell
atleast i know what I'm in for

 

[echoes_s]

Just dandy
; )
suppose to rain here till saturday or so too.....
I'm glad
I like the rain...but it interferes with baseball so.....
see why i'm so anxious to get to hell
atleast i know what I'm in for

in hell you will get wet anyways, but dry off really quick

 

[Tathagata]

in hell you will get wet anyways, but dry off really quick

Well if I'm there with you, maria,, helen and cleo, i damn well better get wet once in a while

 

[SeattleRain]

Re: mountain orchid

Hidden among the mundane
the everyday
the crawling masses
she comes to fruition

food for the muse
inspiration for poets
lavender splendor
with coal black eyes

turning her face to the sun
matching radiation
the stars bow in humble
regal submission

lush and ripe
honeyed and slick
a feast for the senses
exuding narcotic seduction

she awaits discovery
night bloom siren
of forgotten places
she whispers to the moon

I wanted to write a response poem to this, but I felt like it would be a tail behind a sleek black jaguar...so I will just say

this is beautiful

and tuck the tail under
humble

 

[Tathagata]

Re: Re: mountain orchid

I wanted to write a response poem to this, but I felt like it would be a tail behind a sleek black jaguar...so I will just say

this is beautiful

and tuck the tail under
humble

never be afraid
i love the interplay
and inspiration comes from every where
thats what i love about this particular thread
you just " write" as it hits you

: )
and besides...you have a very nice tail


thank you for the compliment though
i appreciate it

 

[Tathagata]

Re: Re: mountain orchid

moon tongue
sips opiate nectar
a butterfly curled probiscus?
the fork of a snake?
stick of a frog
hummingbird sliver

sip and swoon
orchid and moon
were never meant to be
this close

jaguar grows its warning
silence
quiver and chill

one closes
one hides
petal and cloud
silk tail curls
under chin
sleep

now see.......
Thats beautiful
it's like the next scene
very well done
you stayed with many of the same images and feelings
but it's almost as though this " picture" was taken a few minutes after mine
i like it a lot!
: )

 

[Tathagata]

Ghostly shapes swaying in dance
moon lights them white
captured in my heart by chance
enraptured by the sight.

Springtime beauty never fails
to stop my heart
nighttime boats and anchored sails
waiting for the summer start.

wonderful
: )
for some reason I see a harbor up here and think of Robert Frost
i wish i could rhyme like this

 

[Tathagata]

Thanks - they just seem to bubble to the surface, probably because they're so light and have no substance.



Clear of eye and curls in place
Not a line upon her face
How she does it no one knows
Every day her face just glows
Not a wrinkle in her skirt
Makes one really want to hurt
Her, make her squirm.
Mess her perm.

LOL
those are the hardest to write

 

[Maria2394]

Come with me
I'll take you with me
to a place where you are
all you want to be and more
where a challenge is a blessing
and respect is paramount.

Come with me
I'll take you with me
to a place that is love
and only love

Come with me
I'll show you your heart
and the nails you've pounded in it
or let someone else
and thats the same as you doing it.

Come with me
We'll pull the nails out
and you will be
born again.

such a beautiful place Boo, how do I get there from here?

 

[Maria2394]

somethings better left un said--like this, sorry

 

[Raging Whoremoans]

I want to write like Liar. Or at least be the rock, or the tree, or the one breathing quietly.

*sigh*

~ R W

 

[2rivers]

v

 

[annaswirls]

 

[annaswirls]

 

[echoes_s]

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[minsue]

Crap!

I am contagious.

I apologize to all for bringing it with me.

The misunderstandings

and hurt.

Echoes, please don't.