Non Poetry Posts from the Suddenly Thread

[eagleyez]

Definitely needs more exposure..................post it fo PC?

political correctness?

im such a dope...

 

[Angeline]

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[Maria2394]

ty very much

im a noodler...

so enjoy reading your words as well.

and i have to ask, what is a noodler? never heard that expression before down south here...and PC is public comments at the end of your poems, ange, spank the man, he is being silly as this is probably the wrong place to worry about political correctness, although that does make me miss PI with Bill Maher, he was a trip...

 

[eagleyez]

and i have to ask, what is a noodler? never heard that expression before down south here...and PC is public comments at the end of your poems, ange, spank the man, he is being silly as this is probably the wrong place to worry about political correctness, although that does make me miss PI with Bill Maher, he was a trip...

well by noodler, LOL, i mean one who noodles with words.

i write prose mainly and dont consider myself much of a poet.

and i really like the one you posted just above btw.

 

[Angeline]

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[Angeline]

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[Angeline]

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[eagleyez]

how many lives have I lived
and squandered all
in just a few years

I remember being bleary-eyed and crying
planting flowers by the pond
worried, no
I knew I'd never see them bloom
cause I was dead and no one else
had even noticed

doesnt apathy suck?
my own, I mean, not yours
or his or theirs
but double blossomed daffodils
didnt have to care,
they bloomed with me still here
and they would have bloomed
if I had gone..so whats the point?

there is none, except that I finally
figured out
that I didnt plant those bulbs for me
I buried that part of myself
along with them
and all that miserable
pain and doubt grew back
as hope and sun bright blooms
to remind that dark days led me
to poem and life and finally
back into the light

i feel the sun

beautiful

 

[Maria2394]

thank you

thank you sis, for the talk earlier, it really helped a LOT!!!

 

[Maria2394]

dear tathagata--

this thread is not necessarily zen poetry, it is passion..I think sp had some rules way back on the thread....if I leave any out, the rest of ya'll let me know

its like life, NO editing ( not even for typos) or copy cut or paste..its like life once you put it here, you stuck with it baby!!

or you are banned for life muahahaha

now lets see whatcha got hidin' away on there

 

[minsue]

dear tathagata--

this thread is not necessarily zen poetry, it is passion..I think sp had some rules way back on the thread....if I leave any out, the rest of ya'll let me know

its like life, NO editing ( not even for typos) or copy cut or paste..its like life once you put it here, you stuck with it baby!!

or you are banned for life muahahaha

now lets see whatcha got hidin' away on there

I posted on here drunk one night. Can I delete that one?

 

[Angeline]

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[Tathagata]

dear tathagata--

this thread is not necessarily zen poetry, it is passion..I think sp had some rules way back on the thread....if I leave any out, the rest of ya'll let me know

its like life, NO editing ( not even for typos) or copy cut or paste..its like life once you put it here, you stuck with it baby!!

or you are banned for life muahahaha

now lets see whatcha got hidin' away on there

My Dear Maria

What I meant by " zen poetry" was that it's written on the spot with no forethought
no filters
just....reaction
" don't think....feel" as it were

sounds like fun to me as that's the way I write most of my stuff anyway


I shall definately be participating here.

Be well dear one

 

[eagleyez]

Re: hayden? haden? hey charlie, got a moment to change my life?

oh my god
charlie who?
slight big strummer
he may shake my hand some day
(fantasy, he wonders about the boneheads)
with glasses

then there is the loneliest blues
when there is not sound
just the blue silence
of tty and hand signals
and passion accumulating

there is salad too
sorry, need to say...
salad spread upon your small back
dressing pooling in dimples with strands
I may never leave this place.

look at your self sideways
then look at me that way.
line up your friends and pets
do things to make them smile
from the rear, then lay
the camera on the floor
timer armed
flash
flash

Stop The War
Stop The War

deep kudos D.

 

[Angeline]

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[Angeline]

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[eagleyez]

Re: Even Angels

don't even waste your breath
trying after all those years I hear
a broken record Charlie Brown
grown-up nothing wah wah wah

don't even bother talking
to the hand waving so long
sorrowful pitiful life is a battle
field of nightmares you keep

it all let it all fall around you
crumbled in years of dust
and leaking roof turn it up
clickety click it's the history

channel wrestle with that
notion you sorry assed empty
cold hearted prick trying
flew away even angels

have limits you turned
out to be a dog so woof
have your day.

*kisses*

i know how you feel.

(cmere)

 

[Angeline]

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[eagleyez]

line dancer
shuffling crows
bewitched by birdland
strung out
on electric wires
black against the blue
humming news
of warmer times
and gulls cry
slogans to save sailors
from themselves

2 doves on a barbwire fence...

pheasants in the underbrush...

nothing but the procession....

time.

 

[eagleyez]

Re: Re: Re: Even Angels

pardon the Charlie reference. i was referring to his evil twin, happy.

(ok)

im yur blockhead.

 

[Angeline]

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[Angeline]

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[Tathagata]

Hands like parenthesis
holding hope.
Eyes looking to distances
beyond the horizons
where love lies
untrammeled.
Slender arms like vines
open to welcome tomorrow
and it comes,
like thunder
rolling down her shoulders.

beautiful

 

[Guest]

beautiful

Thank you.

 

[Angeline]

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