The Loving Wives Trolls!

[other2other1]

Late to the party on this one, But I post a have a few LW stories and have gotten my share of nasty comments…

I think I have mentioned it before, but out of all the categories here on Lit, the LW category has brings out the most emotion as it is one of the few where acceptance of a situation does not need to occur to progress the plot. For exampl in Non-Con or BDSM, at some point the characters become accepting of their roles (somewhat). In LW we talk breakups, emotional blackmail, being unhappy or going BTB/RAAC. All of it very emotional.

And it generates a lot of comments, because done right, LW stories don’t always leave you with a sense of satisfaction. I think most of us that have posted in LW do it because we enjoy that emotional aspect.

As for people posting on multiple accounts, power to them. I hardly have time to post here on one account, work on a few of my stories and participate in life with a job and family. Maintaining two accounts comes across as too much work…

I guess another contextual comment, and this is just me. If I read a story I just didn’t like. I don’t 1-bomb. I just don’t rate it or leave a comment. As authors, most of put a lot of hard work and passion into our stories. Just because I didn’t connect with what you wrote doesn’t mean that you put less effort into your story than I did into me and therefore it doesn’t mean that I should 1-bomb you. If I have something to say that helps improve the next story, I’ll try to leave a comment that I think helps without insulting the authors drive for writing.

But… I get that some of us think differently. As such insults, 1-bombing, hate and all that negative stuff that pisses us off will continue to happen regardless. So my encouragement is write and publish what is in your heart. Let that drive your passion, enjoy the good comments and let the negative comments pass you by as you prepare your next story that I will read and enjoy

{Now also enjoy my bad spelling and grammar, and it can help to drive the point. But I’m posting from a hotel room in another country on my mobile phone at 4 in the morning is always fun and mistakes will be made when I read my post in a minute on sumbission}

 

[Gamblnluck]

Trust is valuable and fragile commodity

Most readers or those who offer comments on LW are not trolls, despite what a few disgruntled authors seem to think. We are simple critical of the stories presented. We authors whose stories are well received on LW are not just pandering to a few misguided souls.
We like the stories we write. They simply do not understand their audience.
If you want a story to be well received on LW, first you create an angst. The wife, or husband has created a situation that just hits the spouse in such a way he /she cannot endure.
The spouse has two choices, suck it up and accept the total betrayal or answer back in some way. The accepted or most preferable way is to fight back. That does not mean drawing and quartering. It means not bending over and being a total wimp. The reader wants to see justice prevail. Sometimes even reconciliation is an acceptable result. BUT only if shown justified.
Those who bitch m the trolls are out to get me simply do not understand that dynamic. They refuse to put their story where it might be get a better reception like in fetish where a man who might get his teeth kicked in, is masochistic enough to enjoy it.

 

[lovecraft68]

Most readers or those who offer comments on LW are not trolls, despite what a few disgruntled authors seem to think. We are simple critical of the stories presented. We authors whose stories are well received on LW are not just pandering to a few misguided souls.
We like the stories we write. They simply do not understand their audience.
If you want a story to be well received on LW, first you create an angst. The wife, or husband has created a situation that just hits the spouse in such a way he /she cannot endure.
The spouse has two choices, suck it up and accept the total betrayal or answer back in some way. The accepted or most preferable way is to fight back. That does not mean drawing and quartering. It means not bending over and being a total wimp. The reader wants to see justice prevail. Sometimes even reconciliation is an acceptable result. BUT only if shown justified.
Those who bitch m the trolls are out to get me simply do not understand that dynamic. They refuse to put their story where it might be get a better reception like in fetish where a man who might get his teeth kicked in, is masochistic enough to enjoy it.

So in other words, if you give them EXACTLY what they want down to a formula you can manage to thread the needle through the various warlike factions.

And it seems the way to get good results is for the husband to be a "real man" and set things right If the man is manly enough then all is right in the world because the CSI crowd can live vicariously through them.

"Justice prevail"

Over all the evil women.

In other words, cater to misbegotten incels and you're good.

I think I'd rather write my way and take the beating because getting approval from that lot would mean I'm one of them.

 

[NoTalentHack]

So in other words, if you give them EXACTLY what they want down to a formula you can manage to thread the needle through the various warlike factions.

And it seems the way to get good results is for the husband to be a "real man" and set things right If the man is manly enough then all is right in the world because the CSI crowd can live vicariously through them.

"Justice prevail"

Over all the evil women.

In other words, cater to misbegotten incels and you're good.

I think I'd rather write my way and take the beating because getting approval from that lot would mean I'm one of them.

He described a way to succeed there, not the only way. I guarantee you anyone who works regularly in I/T (or NC/R, or Mature, etc.) could put together a formula for succeeding in those categories, too. People can still write other types of stories (including sharing, swinging, swapping, etc.) and do well in LW. Like you, I write what I want, and the stories I publish there do pretty well regardless of whether they include reconciliation, revenge, moving on, or any number of other possibilities. Hell, my best rated story there doesn't fit into a neat box.

 

[AndersonsBiographer]

So in other words, if you give them EXACTLY what they want down to a formula you can manage to thread the needle through the various warlike factions.

And it seems the way to get good results is for the husband to be a "real man" and set things right If the man is manly enough then all is right in the world because the CSI crowd can live vicariously through them.

"Justice prevail"

Over all the evil women.

In other words, cater to misbegotten incels and you're good.

I think I'd rather write my way and take the beating because getting approval from that lot would mean I'm one of them.

LW both fascinates and frightens me. Some of the stories on there have more hate and unsubdued rage than any old C/W murder ballad.

Actually, murder ballads get a lot of their power from just how unnervingly even-tempered and subdued (when not incredibly upbeat and happy-sounding) they can be. LW? I don't know what's going on there, but I do wonder if the "live vicariously" part has prevented a few murders.

 

[lovecraft68]

LW both fascinates and frightens me. Some of the stories on there have more hate and unsubdued rage than any old C/W murder ballad.

Actually, murder ballads get a lot of their power from just how unnervingly even-tempered and subdued (when not incredibly upbeat and happy-sounding) they can be. LW? I don't know what's going on there, but I do wonder if the "live vicariously" part has prevented a few murders.

Writing-and reading-is catharsis.

Therre's a double edged sword with writing extreme material. For example, I write taboo stories, so on one hand, could my work encourage someone with that desire to make a move? On the other hand, could reading that material help a person with an attraction they know is wrong cope with it? Same for non con, and some of these over the top burn the bitch stories. Maybe the comments that spew hate are the release valve for impotent losers who know they'd get locked up or beaten up if they slung this crap in real life?

The issue with LW is, as NTH and Gamblin point out, is the category has a crazy number of moving parts and factions. To get a decent score and not be eviscerated in the comments is like treading through a mine field and writing with the method of "Oh, change that or so and so will get upset, crap now so and so, and wait this might..."

We write in hopes people will like our stories, and if at times we may pander a little along the way, that's fine. But when you have to force yourself into that tight of a box and curb your muse to that degree, who's story are you writing?

My take on hotwife/cuck is a recipe for disaster over there. My theory on cuck is its a form of sub behavior along the lines of BDSM where the cuck/sub gets upset at being humiliated, yet at the same time, loves it and its the top(or wife's) job to make them face their love hate. Therefore my stories feature wives doing who and what they want and husbands dealing with it. My last effort featured three unlikable characters, and written that way on purpose. There are a lot of twisted people out there, and sometimes, they all run into each other. Story is a solid effort, and a lot of work, but was killed, but I was fine with it, because I wrote it that way. A few "well written, but..." comments were all I needed to make it worth it.

I'm not afraid to put a story where I feel it belongs even knowing in advance its going to get beat down. I suppose the fact I do think its funny to watch these jackals cackle makes it more bearable.

 

[Lifestyle66]

When it comes to writing LW stories, you just have to get over any desire for EVERYONE to love your story, and write what you feel like writing. You will get more views there than just about anywhere else, even if many of them hate your story with a 1. But when you hit the right nerves, with the right title and description, ... THAT can be satisfying in itself.

One story I wrote last year "What Were You Thinking?" (Husband discovers his wife’s deception.) is only rated at 3.35. But it has over 104k views and over 1.3k votes! The husband gets even with his wife for her deceptive weekend fling, by setting up his own weekend fling with a woman he knows his wife hates.

My latest is an attempt at a different kind of BTB story, ("Break the Bitch, Fuck with Her Mind", The ex-husband has decades of anger to work through.) in which the husband has every right to HATE his ex-wife. But he settles for sending his feminist ex-wife videos of him in BDSM sessions with his new girlfriend (who demands that he abuse her, it's her kink). This story has 27k views and is rated similarly at 3.31 with almost a thousand votes.

I'm working on a follow-up story to the "Break the Bitch", where he'll use his high-tech skills to make her think she's going crazy (along with more BDSM videos.) I can't see writing violent stories where the husband goes off using guns or bats. But, hey, ... a TV in the ex-wife's house turning on in the middle of the night showing him choking his girlfriend until she orgasms??? Where's the real harm in that? (BTW, I knew a woman who had that kink, where she could only get off with a guy choking her. Weird, I know, but true to life. So, I'll use it.)

 

[lovecraft68]

When it comes to writing LW stories, you just have to get over any desire for EVERYONE to love your story, and write what you feel like writing. You will get more views there than just about anywhere else, even if many of them hate your story with a 1. But when you hit the right nerves, with the right title and description, ... THAT can be satisfying in itself.

One story I wrote last year "What Were You Thinking?" (Husband discovers his wife’s deception.) is only rated at 3.35. But it has over 104k views and over 1.3k votes! The husband gets even with his wife for her deceptive weekend fling, by setting up his own weekend fling with a woman he knows his wife hates.

My latest is an attempt at a different kind of BTB story, ("Break the Bitch, Fuck with Her Mind", The ex-husband has decades of anger to work through.) in which the husband has every right to HATE his ex-wife. But he settles for sending his feminist ex-wife videos of him in BDSM sessions with his new girlfriend (who demands that he abuse her, it's her kink). This story has 27k views and is rated similarly at 3.31 with almost a thousand votes.

I'm working on a follow-up story to the "Break the Bitch", where he'll use his high-tech skills to make her think she's going crazy (along with more BDSM videos.) I can't see writing violent stories where the husband goes off using guns or bats. But, hey, ... a TV in the ex-wife's house turning on in the middle of the night showing him choking his girlfriend until she orgasms??? Where's the real harm in that? (BTW, I knew a woman who had that kink, where she could only get off with a guy choking her. Weird, I know, but true to life. So, I'll use it.)

I agree with you, write what you want and accept the beating, but you'll still get a lot of attention, some of it even positive.

I'm referring to the whole step by step, tip toe around everyone and cater to as many whackos as possible to get the precious H. If that's what one writes anyway, sure, but to have to confirm to that, its selling out creativity for brown nosing.

 

[Lifestyle66]

I agree with you, write what you want and accept the beating, but you'll still get a lot of attention, some of it even positive.

I'm referring to the whole step by step, tip toe around everyone and cater to as many whackos as possible to get the precious H. If that's what one writes anyway, sure, but to have to confirm to that, its selling out creativity for brown nosing.

But that's what you do when writing in any category, writing to their fetish! You're just categorizing your "wackos" and pandering to them.

 

[lovecraft68]

But that's what you do when writing in any category, writing to their fetish! You're just categorizing your "wackos" and pandering to them.

Right, to a degree we're trying to deliver what they want, but you can also serve up something a different from time to time as well. My last taboo story barely got over 4.5 which is way below my average because I went with something off the beaten path.

 

[Andrew1968]

You have to love what you write, and you have a bit of courage to do a married extra-marital fun, swinging, sharing and more type of story, i.e., a true Loving Wives story, and then get it published in the Loving Wives category, where it belongs.

I am currently working on a cuckold/hot-wife themed story which I have been writing on and off for the last two years. The thing is a monster and will probably end up being 70,000 or more words long. It is called ‘Pandora’s Box.’ It will go into Loving Wives. It will be shunned and ignored. It will receive a so called “bad score.” I will delete any rude comments as usual. It’s all so routine over there.

I’m writing for myself and for a relatively small fan base. I’m hoping some people who view the thing read it and enjoy it. I personally believe most of the view's stories get in LW are from people who are looking to read the nasty comments or who open the thing, skim it briefly and then ignore it. I’ve always stated that I am a selfish writer. I write what I like. I’m constantly surprised that people follow me and favorite my stories. Appreciative and positive feedback always amazes me.

If you believe in what you write, then just post it where you want.

 

[Lifestyle66]

Right, to a degree we're trying to deliver what they want, but you can also serve up something a different from time to time as well. My last taboo story barely got over 4.5 which is way below my average because I went with something off the beaten path.

If you agree that every category has their fetish advocates, then you should recognize that those advocates tend to give more positive ratings to their favored category stories. Then it follows that higher ratings in those categories does not equate to objectively better stories. They are just stories which have more appeal to those tracking and appreciating that fetish.

In that case, what we're experiencing in LW is more of a "catch all" category of a broader group of readers with a variety of interests. And some people HATE surprise stories which don't appeal to their fetish.

That's why I settle for what I've estimated as a 0.8 to 1.0 lower rating in LW than I might have gotten with the same story published in Erotic Couplings or Group Sex. I could publish my stories there, ... if I were desperate for a Red-H. And I would then settle for fewer views or people reading my story. But in Loving Wives, my shitty writing of 56 stories (38 in LW) have achieved over one million views!

So, fuck the ratings. I've touched more eyes! (Even if I made the reader vomit, as in the latest comment: "Jesus. This is scary shit.")

 

[lovecraft68]

If you agree that every category has their fetish advocates, then you should recognize that those advocates tend to give more positive ratings to their favored category stories. Then it follows that higher ratings in those categories does not equate to objectively better stories. They are just stories which have more appeal to those tracking and appreciating that fetish.

In that case, what we're experiencing in LW is more of a "catch all" category of a broader group of readers with a variety of interests. And some people HATE surprise stories which don't appeal to their fetish.

That's why I settle for what I've estimated as a 0.8 to 1.0 lower rating in LW than I might have gotten with the same story published in Erotic Couplings or Group Sex. I could publish my stories there, ... if I were desperate for a Red-H. And I would then settle for fewer views or people reading my story. But in Loving Wives, my shitty writing of 56 stories (38 in LW) have achieved over one million views!

So, fuck the ratings. I've touched more eyes! (Even if I made the reader vomit, as in the latest comment: "Jesus. This is scary shit.")

EC is decent scoring, but you're right, lower readership. Group is a friendly category, and the views aren't that low, but only taboo tops LW,

LW differs from other categories only in the sheer number of vocal factions and the way some see the wife/cuck material as being way more polarizing than it needs to be in fictional form.

But yes, the comments are worth the price of admission. Some of my all time favs are the insults I've gotten there.

 

[Swift1620]

I've written nine stories so far, and only categorised one of them as LW. If I tell you that all but one of my stories has got a Hot rating, can you guess which one didn't?

In truth, I don't mind the lower rating as such, and it's not as if the story didn't find an appreciate audience (of all my stories, it is the second most favourited). If anything, I guess I'm just annoyed that the absence of a Hot against this story means I don't have a matching set, which probably says more about me than the above comments say about the LW readership.

 

[lovecraft68]

I've written nine stories so far, and only categorised one of them as LW. If I tell you that all but one of my stories has got a Hot rating, can you guess which one didn't?

In truth, I don't mind the lower rating as such, and it's not as if the story didn't find an appreciate audience (of all my stories, it is the second most favourited). If anything, I guess I'm just annoyed that the absence of a Hot against this story means I don't have a matching set, which probably says more about me than the above comments say about the LW readership.

I have 148 stories, all but five have Red H's.

Two are from a long incest series and in both chapters something bad happens so the readers down voted because reality sucks in erotic fantasy

The other three are of course in LW, including a 3.08 and a 2.89

 

[Lifestyle66]

For those of you who CLAIM Loving Wives is full of misogynistic, women-hating trolls, check out today's posted story "Ping!" by 'qhml1' (8k words). It's about a wife catching her cheating husband, and it's currently rated at 4.52 with 14 encouraging comments!

As I've said before, LW audience hates cheaters. It's just that many of the stories there involve cheating, loving wives.

 

[lovecraft68]

For those of you who CLAIM Loving Wives is full of misogynistic, women-hating trolls, check out today's posted story "Ping!" by 'qhml1' (8k words). It's about a wife catching her cheating husband, and it's currently rated at 4.52 with 14 encouraging comments!

As I've said before, LW audience hates cheaters. It's just that many of the stories there involve cheating, loving wives.

Both can be true, you know.

"Full of...." doesn't mean all.

Just walk through comments sections to see the proof the type of slug that has found a home of likeminded friends there.

The other people are just the decent neighbors watching the bad element bring down the property values.

 

[Lifestyle66]

Both can be true, you know.

"Full of...." doesn't mean all.

Just walk through comments sections to see the proof the type of slug that has found a home of likeminded friends there.

The other people are just the decent neighbors watching the bad element bring down the property values.

But when will your misogynistic trolls weigh in on this story of a wife taking a baseball bat to her cheating husband?

It's still at 4.55 with over 11k views and none of the 21 comments are negative.

They hate CHEATERS and many hate extra-marital sex, regardless of gender.

 

[NoTalentHack]

But when will your misogynistic trolls weigh in on this story of a wife taking a baseball bat to her cheating husband?

It's still at 4.55 with over 11k views and none of the 21 comments are negative.

They hate CHEATERS and many hate extra-marital sex, regardless of gender.

Yes, the really misogynistic ones will.

That seems to be the point of contention here, I think. With a readerbase as large as LW, and especially given the route that it's taken to get there, there are plenty of people there just for drama or to see stories where cheaters "get rekt." But there are also folks who... well, let's be honest: they want women to suffer. Or they think that the way men and women cheat and their reasons are inherently different, i.e., "with men it's always about sex and with women it's always about emotional connection," or whatever. Or... well, any number of things that boil down to "women are inferior." I've gotten a fair number in my comments, mostly anonymous. I will say that it's a VERY small number, even in the stories that most riled up that faction.

However.

I decided to take a quick run through the tags on some I/T stories, and the ones with "cuckold" have some of the same types of comments I saw in LW, but, notably, none of the named accounts making those complaints are ones I recognize from the LW commenters. Same thing with "femdom," "cock cage," "chastity," "NTR," "mmf," and similar tags. The hateful commenters aren't coming from LW; in fact, a number of the comments say "take this cuck shit back to LW” and the like.

While LW is definitely "cheating is bad" central, saying it's the place for misogyny on Lit is silly. Is it a place? Sometimes, yeah, for some people. But if you put the things that trigger the guys that hate those types of tags in I/T (and I assume anywhere else), you're going to trigger their counterparts that hang out in other parts of the site.

Bonus nerdery I realized while browsing through the stories: the scores on those stories in I/T seem to follow the same pattern as LW scores, i.e., they're lower than the writing skill would indicate by .5 points or so, and if they're part of a series, the first one is low-rated, while the rest are closer to the norm for the category.

Here's my theory: it's not that LW is "leaking" as people sometimes joke; it's that LW has the most cuckolding stories, so it's a target-rich environment.

I know the vast majority of the named LW commenters, and, as I said, I didn't see a single one of them in them in the comments of these other stories. In fact, in my foray into I/T, at least one of my regulars went out of their way to say, "hey, well-written as usual, but ick. No rating, stopped after the first page." I got similar comments in BDSM, NC/R, and several of the other less vanilla categories from regulars, too.

It's not that LW is more misogynistic than the rest of the site; it's that writers (mostly) don't put the stuff that upsets those triggered by cuck stories and the like in the rest of the categories. When they do? Similar results.

 

[Gamblnluck]

My take on hotwife/cuck is a recipe for disaster over there. My theory on cuck is its a form of sub behavior along the lines of BDSM where the cuck/sub gets upset at being humiliated, yet at the same time, loves it and its the top(or wife's) job to make them face their love hate. Therefore my stories feature wives doing who and what they want and husbands dealing with it. My last effort featured three unlikable characters, and written that way on purpose. There are a lot of twisted people out there, and sometimes, they all run into each other.

The first part of that is what fetish is all about. That is where the story goes. The domination part and reluctant sub doing what his 'loving wife' orders whether he likes it or not.
Your last story was not so clear. Your husband was a gun spinning wannabe cowboy who you portrayed as an idiot who played with pistol like he might his cock.
Yes, he hated what his wife was doing but she convinced him to go along. Other than getting laid, you never gave a valid reason why.
Sometimes, a man (like a wife) would put up with the abuse for the sake of the children. That will raise the hackles from the crowd of how is it good for kids to see a parent treated that way.
But to have a man trounced, his ego demolished and then have him say, "I like to see my wife have fun and I get aroused seeing a woman fucked" so I will put up with the disrespect is what sets the LW crowd apart. I'd bet many of them would read the same story in Fetish and give it a pass. Many of the stories make no sense when you ask yourself why unless they have that one screw loose that makes them like it.
All BTB's do not have the cheating spouse destroyed. Some have it simply end in divorce and the cheated upon walks away. Many find that unsatisfactory if the abuse is not answered in some way.
Reconciliations are are common and accepted IF you show a reason. The bull stomped the man's dog, fucked his wife, and laughed when the cuck ate her out at her insistence. Then he takes her back when she says, "It was hot to see you grovel, nutless. But please do not divorce me." and he says "Okay' No resolution. That story is not going to be accepted either.
You could have changed that story of your gun wielding idiot a little and had it turn out so much different. But the real reason is you love to throw shit out so you can bitch when it is not accepted.
You are like the guy who rubs shit under a vegan's nose, saying "But it's organic" and wonder why he protests.

 

[Lifestyle66]

The first part of that is what fetish is all about. That is where the story goes. The domination part and reluctant sub doing what his 'loving wife' orders whether he likes it or not.
Your last story was not so clear. Your husband was a gun spinning wannabe cowboy who you portrayed as an idiot who played with pistol like he might his cock.
Yes, he hated what his wife was doing but she convinced him to go along. Other than getting laid, you never gave a valid reason why.
Sometimes, a man (like a wife) would put up with the abuse for the sake of the children. That will raise the hackles from the crowd of how is it good for kids to see a parent treated that way.
But to have a man trounced, his ego demolished and then have him say, "I like to see my wife have fun and I get aroused seeing a woman fucked" so I will put up with the disrespect is what sets the LW crowd apart. I'd bet many of them would read the same story in Fetish and give it a pass. Many of the stories make no sense when you ask yourself why unless they have that one screw loose that makes them like it.
All BTB's do not have the cheating spouse destroyed. Some have it simply end in divorce and the cheated upon walks away. Many find that unsatisfactory if the abuse is not answered in some way.
Reconciliations are are common and accepted IF you show a reason. The bull stomped the man's dog, fucked his wife, and laughed when the cuck ate her out at her insistence. Then he takes her back when she says, "It was hot to see you grovel, nutless. But please do not divorce me." and he says "Okay' No resolution. That story is not going to be accepted either.
You could have changed that story of your gun wielding idiot a little and had it turn out so much different. But the real reason is you love to throw shit out so you can bitch when it is not accepted.
You are like the guy who rubs shit under a vegan's nose, saying "But it's organic" and wonder why he protests.

Put the bottle down and sober up before reading and posting.

I think you've confused the misogynist hating LC68 with me (LS66) and my story "Raging Hormones" (or the short "Pavlov's Dog"), when she gives her gun-toting husband a BJ after she comes home from fucking Earl. And you've cluelessly, all-knowingly berated me about how hormone balance REALLY WORKS FOR EVERYONE because you know it all, and how I was wrong.

Not all extra-marital sex needs to end in divorce or violence. Only the truly selfish insist on one-size-fits-all, and that marriage is the lifelong mistake you made, and must tough it out and endure until death.

People change over time, and in some cases those changes are not a choice.

I've decided on the plot of another story in which the wife is assaulted (pre-story in their recent past), and the husband can't deal with her changes and changed sexual needs. Is he the "loving husband" when he refuses to meet his wife's needs? And is she the "cheating wife" deserving of more violence, even though she had no choice, but the experience changed her?

We'll see how the judgmental shits deal with that conundrum.

 

[DukeofPaducah]

In my short history of writing LW stories I have found even the negative comments to be constructive and respectful. I have been able to tune in to what the readers prefer in a story line at the very least.
The personal attacks and character assassins are another story. I suspect a pathogen has crossed their
blood/brain barrier and started swinging a soap on a rope.

 

[Gamblnluck]

In my short history of writing LW stories I have found even the negative comments to be constructive and respectful. I have been able to tune in to what the readers prefer in a story line at the very least.

Yes, you did. It was a short and sweet (pun intended) story.
Like some of your comments said, reconciliation was quick, and the wife's turnaround was quite abrupt. Did she just come to her senses and then realize hubbie knew what had happened? Or realize she was caught and came to her senses. You deserved a better score in my opinion.

 

[DukeofPaducah]

I suggest you read Ahazura’s original story ‘Brothers’ for context if you haven’t already. It’s a short but rousing tale.
Jay’s wife’s confession was pre-emptive, her prompt undisclosed. Her sister Becky is another story entirely.
I tried to cover that in another installment.
It has been said that given enough monkeys banging on keyboards, one will inevitably reproduce the complete works of Shakespeare. I intend to keep banging Inshallah, though you may have to settle for Green Eggs and Ham.

 

[lovecraft68]

Put the bottle down and sober up before reading and posting.

I think you've confused the misogynist hating LC68 with me (LS66) and my story "Raging Hormones" (or the short "Pavlov's Dog"), when she gives her gun-toting husband a BJ after she comes home from fucking Earl. And you've cluelessly, all-knowingly berated me about how hormone balance REALLY WORKS FOR EVERYONE because you know it all, and how I was wrong.

Not all extra-marital sex needs to end in divorce or violence. Only the truly selfish insist on one-size-fits-all, and that marriage is the lifelong mistake you made, and must tough it out and endure until death.

People change over time, and in some cases those changes are not a choice.

I've decided on the plot of another story in which the wife is assaulted (pre-story in their recent past), and the husband can't deal with her changes and changed sexual needs. Is he the "loving husband" when he refuses to meet his wife's needs? And is she the "cheating wife" deserving of more violence, even though she had no choice, but the experience changed her?

We'll see how the judgmental shits deal with that conundrum.

You sound like an old man yelling.

Oh, wait...