LeBroz
Let the mind roam free
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Thanks Art & 1201 for mentioning A Girl's Best Friend on the New Poems Thread. Its genesis came from 4degrees' recent work, rhetoric . I read those ending lines about diamonds and these lines came to me:
& sitting in her nineties
bejeweled with crystal rock
far warmer than her soul
And 12, if you see some weakness here, you should see the lame lines I cut as this thing progressed! Especially about her working her husbands to exhaustion as they provided her with her diamonds and other knickknacks she craved. And it certainly is different from End Times?!!
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Thanks Art & 1201 for mentioning A Girl's Best Friend on the New Poems Thread. Its genesis came from 4degrees' recent work, rhetoric . I read those ending lines about diamonds and these lines came to me:
& sitting in her nineties
bejeweled with crystal rock
far warmer than her soul
And 12, if you see some weakness here, you should see the lame lines I cut as this thing progressed! Especially about her working her husbands to exhaustion as they provided her with her diamonds and other knickknacks she craved. And it certainly is different from End Times?!!
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