greenmountaineer
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Thanks, Ashesh9, for your comment on "Love Poem I." It's gratifying when a reader's comments match the poet's intent, which is what yours did.
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oought oh,
hightails it outta here
and I get the overwhelming feeling of alone again
but congrats and maybe I was wrong. (i have icicles on my neurons, butters)
waa lah. left 3 today, either innocuous or favorable and on people that are not subject to blowbackismThere's a thaw coming, Fuck Daddy, alone never, wrong, maybe but I'd never know
waa lah. left 3 today, either innocuous or favorable and on people that are not subject to blowbackism
now if I can only remember the spot doggerel I thought of. It was bad.
oh that one is easyAll spot on imo but you have not left a comment on \this and I would really be interested in your thoughts, please sir.
oh that one is easy
unrulio is butters pet name for me
it looks like she is vaguely disgusted by me sending her love letters
or
it is a cocaine party I missed
Christ, Harry, I'm still wading through the images generated by prawn
butters is a difficult writer, I am not that thawed out yet.
no damn you, difficult is a good thing! If I knew what it was at first reading, would it be poetry? your works hints at look a bit further, the there is something more...
unrulio!'s about right
i didn't know i was a difficult writer. now you, you make me see things even you don't intend half the time, so i get stuff wrong because of what i'm bringing to the party.
harry played a game of chess, i ran with pawns/prawns... and took liberties with the flower
damn me all to helllllllllllllllllll - i've seen that movie, Guidono damn you, difficult is a good thing! If I knew what it was at first reading, would it be poetry? your works hints at look a bit further, the there is something more...
prawn rocks!
Oh, BTW, lovely, I saw it when I read it, and BTW I saw so much more. Only thing missing? was Johnny Depp and I'm not sure he wasn't in it, because the rest of the cast was - in 3D. Poetry as an associative process, did I say that once before?
unrulio!'s about right
i didn't know i was a difficult writer. now you, you make me see things even you don't intend half the time, so i get stuff wrong because of what i'm bringing to the party.
harry played a game of chess, i ran with pawns/prawns... and took liberties with the flower
Damn all those years I thought bogie was making an ethnic slur.Thank you to Pelegrino and Cleardaynow for kind comments on "Horatio, Abridged"
Pelegrino, it is the Horatio of "Hamlet". The title stems from an English love of puns, and i am sorry if it confused I'm rather fond of the secondary characters in "Hamlet", as perhaps "A Mother's Letter to her Son" shows
Cleardaynow, I wasn't sure what you meant about the last few lines. Horatio feels himself a relic preserved in aspic ("If it don't gel, it ain't aspic"--Humphrey Bogart in "The Big Sleep"), and felicity is a reference to Hamlet's dying words to Horatio, (Act V, Sc 2)
"If thou didst ever hold me in thy heart
absent thee from felicity awhile,
and in this harsh world draw thy breath in pain,
to tell my story."
Which kind of sums up the poem
I've been going through several kinds of hell, so it is nice to have the chance to talk poetry again. Thank you.
Damn all those years I thought bogie was making an ethnic slur.
I'll have to go read this sucka.
Sorry about the hells, I've been barely able to get though mine.
I hope so, I went in a total direction with FelicityI brought your name up in regards to line endings. Denice Levertov had also used a double unstressed end of line. Tzara had posted a link on what she had to say on cadence. I forget the thread.Oh LMAO Thank you dear 1201.
We have to laugh sometimes don't we?