Priscilla_June
Naughty Worldbuilder
- Joined
- Apr 7, 2022
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Im gonna have to work “soupy vag” into a story now.Lol. A fragment of a lengthy comment on my story:
"Also, reading about a 'reddened, soupy vag' goes beyond lacking class and elegance."
Well, yes. I agree, in fact. The theme I was going for was not "class and elegance." So thank you, gentle reader. Except that he copped to leaving a 1* for that, which I thought was a bit extreme in a story lasting 25,086 words.
So funny.