Wriggle
Refined & Rakish
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I have just popped my literotica cherry with my first story in the nude day theme. It's called Ingrid in Ibiza and I'd love some criticism.
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My first dive into the LW category, with The Colonels Wife. Pretty well received for the category and the trolls have been kinda quiet as it's just an open marriage story. Link in my sig line.
Same rain here in NE US but we love the rain for romantic weekend mornings and, too, will add some of these Lit stories to the day.I'm looking forward to reading your story sometime today. It's a dreary, rainy day here today so I'll just chill at home and relax with it and lit.
I'm envious! Can't lie!!Same rain here in NE US but we love the rain for romantic weekend mornings and, too, will add some of these Lit stories to the day.
This is just my opinion, but that is a very good story. Did you have a someone proof reading it before release? It has very few mistakes/ irregularities. Good flow too. Please keep goingI have just popped my literotica cherry with my first story in the nude day theme. It's called Ingrid in Ibiza and I'd love some criticism.
Wow, thank you, Dunes.This is just my opinion, but that is a very good story. Did you have a someone proof reading it before release? It has very few mistakes/ irregularities. Good flow too. Please keep going
giddy-upI'm envious! Can't lie!!
It would had been a nice morning to had done the same thing with my wife but noooo she had to just fuck herself on my cock and ran off to tackle her " things to do " list for today haaaaa!?!?
I really shouldn't complain since she rode me like a champ to be honest!
"Yes, I am a bit hairy, aren't I? Like some demon pixie girl, a child of a wolf mother." Jenny placed a finger beside Alice's hand on the table, almost touching, not quite. "Quite the contrast to your smooth blonde kitty, that's for sure." She moved her finger forward half an inch to touch Alice's skin. "You taste like honey, you do."
Alice didn't say anything, but with her own finger, pressed back against Jenny's fingertip.
Jenny took another chip from the bowl. "We must do it again, sometime."
"God," said Alice, "that -"
"Would be amazing, I know," Jenny replied, then eased Alice into another conversation, about a bike ride she'd had through a wood, where she saw squirrels. She knew not to over-charge Alice's imagination.
Sounds epic!I've just finished a long (37 Chapters) story in the Fantasy/Alternate History genre. It's the first story I've posted here and not having an editor, meant that there're some spelling/grammar errors in it, though nothing serious. Check it out and give me your opinion
The name is A Long Time from Home and the the premise for the story is that Atlantis (I’m sure you’re heard of it) was real and inhabited by a human race called Atlantians. The Atlantians had mental powers and magic, but eventually their island disappeared, which is a large part of the plot.
The main character, Ivah, is an Atlantian, who use life force to keep himself young, drifting through the centuries, as he wanders the world to keep his eternal youth hidden. At some point during the roman era, he walks into a cave and uses a trance that sends him into a state of suspended animation, indented to last only for a few years, but he makes a mistake that causes the trance to last until he hears a danger.
He wakes up in June 2000 and has to adapt to the modern world, while we follow his past (during the Bronze age) in flashbacks.
I see what you did there!Sounds epic!
What the fuck?Fetish video
I’m afraid to click on that.What the fuck?
But I am still curious.I’m afraid to click on that.
Don't be. It's really slow, well over an hour, cast of two. Bit of a yawn fest tbh. The fetish is interrogation.But I am still curious.
My first ever collaborative work (with @Djmac1031 ).
Traffic - A couple find ways to fight boredom during a road trip
Seems to have gone down well - much like the FMC.
Em
And then a bit sexier againDefinitely a fun new experiment.
We really only had one goal with it: make it as fun and sexy as possible.
Thanks for taking one for the team, winter.Don't be. It's really slow, well over an hour, cast of two. Bit of a yawn fest tbh. The fetish is interrogation.
Thanks, lovely bio by the way.Don't be. It's really slow, well over an hour, cast of two. Bit of a yawn fest tbh. The fetish is interrogation.