Comments That Make Your Day

From @Luv_to_read, on the latest installment of Alistaire's Summer:
Your stories are always a fun read! I find myself re-reading them when I can't find anything new that catches my interest - just for the sheer entertainment value alone.
 
The latest comment from my story "Aftermath, Just Loving You":

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medicationtime1 about 15 hours ago
although i am 100% against spouse sharing and i do agree that the rational result should be divorce since they have two different views on the matter. but i do believe that paul was a bit cruel to his wife with the division of assets and cruel remarks, he should have insisted to give her her due 50% of the assets as she's been a long time faithful wife who was in a trauma. the story is very thought povoking and despite my views i cannot decide who is right and who is wrong. to each his own i guess. thank you to the author for a great effort in tackling a difficult and important subject.
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THIS is what I was striving to do: get the hardline, monogamous-only readers to pause and think about it!

NOTE: The story is 17k words about the subsequent changes and problems with her husband after the wife survived her sexual assault. You might also read my "What I Wrote and Why: Aftermath" for the reasoning and context of the story.
 
On my Crime & Punishment story, Interviewed about Indecency.

"Excellent story, well told. As I'm not into same sex action, I read it for the quality of your story telling and the personal interactions, for which 5🌟 from me!"

It's a bit of a theme, people not into things enjoying my work anyway. To repurpose the old joke, 'What's the difference between a straight guy and a bisexual guy? About ten of my stories...'
 
I got these two lovely ones this morning from the same reader, one on She-Wolf 750-Word Story and the other on Vengeance Is Its Own Reward.

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A few nice comments

Buckshot Ranch: Winner 2024 Summer Lovin

Liked it solid 5 stars.

An excellent story, but I'm not sure about the supernatural powers bit. The story would have been fine without it, however I was happy with her gift with animals.

Well done. Fantastic read.

And a special appearance by our good friend 26thNC
by 26thNC on 1 hour ago
Great story in all respects. I don’t often read Romance stories, but I had heard good things about this one. I would recommend it it to everyone who enjoys real stories, and not just extended sex scenes. Be proud of this one, it was a pleasure to read.


Yes, many thanks. It seems that I'm just a romantic softie at heart. Very well written and constructed. Ok, a tad unrealistic with all the supernatural aspects but, hey, it's your story. Thanks again. Cheers. Oh, what happened to the rating/voting system?

A romance with SF/F elements. Nice!


Homeless:

very good a pleasant read

Wheelchair Girl:

Five stars from me also! There are no star buttons to press. Thank-you for this wonderful story
 
I got this on a story I wrote seven months ago, I didn't notice it immediately :( but I get so few comments on my stories.

MaRKuSW74 2 days ago
All around, an awesome exciting story, I personally would've enjoyed the ending being more of a "Surprise" she's a succubus in college, fell for a guy, etc, and still got the happily ever after
All the same, excellent story writing, please continue to surprise

I tend to have happily ever after, a bit of a romantic! Interestingly the other comment on the story took the opposite view.
LovesDancingabout 2 months ago
An unusual and erotic tale, at first I thought it was a nonhuman/succubus story but this is much better.

I must get around to doing a nonhuman story. My scatter gun themes in my stories probably doesn't help with gaining a following, but it can be fun for me! I don't think I will ever get a full set, unless I can find a way interpret some, like I have with incest/taboo!
 
@Norway_1705 you've been making a good point in comments on Alena's Game... re femdom: "What if all these tortures, these punishments, these orgasms denied for a small misstep or even the fear of saying an unwelcome word (!), were just a great metaphor for thousands of marriages characterized by Dead Bedroom?"

I've actually given that a lot of thought, that femdom denial could come about just from sheer lack of wifely sex drive, but it's a tricky story to pull off on Lit. "I'll get the high heels, darling. Make me a cup of tea while you relieve yourself".

Maybe one for the Humour and Satire section.
 
Buckshot Ranch

I agree with just about everybody. Lovely story. It even managed to overcome all that paranormal garbage. If could have had had the opportunity, for my first time I would have awarded 5 stars to a story, on which my comment had included the word 'garbage'.
It always surprises me that people have so little stretch in their minds to accept something slightly different from the boy meets girl, boy loses girl, boy gets girl back. LOL, he's probably be shocked to find out I cut two similar scenes out because I felt it was getting too far away from Julie's character and the thrust of the story.

Well written story, would score 5 if possible. Enjoyed the supernatural aspect. Would be execellent start for a series.

A 5 all the way

Excellent story very well written loved the characters very well enjoyed reading it.



Excellent and very well written story.
 
@oneagainst thank you. Yes, I know, readers here are just looking for the input to a quick masturbation and no one has time to reflect.
But someone (maybe, you?) had once written that readers of “Loving Wives” are often cheated husbands, looking inside the novels for an explanation of what happened to them in real life.
I didn't want to bother you with my comments, and I don't want to ask you to change your magnificent prose or the projects you have already tacked on.
I just wanted to clarify to myself that perhaps (maybe) a small percentage of readers read stories of FLR and forced male chastity because they actually experience that situation (with safe words, spare keys, etc.), but perhaps a large majority just fantasize about an extreme situation that somehow cathartically exorcises what they fail to express, but which happens in the real life of every monogamous husband stuck in a Dead Bedroom Marriage (and to think about it: if a man fucked his wife ten times a day, why would he continually consult an erotic website? ). Also this eagerness to worship the wife on a pedestal as if she were a gorgeous Goddess ()... and to imagine that the wife is able to attract tall, muscular young Bulls... . But I agree that talking about menopause and declining desire on an Erotica site is like trying to sell refrigerators to Eskimos.
I am very slowly reading your narrative. I think I sensed something deep echoing inside me, and perhaps the only way to express it on the site is precisely in humorous form: saying something seriously, masquerading as a joke. We'll see if I'll be able to. I will leave a comment now and then, but it is never controversial, believe me. I just hope to help another poor and naive reader like me, to better understand why he/she reads precisely stories of forced chastity and not great fucks with gallons of semen ejaculated from equine penises.
 
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(when in fact women after 50 are all insecure, weak, menopausal, sick with thyroid or cholesterol)

Often old wives are, first of all, old; then lazy, and finally less sexually inclined in general.
This thread is for positive comments about stories. Not an outing for misogynistic statements about women. Please go start your own thread if you want to out yourself!
 
“When I awake in the morning and find a new chapter is up I know my day will get off to a good start. I brew my coffee, make breakfast and start my day with Joe.”

Joe is my oft used MC. To think anyone is eagerly awaiting my next chapter blows my mind.
 
This thread is for positive comments about stories. Not an outing for misogynistic statements about women. Please go start your own thread if you want to out yourself!
I'm so sorry. I edited the first quick writ. I may cancel anything if you want it. Sorry I don't speak english and i make many mistakes
 
The forum used to be (or still is) filled with people posting crappy comments they get, especially from Loving Wives. I started this thread in an attempt to have an area where people could celebrate positive feedback on their stories. I'd appreciate it staying like that. I don't want fights, ugly comments, or anything negative.
I'd appreciate you editing the comment to remove those two lines.
 
OK, this one on Aunt Nancy is kinda cool.


All aunts should love the nieces and nephews with such devotion. Written impeccably in mechanics and content with a perfect pace making the reader voyeuristic.
 
A really kind one on Arbitrary:

Best. Author. Currently. On. LW.

No question.

I have a lot of faves - Todd, Hooked, Q, Ohio. More who have not posted in several years.

I look forward to a new NTH or Hooked story like Christmas Day. Thank you. You’ve made it a good 2024 for LW.

Makes me feel a little guilty, because I haven't posted nearly as much in LW this year. :D Oh, well, something to correct.
 
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