Non Poetry Posts from the Suddenly Thread

[minsue]

Re: i'm not gay

i'm stuck in a hick town
with two kids and no man
and worst of all
i'm not gay

i work hard at being wicked
but damn it
my reputation is apple pie

if i was a bi girl
i'd be hip
cool
like totally popular

i've tried to be a lesbian
i've done gay things
like looking at porn
where one chick poses close to another chick's pussy

she's smiling and almost touching it
almost

i even tried a girl on girl fantasy
but a guy showed up about three minutes into it

sigh

i'm not gay


(yeah... I don't think this going to be submitted. lol)

I wish you would, Eve. I abso-fuckin-lutely love it. I know I'm easy with the 4s & 5s , but I wouldn't have a flinch of unease giving this one a big fat 5.

Mindy, who forgives you for not being gay

 

[WickedEve]

Re: Re: Do I have Too Many Commas?

lol, OK, that's wicked
I need sleep

This one has been edited and submitted. Yes, I told my child that flowers bite. And for about 3 days, she worried me to death every time we walked through the yard.

"Mommy! Is that flower going to bite me?"

"NO! Of course not. Mommy was teasing. Flowers don't bite. Well, there's the Venus Fly Trap that sort of eats bugs, but don't worry. There are none around here."

I hang my head in shame.

 

[WickedEve]

Re: Re: i'm not gay

I wish you would, Eve. I abso-fuckin-lutely love it. I know I'm easy with the 4s & 5s , but I wouldn't have a flinch of unease giving this one a big fat 5.

Mindy, who forgives you for not being gay

Thanks, minsue. The poem is amusing but not "good" poetry. Yes, I've gotten that uppity about poetry. lol Maybe I can rewrite it as a terzanelle...

 

[WickedEve]

By the way, Mindy. I actually tried being gay for a day. I had this friend who thought it would be totally righteous if I had a bi encounter. So, I started out slowly with the porn. But then I got all distracted by those skinny, young things and called them bitches! Where are the plump, over 30 lesbians with kids?

Then I tried the fantasy. When the guy showed up I told him no cocks allowed. But he started swinging it back and forth. It was hypnotic and funny. Next thing I know, I'm on my knees, and he's smiling, and she's calling me a bitch. Yes, a bitch. She storms out of my fantasy--like totally leaves my brain and wiggles out through my ear.

I've been so traumatized by all this that I can't even touch my own tits or ass. Oh, I still touch my pussy, though, but that's another poem.

 

[Tathagata]

By the way, Mindy. I actually tried being gay for a day. I had this friend who thought it would be totally righteous if I had a bi encounter. So, I started out slowly with the porn. But then I got all distracted by those skinny, young things and called them bitches! Where are the plump, over 30 lesbians with kids?

Then I tried the fantasy. When the guy showed up I told him no cocks allowed. But he started swinging it back and forth. It was hypnotic and funny. Next thing I know, I'm on my knees, and he's smiling, and she's calling me a bitch. Yes, a bitch. She storms out of my fantasy--like totally leaves my brain and wiggles out through my ear.

I've been so traumatized by all this that I can't even touch my own tits or ass. Oh, I still touch my pussy, though, but that's another poem.

sometimes i should really wait till i get home instead of reading this stuff in work and squirming for the rest of the day
I'll never learn...

 

[WickedEve]

sometimes i should really wait till i get home instead of reading this stuff in work and squirming for the rest of the day
I'll never learn...

Oh, God. You're reading this at work? lol

 

[Tathagata]

Oh, God. You're reading this at work? lol

ummmmmmmmm
yeah
lmao
and everyone wants to know why I'm so red
hehehe

 

[echoes_s]

damn echoes_s I was trying to keep this day going a little longer
now I am looking for a bear
and something warm


dry eyed grit
goddamn lost my train
looking for the phone

gimme gimme gimme one thing to write about
coast over rumble strip
waikes the hell out of me
puilling back in between the lines


I guess that is it

every night fight the darkness
it will not win
damn

fist in the air
tomorrow tomorrow I will defeat you

is there a re CURE for sleep
I wanna live on wake

but sun comes up anyway
and I wish I could just sleep
a
little
longer


inertia of existance

more more more I want more
of the same

echoe s pass the bear

lol, plenty to share, and if we run out, we can raid my daughter's room

 

[Angeline]

bones creak and groan
aged splintered house
as the earth shifts
and mumbles burdens
laid heavy upon land

mind sighs weary
scattered thoughts float
upside down
and no energy to catch
and make sense
of what could be said

droop and wilt,
craving steamed bath
yet fear of dream
within cooling waters
and water mouth high
sinking under
to sputter
perhaps

and a sigh
long, drawn until breath is thin
and lungs emptied
collapsing first
to refill for another day
for all to replay
a different way

the night calls me
and time attuned
whistles softly
it is now
pillows, teddy bear
and dark room
tucked in a warm bed

I had a stuffed lion. His name was Ringo.

 

[Angeline]

I wish my name was Ted
and I was one of the pretty people
with pretty friends
who laugh about petty things with perfect pretty smiles
I want to be Ted and be one of the pretty people
just for a while
I wish my name was Ted

It never ends, does it?

 

[Tathagata]

Re: Mo Better Motown

Baby everything is
all right
uptight
because the way
you do the things
you do, I can't help myself.

Baby love, ain't nothin
like the real thing,
and for once in my life,
ain't too proud to beg.

I want you. Love is
like a heat wave,
an itchin in my heart,
a ball of confusion.

Mercy, mercy me!

Oh Fingertips.
Part 1. Part 2. Reach out.
I'll be there.
Signed. Sealed. Delivered.

I'm yours.

Nice
( you may have copywrite issues if you ever publish it lol)
well done and clever

 

[Angeline]

Re: Re: Mo Better Motown

Nice
( you may have copywrite issues if you ever publish it lol)
well done and clever

Thank you! I knew it was a throwaway because of copyright--but it was great fun thinking it up and remembering the songs!

 

[Guest]

Re: Re: Re: Mo Better Motown

Thank you! I knew it was a throwaway because of copyright--but it was great fun thinking it up and remembering the songs!

Did you get some feathered help?

 

[SeattleRain]

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[SeattleRain]

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[SeattleRain]

 

[Tathagata]

Re: monotony

There is an emerald suffocation
overwhelming my valley.

I rotate in the green
to the creak and swing.

She's to and fro,
creak
and all is green.

Train whistle lulls,
endless track, creak
and green beside the rails.

There is an emerald suffocation.

Sounds like kudzu (sp)


Nice work

 

[WickedEve]

Re: Re: monotony

Sounds like kudzu (sp)


Nice work

In in VA and I don't think I've seen any around here. I know when I get into NC I see lots of it on the banks. I love the way it looks. I have a kudzu poem somewhere... I'll have to uproot it from my computer.

 

[WickedEve]

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[annaswirls]

Re: untitled

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[WickedEve]

Re: Re: untitled

Presuming
she must have taken on
first person poetic
she must have meant "she"
not "I"

who would not tell this her
The her that she had pretty following behind
like a bridal trian and veil
pretty headlights beam through fog
pretty surrounds every nail cell follicle?


we all wear a sexual price tag
some priced so low what a fucking bargain
the bastard's got a little extra change in pocket
to shop around some more...
spread that wealth around


and I have sold myself so cheaply
the cart and bags seemed like such a wonderful option
against shelf and dusted neighbors

reduced reduced reduced what a fucking bargain!
hop right in my darling
buy one get one free?

and perfection
surely this was said in jest
who would dare presume their molding
could better perfect what time and strength
have molded on their own.

someone explain this to me, please
do not presume to have answers
just questions, questions

who would dare presume
experiences lines
and self creation
could be improved upon
by a man?

A Man?
A Plan?
A Tan?

Stop sucking up inspiration from "her" misery.

 

[WickedEve]

( glad you broke the ice anna)




my dream lover
is not tanned and toned
is not stacked and sculpted
she's not airbrushed and hairless
pre lubed and waiting
begging for anal and facials
subservient and clueless
barefoot in the kitchen

You may be the perfect man! lol

 

[Tathagata]

You may be the perfect man! lol

with age comes wisdom
; )

 

[annaswirls]

Re: Re: Re: untitled

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[annaswirls]

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